Tags : | RnB | 4.94 MB

Description : My first song of 2014. Only a demo. I'm still working finalizing and remastering. What do you all think? Enjoy~

Edit: 2014-09-15 Track is complete and fully corrected from demo. Enjoy!

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  1. promenade2239
    promenade2239 on Mon 15th Sep 2014 - 6 years ago

    hi,
    really nice work overall... but still I encourage you to find some better piano plugin - this could help this main modal progression of notes to correspond better with the bass, upper (and dark lower) strings, and saxophone melodic line in here. I am just suggest you to maybe experiment a bit, rework it and maybe to find some resonance of the piano progression... I mean some proper chords and bassline.
    I have an impression that those layers clash sometimes along the track and there is no proper let's say 'proper chord progression' in there.
    But still this is only my vision - the song sounds really nice so far and I am enjoying it a lot. Keep it up!
    Alex

    GoldenOokami
    Reply by GoldenOokami

    Alright. I'll keep that in mind for next time I work on a track like that. I appreciate it. I'll be on the lookout for some good/better quality pianos. Thanks again!

    ~Ookami

  2. Saul11
    Saul11 on Wed 14th May 2014 - 6 years ago

    especial

    GoldenOokami
    Reply by GoldenOokami

    Thanks!

    ~Ookami

  3. kbeatzinternational
    kbeatzinternational on Tue 11th Feb 2014 - 6 years ago

    Good stuff, keep doing what you do and be the best.

    GoldenOokami
    Reply by GoldenOokami

    You got it man! I appreciate your comment!

    ~Ookami

  4. Adrianh2o
    Adrianh2o on Mon 10th Feb 2014 - 6 years ago

    great piano and beat combination!

    GoldenOokami
    Reply by GoldenOokami

    I appreciate it! Thanks!

    ~Ookami

  5. oxxcar
    oxxcar on Mon 10th Feb 2014 - 6 years ago

    Nice.... I wana used to my demo reel.... i can?

    GoldenOokami
    Reply by GoldenOokami

    Sure! I'd like to see it when your finished too!

    ~Ookami

  6. abualkuzama
    abualkuzama on Fri 7th Feb 2014 - 6 years ago

    GOOOOOOOOOOOOD

    GoldenOokami
    Reply by GoldenOokami

    Thaaaaaaaaaaanks! :)

    ~Ookami

  7. soundsgoround
    soundsgoround on Wed 5th Feb 2014 - 6 years ago

    This is a fantastic progression. It makes me think of early Pelican City, a missing track from The Chilling Effect, perhaps.

    Keep 'em coming!

    GoldenOokami
    Reply by GoldenOokami

    I see! I appreciate your comment. I am looking forward to putting of my remastered version. It'll be soon. I hope it still has that same feel.

    ~Ookami

  8. bigrob2802
    bigrob2802 on Wed 5th Feb 2014 - 6 years ago

    very nice

    GoldenOokami
    Reply by GoldenOokami

    Thank you! I am in the process of remastering this soon. Can't wait!

    ~Ookami

  9. larrybarrow31
    larrybarrow31 on Tue 4th Feb 2014 - 6 years ago

    sounds pretty good my friend, keep at it. nice work

    GoldenOokami
    Reply by GoldenOokami

    Much appreciated. I will keep the music coming!

    ~Ookami

  10. mixasfight99
    mixasfight99 on Tue 4th Feb 2014 - 6 years ago

    very goog

    GoldenOokami
    Reply by GoldenOokami

    Thank you! I was impressed with it, being that it was just a demo.

    ~Ookami

  11. StaticNomad
    StaticNomad on Tue 4th Feb 2014 - 6 years ago

    Hi. Lots of good stuff here though quite a few problems too so hope you don't mind if I point them out.

    Intro piano has quite a bit of noise on it. Not sure why that is. Maybe there's a synth underneath. If so, the main thing audible is the noise.

    0:15-0:16 there's an awkward jump.

    This is quite cinematic stuff. Sure, bit of an r'n'b beat and drum sound but I'd say it's quite cinematic otherwise.

    Bass is very effective when it comes in. Very solid tone.

    1:38 and the track iss getting deeper with that new synth wind instrument.

    I've said it before so sort of feel slightly bad for saying it again but quite a few of your synth sounds really let the track down.

    I'm sure this is just because you're working with all you've got. But your stuff would sound much better with better string/wind instrument samples.

    I guess this means spending some money and I also suppose you're only young and are still very much learning and are only going to get better.

    I say these things as hopefully helpful advice rather than just talking about what was good, which might leave you thinking these sounds are good enough when I don't think they are. That's not your fault and I assure you I used to use worse sounds. Until I got better ones and then went back and replaced those inferior sounds.

    Hope that makes sense as I feel your compositional abilities would be better represented with better tools (sounds).

    GoldenOokami
    Reply by GoldenOokami

    As always, I appreciate your wisdom and your critiquing. I will have the final project posted soon. Perhaps that'll be much better than this version here. Thanks!

    ~Ookami

  12. BeatMaker4real
    BeatMaker4real on Tue 4th Feb 2014 - 6 years ago

    Great song you got in the works..nice melody and feel.

    GoldenOokami
    Reply by GoldenOokami

    Thanks! I will have the finalization posted soon. I appreciate it!

    ~Ookami

  13. larrywiggles1
    larrywiggles1 on Mon 3rd Feb 2014 - 6 years ago

    Great start and build, this is a really good base for what could be a great track, the drum is a bit too loud but can be easily sorted. As Danke says a vocals would make this an absolute winner.
    Best wishes,
    Mark/Larry!

    GoldenOokami
    Reply by GoldenOokami

    I greatly appreciate it man! I apologize for the late reply. I'll have the final version posted soon!

    ~Ookami

  14. danke
    danke on Mon 3rd Feb 2014 - 6 years ago

    It could be a super song...hope, you plan vocs on it, as I hear about the building of the song...already, there are places for vocs...female voice maybe?
    In this demo version there is a bit oveergaining (maybe the kick) in my headphones...
    Best, Danke

    GoldenOokami
    Reply by GoldenOokami

    I will absolutely keep that in mind, my friend! I appreciate your recommendations. Also, I shall fix the kick, for it does seem overbearing now that you mention it.

    ~Ookami

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