Hey mate OMG WOW!......I was transported totally,beautiful work my friend!....a blend of East and West meets Detlef Bongartz...fantastic guitar playing,takes me on an Elephant ride through the jungle under a crimson sky...Bollywood needs you man!..I love this!!!!.....(I have been taking a break from music,but I am back now!)...superb work as only Zappo can make..I love the dark dreamy ending!..one of my favourite tracks of all time!!!! :) your friend Dave
Hey Mate ( COMET )
I ride next to you on the other elephants, ... towards the sun
Our path is the same, but still far away.
But at some point we will arrive together.
You know man listening to this reminds me of ripple tank experiments (which I did in physics class)there's heaps of reflections and bouncing incidents..hypnotic to a certain degree....I wonder what I would have thought if I heard it way back then,probably would have corrupted my yet to be bent brain! lol...cheers mate Dave
Damn bass kick nearly blew my head clean off! lol...Hey Spiv,this is really really cool man!..I love the merger of the postulating quasi angst vocals ala Talking Heads with some post industrial melting electro grunge grooving...it all adds up to a happening thang!..definitely off the mainstream grid which makes it all the more interesting..if those are your vocals,I'm totally blown away!!!diamond in the rough because it is rough and real!...you could make a hit with that stuff man!....better than good this is going places!
cheers Dave
Hey, I'm honoured to receive such a positive review from you! To be compared to Talking Heads is just awesome! Yes they are my vocals, and I know they're not perfect, but I'll keep em. I really appreciate your support!
Hey Bill....man this is way way Epic!!!!..totally in your face guitar God frenzy,whoa!...I love those arpeggios,the depth,the shred factor,the hair wind machine set on 11!..but what I like best is the controlled and calculated professionalism that you bring to the table,there's maximum expression going on and superb technique all honed to blow your mind (which it has)..the whole piece drips of focused energy building to a multi layered crescendo,not only would this rock any audience but the video game industry has deep pockets that undoubtedly will be filling yours at some point!....your like a musical Djin man there's a whirlwind inside you..(I was going to say your a guitar superhero,but the thought of you playing with your underwear over your pants put me off! lol)...awesomeness as only Bilbozo can!
Hey mate,super song!!..there's no denying Pete is an awesome talent,he just projects himself totally and on a truly pro level..I really dig this song,the music is spot on and I can appreciate how you've put the vocals out front as they should be....this is no criticism but I also feel the instrumentation is if anything a little too much in the background,because Pete's voice is so well annunciated and clear I'd opt for a thicker mix with the music,he's going to cut through no problems....great talent from both of you!..cheers Dave
thanks for listening and for the kind words. Actually this was the big question regarding levels, and I did hesitate a lot. I didn't want the overall mix to sound muddy, and to be honest, I should have had a break during the mixing process, to work with fresh ears... But after two weeks without making music, frustration has been stronger than me and I wanted to release this song badly. I suppose you're totally right, and I'll definitely have to re-do the mixing...
Again thanks for the kind works and good advice.
Peace.
Hey SJ....this is great!..love the huge sound stage present throughout,piano and vocals work so well together....with a track like this where space is at a premium it would be very easy to add lots of extra elements,which I might add could overwhelm the ambience you've already created....however if viewed as an audio drawing where the primary consideration is keeping things in perspective,adding things like electronic transients,strings,percussives etc can be incorporated successfully as long as they remain behind the reverb model you've created and move in conjunction with subtle volume changes...less is more here like a ballet stag...excellent work so far! cheers Dave
Wow, one of Loopermans finest musicians listening and actually liking! May I kiss your feet? Hey don't run away!
Well, I also thought about that adding stuff maybe would ruin the hole song...at least the plane piano-voice-flute part. Maybe it's fine as it is? Less IS more. Often.
Besides, I still really don´t know what to add. It would be great with some real instrumentals, a guitar or what ever...which I don't have or play.
Need to take a break from this and come back later.
