The Ghost Of King Robb (Version 2) - Rpcvlawson

10th Mar 2011 05:47 - 15 years ago
Description : This track is something I've been improving for a while. It's got a meaty guitar riff, and i took some advice from folks here on LPM.com and doubled the rhythm, split the channels, and added some effects. Let me know how this new version sounds to you!

Comments (4)

If you have time take a listen and give rpcvlawson some feedback.

goosemeyer
goosemeyer 12th Mar 2011 15:55 - 15 years ago
sounds much fuller without losing that Indie sound..Vast mix improvement on a great song!

I have to agree the vocal sounds a bit dry compared to the fuller mix, but you're def. heading in the right direction..

The Goose.
theHumps
theHumps 11th Mar 2011 11:44 - 15 years ago
Nice improvements, I like the echo on the guitar. I agree with John about adding some effects to the vocals like a little reverb, just to set it in the mix better. A itte reverb on the drums might sound good too. I'll admit that mixing is tough but you are getting there, sounds better, wel done!

Wayne
rpcvlawson
rpcvlawson replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thanks! I'll try more effects on the vocals / drums. I'm definitely still getting a feel for how to mix correctly. Lots of trial and error. I'm not very comfortable with my voice, so I've got some work to do there.
JohnBoutilier
JohnBoutilier 10th Mar 2011 17:44 - 15 years ago
Great track. Have you though about adding some effects to your voice to give it a bit of errieness to go alomg with the subject matter of the song??? Just a thought :-) Great guitar work, btw.

Faved and downloaded

John
rpcvlawson
rpcvlawson replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thanks for the comments on my guitar work. It's the first original song I've worked on, in terms of guitar, in 10 years. Far too long to be away from songcrafting with the guitar. So, your words are encouraging.
Vicen
Vicen 10th Mar 2011 07:12 - 15 years ago
Much better. It has gained in strength, clarity and picture. Well done.
rpcvlawson
rpcvlawson replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
That's for taking a second look. It's good to know I'm on the right track. Your time means a lot.

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