Nice, I dig anything dark. Perfect for Halloween, which actually isn't that far off now. Good mixture of percussion and the beat is pretty nice too. This a lil more electronic than hip hop but it that's okay. Could of used a lil more bass but it's still pretty good as is. great job, keep working bro peace
Thanks! I enjoyed making this. I don't plan to do anything further with this track, given that I didn't create it, only the piano version. However, if I miraculously receive permission to do so by the original creators, I may possibly do so.
Now we are talking, you see now a voice can be added or something
and whom evers working it, has room to move and can't really hurt
the cleanliness of the keys...
Strate up keys like this, it's a must out here boys will have your stuff
all jacked up... :-)
I'm glad you liked this. Perhaps a vocalist would strengthen this up. I'm curious to its possibilities, myself. Nevertheless, I greatly appreciate your words!
Nicely played my friend! I'm enjoying listening very much! Having just recently gotten a piano, it's been interesting to hear inspiring pieces with piano in them. Nice calming song for this dark rainy morning. Chill out is the perfect genre for this, and it's exactly what I need today. Keep doing what you're doing, because you've got much talent at your disposal! Fave!
I really enjoyed this track I made. If I could make a genre for it, it'd be called "Piano-pella." Acapella for piano only. It's just so soothing. I am glad you enjoyed this! I will keep pushing myself for better, man!
Hi mate, lovely piano piece here. You certainly have a talent. I checked out the video by Pentatonix it was excellent, I also loved their version of Happy its a must see!!
I listened the original and then went back to this one, you did a great job on getting the piano arranged to have such a close resemblance to the song ;)
I Like most piano songs and this sure is something I can appreciate ;)
Chill out is the proper genre for this I think.
The original is so amazing. I'm glad you can hear a resemblance. I also love the sound of pianos by themselves. I greatly appreciate your kind comment. Take care!
Nice piano chords. I love the piano as a stand alone instrument and this does it justice. I can't help thinking it would make a great trance track. The layering is great as well. If you could find an acapella to go over the top of it, that would be great.
FR
I'm happy you liked it! A trance track sounds great, if someone would work with me on it. I'm not sure I've ever attempted trance. Also, the original song was originally an A Capella track.
Great track...
Just mixed a touch too hot, mind you it's really not that bad that a drop of
about 2 to 6 db in volume or top end EQ...would drop it out of the distortion
range...I would go with volume...
The track is really nice, might as well hook this up right..
The bass would of been nice with a double bass? :)
Sax is interesting, sounds good though.
Feel like a ride symbal would be VERY fitting for those drums - follow or be a little off time. Would give it a little more character
Nice sounds man, keep it up :)
Diggin th intro lead. The notes were well composed as was the rest of this killer track. Killer flow with a mixed genre of trance, electronica, Rap flavoured influence mixed with chill and probably a few more genre working together. I would have like to have heard the lead come back but somehow you made it unnecassary which is pretty incredible as Alot of people rely on a pattern as the core to their tracks. I think the elec/guitar didnt kill but the pattern it played was correct maybe a different instrument no hate MADDD Respect Cuz Keep it Banging!
I appreciate it man! I apologize for the late reply. I enjoyed doing this track! It's so tight how all the instruments used came together like that. Much respect, yo!
Hi. Lots of good stuff here though quite a few problems too so hope you don't mind if I point them out.
Intro piano has quite a bit of noise on it. Not sure why that is. Maybe there's a synth underneath. If so, the main thing audible is the noise.
0:15-0:16 there's an awkward jump.
This is quite cinematic stuff. Sure, bit of an r'n'b beat and drum sound but I'd say it's quite cinematic otherwise.
Bass is very effective when it comes in. Very solid tone.
1:38 and the track iss getting deeper with that new synth wind instrument.
I've said it before so sort of feel slightly bad for saying it again but quite a few of your synth sounds really let the track down.
I'm sure this is just because you're working with all you've got. But your stuff would sound much better with better string/wind instrument samples.
I guess this means spending some money and I also suppose you're only young and are still very much learning and are only going to get better.
I say these things as hopefully helpful advice rather than just talking about what was good, which might leave you thinking these sounds are good enough when I don't think they are. That's not your fault and I assure you I used to use worse sounds. Until I got better ones and then went back and replaced those inferior sounds.
Hope that makes sense as I feel your compositional abilities would be better represented with better tools (sounds).
As always, I appreciate your wisdom and your critiquing. I will have the final project posted soon. Perhaps that'll be much better than this version here. Thanks!
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~Ookami
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and whom evers working it, has room to move and can't really hurt
the cleanliness of the keys...
Strate up keys like this, it's a must out here boys will have your stuff
all jacked up... :-)
Real nice piece of work My Man...Well Done..
~Ookami
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~Ookami
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~Ookami
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I Like most piano songs and this sure is something I can appreciate ;)
Chill out is the proper genre for this I think.
Thanks for sharing this with us golden ookami ;)
Take care
~Ookami
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FR
This is the original song here : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sp7PS_UN8Lo
I appreciate the comment!
~Ookami
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~Ookami
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Just mixed a touch too hot, mind you it's really not that bad that a drop of
about 2 to 6 db in volume or top end EQ...would drop it out of the distortion
range...I would go with volume...
The track is really nice, might as well hook this up right..
Peace...TG.
~Ookami
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~Ookami
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Sax is interesting, sounds good though.
Feel like a ride symbal would be VERY fitting for those drums - follow or be a little off time. Would give it a little more character
Nice sounds man, keep it up :)
~Ookami
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~GO
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Respect___Orlando
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Wayne :D
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Keep 'em coming!
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Intro piano has quite a bit of noise on it. Not sure why that is. Maybe there's a synth underneath. If so, the main thing audible is the noise.
0:15-0:16 there's an awkward jump.
This is quite cinematic stuff. Sure, bit of an r'n'b beat and drum sound but I'd say it's quite cinematic otherwise.
Bass is very effective when it comes in. Very solid tone.
1:38 and the track iss getting deeper with that new synth wind instrument.
I've said it before so sort of feel slightly bad for saying it again but quite a few of your synth sounds really let the track down.
I'm sure this is just because you're working with all you've got. But your stuff would sound much better with better string/wind instrument samples.
I guess this means spending some money and I also suppose you're only young and are still very much learning and are only going to get better.
I say these things as hopefully helpful advice rather than just talking about what was good, which might leave you thinking these sounds are good enough when I don't think they are. That's not your fault and I assure you I used to use worse sounds. Until I got better ones and then went back and replaced those inferior sounds.
Hope that makes sense as I feel your compositional abilities would be better represented with better tools (sounds).
~Ookami