Detlef....I really am touched by this,a fantastic gesture and I'm totally humbled that you would dedicate a track to me!...awww shucks I'm embarrassed!.haha..Since I became a member at Looperman I've met some fantastic musicians,and none more so than yourself..not only do you project your whole personality into your music but you have this veritable prescient ability to expand upon a theme and bring the most organic melodies and musical focus to bear.....What a great track!!!..super funky with that unmistakeable Zappo flair and whimsy..I am very fortunate to have you as a musical ally and even more so as a friend!..tomorrow morning I am actually buying a new (second hand)guitar!a G&L Legacy..I will call it Zappo! lol...together we rock on into the centre of the galaxy brother!..cheers Dave :)
This works well,the beat is very well integrated...a key change here or there would be nice but it delivers on all fronts and has good continuity...vocals would be killer if they can match the mood...cheers
Man this has a lot of the iconic 60's vibes running through it,almost like stepping out of a Greyhound onto Haight Ashbury (not that I've done that,just years of American indoctrination!lol)...great song...at the start I thought this isn't pop it's more folky,but it's actually
Cheers for the review planetjazzbass. Always appreciate good unfinished comments from the masters lol. We just did this for fun and we made it up as we went along never knowing how it would turn out. 60s vibe is ok. Not sure what to call it. It's ok I guess. It would be an album filler for a famous e band I figure. The mastering ##### , I will get round to that eventually lol. Thanks for your comment mate. I will go to the next part now hahahah.
Hey mate......very cool Jazz piece my friend,moody,dark but also with a whimsical hint of life's imponderable questions,not unlike the persona of Montgomery Clift himself,a great actor...I loved all the films you mentioned and the era of 50's and 60's...nice tone on your guitar playing,Detlef Burrell! haha.....listening to this piece has put me in a good mood and let my mind drift..cheers mate Dave :)
Nice mix man!...apart from the driving quality of this track (which is cool!) it's got heaps of space to manoeuvre and isn't top heavy,a great blend of guitar friction and rhythmic thud factor....definitely presents with a contemporary feel as well,which is important (you wouldn't want to be carbon dated like I am! lol)..cool stuff!..cheers Dave :)
Hey Dave, thanx for taking the time to listen man, really appreciate that!! This was made for a video, so kinda of sounds weird to me without it. I think we come from a similar era and if I had your talent, you could carbon date me and wrap me up for Christmas!!
Hey Richie good to see you man!...nice sounds mate!,forget all that housey mousey ##### (I mean the genre tag,I don't want to upset any house fans!)...your playing fusion here 100% plain and simple..a muso always plays his age there's no escaping it..from the tight punchy bassline,to that lovely swirling lead progression it's pure jazz rock(fusion)...now that we've got that acorn out of the way I can review it (lol)...What I really dig about this piece is the space available and room to extemporise freely notwithstanding the early phase in it's construction..I'd be inclined to further expand your dark 'synth' side and add an electronically styled counter melody throughout,everything else is already there...it's cool now and will be an absolute cracker I'm certain!...cheers Dave :)
Good to hear from you and thanks for the comments. I've tried to keep the track skinny clean and a bit "precise" if that makes sense. Yes, fusion seems to be a common thread of the comments posted so I'm happy with that.
It's work in progress and your suggestions on expanding some electronic counter melodies will work well. Thanks also for noting the space available which of course I will resist filling up. The sax player in the band has a copy of the track and I hope to get him around sometime and see what he comes up with. Could be interesting!
Anyway I think this kind of things is right up your street so maybe next track we should have try at doing something together? What do you think?
Hi Twanna..Great,great,great tune!...Wow,talk about a here and now huge sound,it's awesome!....Allen has a superb touch,that guy can really play and his work here is no exception,an excellent solo!.I love those audio excerpts from Ike,it gives the whole piece a profound provenance that so many people who grew up with Ike's music can relate to....It must be very emotional for you to undertake a work of this nature and when I'm listening to it I can hear Ike's musical legacy flowing strong and true....There is undoubtedly thousands upon thousands of fans of his that would dearly love to hear this tune,maybe youtube is the answer,I don't know...what I do know is your an exceptional and very special talent!!
Dave, my many apologies for not getting back to you sooner. There is so much going on and time got away from me.
Your comments touched my heart. You also caught what was my intent in composing this track...to let those who love and appreciate my father's contribution to music he him speak as to what and who he was. To be his voice...to keep him relevant...to keep him alive in the hearts of those who love him for who he was and for those who appreciate his music.
