theHumps

Great job playing the drums, don't hold back hitting them, lol!

The song has a bit of an orchestral feel with banging rock drums, interesting combination and idea.

Wayne

Wow, that's you on the sax? Fantastic man! CinCoCent said Jazz Hop, this has an urban flair to it with a jazz touch, mushroom jazz/acid jazz feel. Well recorded and mixed, interesting track, lots to listen to.

Wayne

Cool idea. I like the vocals, i have no idea what she is singing about but the feel of the singing works well with the music. I would cut the compression or limiter a bit to give the instruments a little more breathing room in the mix, they are all at the same level and competing a bit, compression will do that. I do like the idea, ending was cool too.

Wayne

Cool reggae feel and great lyrics. You captured the feel of the song and all the effects and soundbites the original offers. I like the personal touches you added too! Drop me a link in your response to one of your vids, thanks!

Cheers!! You are keeping me happy!

Wayne

Minimal but gets an idea across. I like it. Sometimes I feel less is more and this sets a mood that's chilled out and positive. Cool man!

Wayne

Cool intro, banging beat and in your face mix! I have no complaints except I can't sit still, my head is bobbing, my shoulders are moving front to back and my knees are hurting from bouncing around like a pogo stick.

Whew, I am exhausted after this! lol

Well done man!

Wayne

Very cool! I like the music, chilled out with awesome keys. The vocals are recorded well and sit in the mix great. The lyrics are neat, like you're talking to me telling me a story, natural delivery. Well done man!

Wayne

Once again I am enjoying your upload! I like the vocals, clear in the mix. The song feels positive, I can't understand the language but I think I get the message. Well done!

Wayne

You are one of the big talents here, this shows why.

I do music/lyrics that please me and make me happy. I let it happen as the song dictates and I get a huge rush out of it. It's like meditation, I don't force it and therefore I enjoy it and so it comes from the heart. You are so talented, just do it for yourself and it will happen much easier and with less stress. Great job Patricia!

Wayne

Feels like I'm back in 1979, rollerskating and listening to hits of the day. This has the upbeat feel of the Bee Gees music from that time and a lot of the r n b and disco music then too. nice production, big sound!

Wayne

Hey Leon, how's things? Being safe I hope.

This one really touches the heartstrings and plucks at the deep consciousness within all of us. I think I read that off a Hallmark card once, he. So pretty and delicate at times. The piano is wonderful. Thanks for the trip I just went on!

Wayne

First I must mention the description made me laugh. The bass is cool, not overwhelming but punchy and deep. Minimal approach, lots of sound bites. Interesting for sure. Worth another round, I mean listen.

Wayne

The keys are just awesome! So is the track actually, he. To me the track has a a jazz and rnb feel to it with spoken word over it. Certainly it's creatively put together, not something I could ever think of, that's for sure.

I tip my cap to all involved!

Cheers!

Wayne

Well done! It's pop and I've always liked pop music. Good singing, neat song, catchy. Even though I don't understand the words, the feeling is there and so is the emotion, you conveyed your message to me clearly.

Wayne

This is good man! Kinda folk rock in nature but I think rock is good. I'll drink to this song! Spontaneity can bring out the best songs in my opinion, whether you remember recording them or not, he.

Wayne

Neat track Doc, the vox surprised me, a lower ranged male voice wasn't what I was expecting but it works fine. I like the intro. Plenty of cool bits, synths, percussion and the gits are well played.

Makes me feel like I'm back in the 70's. To me it sounds like a song that should be in one of the Rocky movies or a film from that time period.

Cheers!

Wayne

I think it's decent all around. The song has a certain feel and mood that you captured, a bit sad, dark, mysterious, almost a longing for something. I wouldn't worry about uploading your vocals in English, the language you feel comfortable singing is fine to upload here. I think the English singing was really good, better than some who speak english on the site, ha!

Wayne

Freekin' cool guys! Great musical buiscit. The git at the beginning has a Pistol's feel to it. You won't hear any complaints from me if you keep up the trend. Mix is great, you guys brought your own thang to the paartay! I ate the lead up!

Did you ever hear the Clash doing early hip hop, early 80's. Mostly inspired by Mic, they were working with an early NYC rapper called Futura 2000. I ran upon this back in the day but now that you tube has mostly everything on it, it's a great resource to turn people on to some cool stuff.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gR9K2ISCUqg

Wayne

Whoa! This is great! Used to listen to a reggae radio show every day home from work. They played all offshoot genres of reggae with tracks similar to this. Great vocal track, great production on the track on all levels. Very cool!

Wayne

Loved it Patricia! This is quite the production and I love the humor in it. The orchestration really sets this one apart from other songs I hear on the loop.

Bow down to the king? Not!

Well done!

Wayne

I really like the feel of the song, reminds me of late 80's new wave bands. I think the vocals could use a little bit more reverb to have them sit in the mix a little better, they stand out rather than sit in the mix. Just my opinion. Other than that I think you have something really good here!

Wayne

This is a cool listen and the mix is great! Nice soundscape, makes my mind wander. World music/new age music is how I would describe this. It brings the listener on a journey which is what you want the listener to experience.

Well done and good to see a name from yesteryear on the loop!

Wayne

Joe mentioned Madonna and I agree. Sounds like it could fit on the Ray of Light album. Keep up the good work despite your injury.

Wayne

Love the skip beat, wish it changed up a little bit in subtle ways like adjust the hi hat hits to break them up a bit, little things. Other than that i dig the idea. The guitars are very cool, sound great in the mix. The heavily fx part at the end was fantastic! Great producing, well done!

Wayne

Cool feeling to this one!

I will suggest to listen to Drunken Angel by Lucinda Williams for inspiration for the vox. This song is quite like that one in the feeling of it, structure, instruments.... but her vocals are what i want to stress. Plus the story of Blaze Foley is sad.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cckroKLPsqg

Mix needs some work but the idea is great! Good luck finishing it up.

Wayne