StephenPotter

again nice intro m8.
the main synth line is overly loud and drowning out the rest of the tune,its nice just needs the levels sorting out on it.
is there a bassline for this? as its either too low or non exsistant.
mej

ez m8, nice intro.
id bring the panned out hats in a little closer to the center,
kick duznt really kick at all.
interesting stuff tho.

mmm you've done a good job ... it was great to listen to Continue in the spirit

start a bit boring it then works up to some good patterns synths and bass maybe turn those down slightly as the overall track seems to loud i think you should add something onto the intro and the rest just needs a bit of mastering but overall good effort and great track keep them coming bro

Hi, this track has certainly got a bit of a kick to it, which is balanced well with that melodic synth line and fx, cool upbeat tune !!an enjoyable listen, nice one, and also many thanks for taking the time to visit my page, cheers and best wishes faceless fx.

Brilliant work Stephen like the little ufo taking off effect,well mastered.You said it's repetitive but thats electronic music for you ,it's the subtle changes and effects which make the difference,one again great work.

Like the build at the 2 min mark. I like the whirly bubbly sounds personally.

GOOD track,man!
when everything starts to play together,then it is sick!
synth is great!
about intro
no matter what the intro a little longer,really then you can hardly wait what will happen when intro finish,impatience,
If you know what I mean!
NICE WORK!

9R

ooo imma likin' this one homie

the intro was a little borin'
but once you got more instruments
playing it was SICK

might want to introduce the hihats
earlier or another instrument earlier
just to give more meat to it
in the beginning but
that's just me preference

those synths were chillin'
great relaxed vibe to it
and the drum pattern was
varied and perfect
seems like you put some work
into those patterns

overall excellent job fam'!

keep it up

Much Respect from LA

I'm really digging the pad on this track. It has a 'sway' feel to it. With the added arp and wow. Very well done.

This shows you have definite talent for writing dance music man!! Keep at it..Some really great energy in this track and it had my head bobbin while listening to it. Keep up the good work man!!

Nice track with lots of energy. Great intro with those birds! Great pads too they suit well and they are nicely brought in. I'd add something at the end too to finish it nicely (like getting back to nature...). Good work!

nice track my lil friend keep bangin those tracks bro. PEACE.

Hey Steve

Mate this is good stuff, arrangement and clarity is first class, your one talented dude,Synths everything fitting so well together, great work my friend, mate I can see where you are at about the vocal, but in saying that I do like it as it is, but with vocal would take it to another place, looking forward to hearing version with vocals when you get some, this one is fav'd mate...Peace...Estefano...

This is ace, I like the fading you use, it's like it's getting clean and then dirty again, if you know what I mean. Really good, I think it's great even without vocals but then I like instrumental stuff soooo each to their own. Really enjoying it :)

Hey this track is right up my alley....I sing pretty much everything so it fits lol. I'm gonna hit this up tonight and send at the speed of light soon. This will be fun.

hey Stephen4705, thanks for stoppin' by and checking out my collab with jfw, one of the more interesting musicians on this site, check him out when you can..we also did a cinematic venture together that you might enjoy!...i like what you've done with this track, I can tell you are good at developing your melodic ideas and the track arrangement as a whole...nice sounds and textures, dig the synthy-piano like melodic line you keep coming back, helps to anchor the piece I think!..be back when I can to check you out again man..I'm in the middle of a lot of original tracks and remixes at the moment....:)

victormusic01x

here feedback,man!
when the track started playing, I thought no chance that this will be the dnb! lol

intro is great, beautiful structures, think that perhaps should do to be a bit longer track!
you can always upgrade!

9R

really sweet track. Great work with those synths. It really goes well together.

its good you did this in two hours i like the work you have put into this. but your levels are to high plus there is no solid drum beat to compliment the tune its all very hissy to me but i like your melodies and bass though its cool but in all truthfulness it sounds like it was made in two hours what i would suggest is take your time when making a tune cos it will end up sounding better in the long run 5-10 for effort and 7-10 for creativity 8-10 on the tune

hey stephen whats up man? i saw that you are a new producer so i thought you were worth a listen. nice work on this track bro feeling the groove and its got a nice vibe. i like the whole production. i saw your forum about your studio to lol. mine is such a pos. its just a mac on garageband. i have some old headphones with the speakers nearly blown out and a microphone that is really nice (250 bucks). i really dig this track anyways lol sorry i got sidetracked but nice work sir

Of all the tracks I listened to, I like this one the most, but it is neither classified as drum and bass or trance, so I couldn't really use it in your forum post, but really like all the envelopes and such that you use, really nice to groove on. Check out my remix of Dance With Me sometime.

It's hot. i use fl also. come check out my all originals. keep using creativity. one

Well done!

The fading synths at the beginning create a great tension.

The bass synths that kicks in at 1:39 though sounds a littly fuzzy. I would recommend you either less distort it or quiet it down just a litte. :)

Very nice! Awesome track! Love the Vocoder.