Heya mate...Oh! I love this man!!...such a sweet sound,so bright and breezy,so full of good vibes...there's something about an acoustic steel string that just sings,the timbre is open and full of chiming resonance...and you have to really play the instrument well to coax out this innate charm (no hiding within a wall of sustain as many players do)...I don't think there's anyone that does as good a job of incorporating Steve's horns into a composition as you do,it's so totally seamless it's mind blowing..The production side of the coin is as polished as the playing,I have no doubt that if you ensconced yourself in a top line recording studio the incumbent engineer would be twiddling his thumbs most of the time and not dials!(lol)..Super work Bill!..totally downloading this for the car stereo.
cheers Dave :)
Hey 12 String...great chilled out groove happening here man,pretty blissed out vibe all the way through,with some very tasty guitar as well!...Ableton is my DAW of choice and I love it..the arrangement view is where an old school muso like yourself will find his true home,the linear aspect of it is just fantastic and you can see your whole track mapped out with a plethora of control options....I won't go into specifics obviously,session view is cool as well..a lot of people only use that....anyway great to see another Ableton fan on the Loop! cheers Dave
Wow, coming from you I feel well praised indeed. I agree Ableton is great but hard to learn for an old timer like me lol. Love all the controls and instruments though. The Amp section is great. Midi is great. The loops section is something completely new to me but is a complete blast being able to put in a loop and just move it about with other loops and just create a completely new sound. Having said that it's not my music. But still Amazing! I still like just jamming along to a drum beat though with my guitar and keyboard. I am going to try harder to record a loop of my guitar and keyboard twiddly bits even though it messes up my train of thought and stops the flow of music and see what comes up. You got the old school bit right LOL hahahah
When it's all said and done it comes down to realness in the end and I'm finding a lot of that here,a refreshing break from the façade and ego overload too often engaged in contemporary music,very well recorded with a superb mix and natural timbre throughout....excellent work!
cheers Dave
It's true, mainstream music seems to be over saturated with ego and garbage lately... ain't nobody got time for that! Thank you for your thoughts Dave!
Cheers!
Hey Jeff..sounds cool man,I like the percussive elements as they hang well,the bass sounds a little out there and harsh at times but all in all the ambience is very good...Yuri Gagarin was actually assassinated by sabotage to his plane because he spoke out against competing factions within the Russian space program,Russian history is filled with these incidents,he was a great man undoubtedly...cheers Dave :)
I really appreciate the technical, musical and historical way in your comment. All in. As your incredible "loop" : so many time for a loop, how many tracks inside, what a title...
I thank you so much for all what you share, you keep it real Dave!
Just a detail : the real track's title is "Yuri". It's not possible to create a title under five characters here so you can listen or download the wave version whith the real name here :
Hey there Twanna...Whoa! this is some incredible sound you've got happening,it's huge!..talk about presence,what a fantastic vocal performance on top of a great groove with excellent song construction!...this is totally epic I don't know how you do it(well I do,but I can't do it! lol)...you really are a special talent,I'm amazed your not being signed for your own television show (maybe you are!)..I just don't understand the entertainment industry these days,there's heaps of people swanning around the hit parades that don't have half your abilities..amazing performance Twanna!..Encore!
cheers Dave :)
I so appreciate for your comment, Dave. You are one of "The Loop's" finest musicians and your critiques are heartfelt!! I was so inspired to compose a song to convey that "Epic" event, The Passion of Christ. This is what moves and directs my life.
Hey mate very cool track!...I really dig the orchestration you've infused into this composition,metal songs by their very character are somewhat heavy(lol)but you've segued superbly into the main thrust of the guitar riff with cinematic zeal and aplomb...I can imagine this work as the first stanza in a huge cinematic saga that would blow people's minds or just as easily be incorporated into gaming audio (with the same result)..great work on all fronts!
cheers Dave
I think when you can bring vision to your music you've actually reached the starting point of what it's really all about,it then transforms into storytelling.
I part company with my long time creative muse Salavador Dali here for his abhorrence of folk (and jazz) music,no doubt founded on a misconception that these forms represented an unsophisticated and anachronistic section of society,nothing could be further from the truth...all the culture of the world has at it's heart the voice and memories of the people and nowhere is this more personified than in folk music,and this composition is a superb example.....Such a beautiful song that transports the listener to a multitude of dimensions,you just don't get that everyday,it's a rare thing...I'm amazed,astounded..dare I say dumbfounded!..Now if Salvador had his head screwed on right he might comment.."This song is autobetrothed by it's own chastity".
