StephenPotter

Yea definately make the beginning a little shorter. Unfortunately and I do it to....alot of money making tracks have they're point made in the 1st 2 mins.
Thats said wicked little listen. Brought back the old skool trance loved up days for me, and wapped it into a lusheous moving melody.
Well Done indeed boyo

Stephen I agree this sounds like a good start. Never made any d&b but used to listen to enough back in the day. Sounds ripe for some crazy break to come in and a change up. There's always vox to give extra dimension. I read that you have someone on board so I look forward to hearing the finished article.

Back in the day I used to love PFM. Here are a couple of their tracks. Hope they can inspire u.

1) Danny's song (sampling Aphex Twin)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Bq5fmZ--TjA&feature=related

2) The Western Tune
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bYHE4HtWgTM

3) One and Only
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1d0zbjd71S0

This is a very good start... I love this kind of DnB. Many a night I would get out of my face listening to this kinda stuff .

I'm not the best when it comes to DnB (at all) and I've only ever made one track in this genre but I'd be willing to give it a try :)

I have a DnB track here which is a couple of years old now and I've learned a lot since then: https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/90912

So if you're interested email me man. ggardiner86 at aol dot com

Cool Stephen. I like the intro.. Not bad at all. I see potential in this. I like the filter on the drum loop and on the pad as well. Maybe layer the drums a bit. Or add in more drums for variety. Add in some more elements that compliment the bass and pad. Bring in the drop a bit heavier too. Maybe a sweep riser for the build up and drops. I'm sure somebody will contact you for a collab. I'm busy with projects at the moment otherwise I'd help ya out :) Good luck bro.. It's a good start!!!

Blume:)

This is really good Stephen. Liek u say it has a bit of everything in there but it all works. Love the organ! Great job.

Yeah glad to see you've grown alot man!
This is sick man for real!

Keep them comming homie

a gem - what a great setting for our friend Abner! much respect

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I def hear what yer saying about not wanting to overwrite the original work doc (I often will do the same thing, doca, docb, docc). Though what I end up doing is going with the doc that feels like its got the best groove (might consider following yer lead with posting the diff versions). And its kind of a shame that this track is so short, because it has such a sweet vibe to it (especially starting @ around 0:43 & 0:60 , my fav parts of this BTW). You plan on continuing work on this one? Lemme know if ya do mate. Def has potential. Lates!

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About the Vocoded stuff, you can bump 'em up by doubling/tripling the number of layers you have for them (ie, pan 1 100% left, middle centered, pan 3 100% right, & possibly bump up all by +3 on the mixer). And the FX are pretty nice. So is the stuttered piano. Beyond that, the only other thing I could suggest is maybe adding some distort to a copy of one of yer synths (to give it a faux Rock vibe, if ya wanna take this in a harder direction w/fiercer kicks, etc.). Anyways, cool stuff mate. Lates!

HEEY MAN I WAS BOUNCING TO THAT, and then it just stops lol...Good start so far man, liking it very much, let me know when u drop the full track i wanna hear it

keep it up

peace!

Wonderful track, my friend, the piece really kicks. Composition and production are very high end.

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John

Pretty cool my man!! Love the fusion of sounds!

15 years old ? im ready to hear ya in 5 years my dude

You've got a really good ear Ste...I absolutely love the whole atmosphere of this piece. Excellent arrangement that has led to a flawless fusing of the various genres.
A sophisticated track that I could imagine appearing at the opening credits in a film because it has that vibe.
Well done a definite fave :)

Elaine

At first, I didn't know what to make of it. When it there was more beats, I like it. The beat and melody was very nice. It has a little groove going. The vocals are not bad either, I think it's at the volume it should. It could be a louder if you want. Great job. Keep it up. :)

Hey Ste

Man another very nice piece, nice relaxing type of DnB, something that is not going to blow your ears, very nice ambient/chillout type of synths/pads, makes this piece a very relaxing and enjoyable listen, great beat patterns Ste, arrangement and the clarity are spot on here in this mix,really liking the vocal in this mate, excellent,would like this vocal in a trance, is that you on the vocal?? if so is it available to use?? another fav my friend...Peace n Respect...Estefano...

Hey Ste

mate liking the intro with the housy type of synth/pads at the intro, nice clean sounding beat, good beat pattern, this has a very much house sound and feel to me, great dubstep bass man, this is one very chillout type of piece, which is really appealing to me, very nice work indeed my friend, well done on this one, again very short Ste?? Oh well I absolutely enjoyed what I got to hear my friend, Fav'd...Peace n Respect...Estefano...

Nice! Could use some mastering though. I would be happy to do it for you as I have Tracks 3. Contact me if you are interested.

love this one, nice work ,thx for your review.

I like this track it is more of the softer ambient side to dnb so that is probably why i think this track was so good. it was well worth the time put into it with this version ") Kudos

This was very creative and very well produced.

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John

I would love to hear this with good vocals. Contact me when you get them on. I want to hear it. Fav.

The intro is amazing. Love the panned (and phased?) drum sounds and the pads are just gorgeous. One tiny bit of advice would be to add some reverb to those drums at the start..just a hint here or there because it sounds a bit dry until the pads really come in. The rest is just a lovely journey...I was a little apprehensive when I saw you've named it "extended vocal mix" thinking I'd hear you singing about love or sunsets or unicorns or whatever (nothing personal, I've just heard far too many electronic songs ruined by trite lyrics and weak singing), but you've used your voice more as an additional instrument and it works really, really well here.Can't really say much about the mastering because I'm listening to this on headphones, but it sounds fine to me.

Really good stuff, this. Love the whole vibe of this track...extremely soothing without ever being boring. Well done.

As the other have already said so often and so well, another great track, my friend.

Love the ride (but I may have gotten whiplash from banging my head to that bass, lol)

John

Nice song, good job on making it with only 4 tracks! The bass is great and i like all the dive bomb sounds, but the wobbles seem a tad offbeat at points. Its not too bad though. Like others have said i like how you've fused trance into there a bit as well. All in all great job!

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