GoldenOokami

very nice

muito bom

this is very sick

Excellent track.

Pure awesomeness man.

Very Nice

This GOES IN. Great job, I love the vibe!

Hi, 'i'm amateur singer in brazil and I love ur music, I can do a brazilian music lyrics with ur song?

A nice track indeed. Loved all the elements that has been used into it. Especialy the piano part. All the other elements were prety well balanced as well. Although i do detect some electronic elements to it. I think this song belongs more to the r&b section though. But yeah a nice track to listen to. And a job well done. Keep up the good work.

Dope!

Love the Keys in the beginning
Is that a Sample or your work ?

nice!!

OOH I like this! The pianos had me hooked and the rest just flowed along with the same vibe. I think I ascended to a different plane a little bit when the bass kicked in.

skills brother,pure skills

Hi, GoldenOokami. This is a very promising track. You've clearly got good keyboard chops and you definitely know how to use the mod wheel and pitch bend well.

Since this is a "beta" version, I'm going to give you my two cents worth on the track. The guitar solo section was a lot better than I can do, but it still sounded like it was being played on a keyboard in many places.

Getting a convincing replication of a guitar using keyboard is really difficult. The best versions I've ever heard come from alternate controllers like the Roli Seaboard Rise. But I think they really hard to master.

I actually thought the guitar solo might be better using a synth patch, similar to the Steve Winwood sound. It really reminded me of his stuff.

My next favourite was the piano solo section. In both the guitar and piano solos, I thought you started out really nicely, but I felt that things started to wander off after a while in each solo. You do a good job of using silence in your solos, but I think more structure and a bit more discipline in your improvisation would really improve things even more. I'm a big believer in "less is more".

I'd also suggest that you experiment with some different bass patches. I thought the bass you used had too much attack transients and not enough sustain on the notes for this type of track. Or, perhaps layer in a second bass patch that doesn't have such a sharp attack and more sustain (e.g. a sampled acoustic bass patch). Or perhaps a synth-generated patch based on a sine wave setting on the OSC. I suspect that when you add vocals to the track, the bass will need to be toned down in any case, so that it isn't competing for attention with the vocals.

So, for what it's worth, those are my comments. I definitely enjoyed the track. Wish I could play jazz like that. I'd definitely be interested hearing it with vocals added.

Regards,

Eric

Much of my comments are subjective, of course.

your keyboard skills is a listening pleasure, would love to hear what lyrics you come up with for this work :0

Funky man!! I love the blues. Awesome work, can;t wait to hear those vocals on this track. Larry

GoldenOokami, this is going to be a great piece of work when you finish it. Already as a Beta you can tell that a lot of skill is all in it. Love the solo, the piano play, the bass. Please finish this and post it here for all to enjoy. Thanks

Ronabo

great song to listen to on a dim lit room with purple lights on a toasty yet cold lonely soothing winters night.

wow that was dope, really I loved it '-'

Awesome. I appreciate it.

From the very beggining i knew it was going to be an amazing song and yes it is!!!

loved the beat

nice!

Nice!