To Janis and Ed..I salute you!
cheers Dave :)
I'm always amazed by your clever, deeply thought and interesting comments, Dave ... !
I agree with what you say about this misconception about folk music and the fact that folklore is the people's ancestral oral tradition, culture and rituals . Some people look down on folk music considering it as too "rustic", and tend to forget that each musical style has its origins in a previous one, just like blues was born after slaves work songs for instance .
As Ed's music's so pure and delicate, I felt I could sing about tenderness, nostalgia, nature and memories .
I'm very much honoured by your words, Dave and thank you warmly for the time you spent commenting on this song . What pleases my friends, fills my heart with bliss and I'm indeed very glad Ed and you all liked it .
cu around,
My friendliest thoughts,
Janis :)
Man...your like this big frog (not a Frenchman!lol)sitting in this musical pond where you are the King,and all the other animals and insects living there have to march past(or swim) and pay tribute to you..(I am just a fly on the wall,haha)....it's always a great pleasure listening to your music Detlef,mature sophisticated and always #####,true fusion!..young people today just haven't absorbed enough musical history and influences to be able to produce material like this,your musical palette has gestated to a point where only the finest distilled material is released....long live the KING!
cheers Dave :)
Hi Jeff..nice fluid track man,I'm not sure if it's dubstep,sounds more like prog rock but hey what's in a genre tag if the tracks good...glad to see someone sticking up for the Loop section..keep up the good work!
cheers Dave
Ho ho! A comment by you? I'm really proud of that.
You're right : it's not a dubstep. I can't found what the style is, so i think to my self "put it in the dubstep style, so a lot of young people will can listen a good beat whithout any cliks and digital distortion and you'll get downloads and listenings" ha ha ha!
So i forgot to tell you i recently used your loops too, a very strange voice loop for this track :
Hey mate..now this is very very cool indeed!!...a totally different slant on a classic(I've always been a big Billy Idol fan,I mean who couldn't be moved by his pouting attitude infused rock! lol)..Mark really winds up on this one,(sounds like he bleached his hair,bought a half ton of chrome chain and a few skull tattoos in preparation!)haha..super sick bassline guaranteed to keep the house moving!..man you might have a club hit with this one!!!...bought a smile to my face and it ROCKS!
cheers Dave :)
thx for your comment dave...i appreciate that...
yes...im a big billy idol fan too...i always wanted to be like billy...lol...but the only thing i can do is make a weird lip like billy...lol...
yes...i think this song came out really good...
cheers...JW...
Superb intro to a real chillout session...I just love it when instruments become alive and speak through their musicians souls,this could be the segue to a much larger work I think...excellent on all counts!
cheers Dave :)
Thank you Dave, very kind words... It is truly a pleasure to be able to work with Bear/SBM! Having a blast trying new things and going places I have not traveled to before.
on DELHI by zappo
I ride next to you on the other elephants, ... towards the sun
Our path is the same, but still far away.
But at some point we will arrive together.
Thanks Friends
Zappo
on Pacino Life Ft Mo The General by CONEYISLANDRECORDS
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cheers Dave
on FOOLING WITH MADNESS - Bilbozo by Bilbozo
cheers Dave :)
on PeteJonTebar Doing the best I can by Soap
thanks for listening and for the kind words. Actually this was the big question regarding levels, and I did hesitate a lot. I didn't want the overall mix to sound muddy, and to be honest, I should have had a break during the mixing process, to work with fresh ears... But after two weeks without making music, frustration has been stronger than me and I wanted to release this song badly. I suppose you're totally right, and I'll definitely have to re-do the mixing...
Again thanks for the kind works and good advice.
Peace.
on Slightly remastered Piano ft Katie Bregman by SeriouslyJoking
Well, I also thought about that adding stuff maybe would ruin the hole song...at least the plane piano-voice-flute part. Maybe it's fine as it is? Less IS more. Often.
Besides, I still really don´t know what to add. It would be great with some real instrumentals, a guitar or what ever...which I don't have or play.
Need to take a break from this and come back later.
Thanks for the advice, Dave!
