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29th Dec 2010 20:06 - 14 years ago
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Description : My first attempt at DubStep, let me know what you think.

Edit: dirtied up the bass alittle, i hope it helps; it dreops at about 1:30 please review, lemme know what to improve

Comments (8)

If you have time take a listen and give CalMatSar some feedback.

Mrbillionx
Mrbillionx 2nd Jan 2011 01:47 - 14 years ago
Is it me or does some of the sounds seem to be clipping.

I am used to a bit deeper bass myself.

seems most of the song stays the same so its nothing keeping me from cutting it off after 1 minute or so.

Yeah you can fine tune this and make it something special.
CalMatSar
CalMatSar replied Unknown
please.. say what you really mean! haha, a couple of people outside of the looperfam have said the same, that the first minute doesnt go anywhere, so trust me, its something that i wont let happen in the next one, thanks again for your honesty
Becca
Becca 1st Jan 2011 22:35 - 14 years ago
Hey, thought I would come check out ur track, after seeing ur post. This is a good attempt for first Dubstep track, I use FL 9 and and I just got the Massive Vst, which is amazing for making Dubstep bass and wobbles. I would be more than happy to send it to ya . Just email me and let me know :)
CalMatSar
CalMatSar replied Unknown
cheers for checking, im actually really surprised at how many people have post on the introducing thread and actually to time to listen, i am happy to be joining the 'looperfam' :D
MalvyDuo
MalvyDuo 1st Jan 2011 21:35 - 14 years ago
Yes imagine a song 4mintues in a row with no drops or anything . You cant get to half because it will get boring .

I can help you out at some points if your interested .
justing101
justing101 1st Jan 2011 20:25 - 14 years ago
nice bass it would sound better tho if you
had some drops, effects , buildups
anything you can but im not gonna tell you how to do it
youve got talent so use it =]
CalMatSar
CalMatSar replied Unknown
haha, thats fair, seems to be popular opinion that the drop seems dull, ill work on it, thank you for the talent comment.
Billboo
Billboo 1st Jan 2011 20:23 - 14 years ago
Hey I saw your thread and decided to give your track a listen. Its pretty good for your first dubstep track. The drop was kinda weak so I would advice using either a white noise build up (I think you're using FL, so try using the 3x osc to get a good white noise), or build up with the kicks or snare steadily speeding them up, or lastly use like a synth strings to build up in volume. Also the track needs work on the mastering, although this is usually pretty tough for anyone to get a great mastering it just takes time and practice to get better. Keep at it and I'll be looking out for your second track!

EDIT: Oh also I forgot to mention you should check out youtube for some good vocals, for example I used a quote from the movie Reefer Madness that I got from youtube in one of my tracks. Its just a good way to make your tracks sound better (personally I'm not a big fan of the FL vocal synth). Just try to find some quotes or acapellas.
CalMatSar
CalMatSar replied Unknown
cheers billboo, the tips to build up the drop are much appreciated, and i shall certainly be taking up the advice on the youtube vocals, thanks again for reviewing
MalvyDuo
MalvyDuo 1st Jan 2011 18:19 - 14 years ago
Welcome to looperman :)

So here we go
I think you need to EQ , Compress the kick . It feels like a Fruity Usual Kick . It could use a tail to make it sound better .
Your kick is killing other sounds . The bass isn't deep enough , I mean it doesn't have that woofer feel ( sry english isn't the best ) . Volumes needs adjusting .
Feels boring as it does need to bring some effects , buildups etc ...
But in the other hands vocal is done good . Fits into the song .

Global Sunrise
CalMatSar
CalMatSar replied Unknown
yea i was worried it was all a bit eJay lols, hopefully reading a few tutorials and forum tips will help me improve my technical ability, atm its all kind of experiment twiddling knobs until i get something similar to what i want :D
Spivkurl
Spivkurl 30th Dec 2010 16:45 - 14 years ago
I like the vocal clips! Very creative for your first try! I agree it could use more bass, but the bass you did include sounds good! Nice work!
CalMatSar
CalMatSar replied Unknown
many thanks, i have been having a quick play with it, tried to 'dirty' up the bass abit, give it a bit more punch, although ive not actually added bass, take a listen, see if it helps
DubZest
DubZest 30th Dec 2010 07:52 - 14 years ago
Its quite Good, But it needs more basses in it and they have to be louder (Unless you're going for a different effect)
CalMatSar
CalMatSar replied Unknown
Thanks for reviewing, and cheers for the feedback, ill see what i can do for ramping up the bass a bit for my second attempt.

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