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Thanks Thanks Thanks.....
To this Comment
You know what is to do......
Zappo
on Runner by Darkreine
I also wanted to thank you for inspiring the Looperman Blues project. Not sure if you've heard it, so here it is: http://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/143435
Thanx again man.
Respect ~ Kenny
on Charle funk a doodle by RichieWinn
Good to hear from you and thanks for the comments. I've tried to keep the track skinny clean and a bit "precise" if that makes sense. Yes, fusion seems to be a common thread of the comments posted so I'm happy with that.
It's work in progress and your suggestions on expanding some electronic counter melodies will work well. Thanks also for noting the space available which of course I will resist filling up. The sax player in the band has a copy of the track and I hope to get him around sometime and see what he comes up with. Could be interesting!
Anyway I think this kind of things is right up your street so maybe next track we should have try at doing something together? What do you think?
Best
Richie
on Taking Back My Name by Twanna1
Dave
Your comments touched my heart. You also caught what was my intent in composing this track...to let those who love and appreciate my father's contribution to music he him speak as to what and who he was. To be his voice...to keep him relevant...to keep him alive in the hearts of those who love him for who he was and for those who appreciate his music.
God bless and keep doin' what you do:)
Twanna
on CUBAN SUNSET - BILBOZO by Bilbozo
cheers Dave :)
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cheers Dave
Cheers!
Bonnie
on Yuri goes far by JeffBock
I really appreciate the technical, musical and historical way in your comment. All in. As your incredible "loop" : so many time for a loop, how many tracks inside, what a title...
I thank you so much for all what you share, you keep it real Dave!
Just a detail : the real track's title is "Yuri". It's not possible to create a title under five characters here so you can listen or download the wave version whith the real name here :
https://soundcloud.com/jeffbock/yuri
Peace
Jeff
on But Love Would Not Let Me by Twanna1
cheers Dave :)
I pray all is well with you.
God bless,
Twanna
on Running Out Of Time by Executia
cheers Dave
on Aghalee-Tumbleweed-janis71 by janis71
I part company with my long time creative muse Salavador Dali here for his abhorrence of folk (and jazz) music,no doubt founded on a misconception that these forms represented an unsophisticated and anachronistic section of society,nothing could be further from the truth...all the culture of the world has at it's heart the voice and memories of the people and nowhere is this more personified than in folk music,and this composition is a superb example.....Such a beautiful song that transports the listener to a multitude of dimensions,you just don't get that everyday,it's a rare thing...I'm amazed,astounded..dare I say dumbfounded!..Now if Salvador had his head screwed on right he might comment.."This song is autobetrothed by it's own chastity".
To Janis and Ed..I salute you!
cheers Dave :)
I agree with what you say about this misconception about folk music and the fact that folklore is the people's ancestral oral tradition, culture and rituals . Some people look down on folk music considering it as too "rustic", and tend to forget that each musical style has its origins in a previous one, just like blues was born after slaves work songs for instance .
As Ed's music's so pure and delicate, I felt I could sing about tenderness, nostalgia, nature and memories .
I'm very much honoured by your words, Dave and thank you warmly for the time you spent commenting on this song . What pleases my friends, fills my heart with bliss and I'm indeed very glad Ed and you all liked it .
cu around,
My friendliest thoughts,
Janis :)
on SNOWBALL by zappo
cheers Dave :)
Thank you very much...
The next track goes to you lol ..
on Stock car party at the drive in by JeffBock
cheers Dave
Ho ho! A comment by you? I'm really proud of that.
You're right : it's not a dubstep. I can't found what the style is, so i think to my self "put it in the dubstep style, so a lot of young people will can listen a good beat whithout any cliks and digital distortion and you'll get downloads and listenings" ha ha ha!
So i forgot to tell you i recently used your loops too, a very strange voice loop for this track :
http://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/138795
You keep it real Dave, you're a jazzman and you rocks!
Peace
Jeff
on White Wedding - COVER - feat Mark Ratcliffe by JoyfulWAVE
cheers Dave :)
yes...im a big billy idol fan too...i always wanted to be like billy...lol...but the only thing i can do is make a weird lip like billy...lol...
yes...i think this song came out really good...
cheers...JW...
on Padded Ambition by bmarty24
cheers Dave :)
Peace
Marty