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Tags : | Rock | 1.51 MB

Description : ok so on this one im looking for some constructive crit.. some major go ahead and rip on this please lol.. its a 3 way collab between me oasis duke and sierra,, which is starting to sound rather nice.. i just want some advice on the guitars and how to make them sound authentic and any other critisism too.. the harsher the better.. hope you enjoy :) ok so ive tweaked this to the best of my ability and only swish i could play the guitar.. huge props to all you rockers on here.. its soo hard to get an authentic sound.. Ok final tweak i made the vocals dry on this, took the chorus on the vox and kicked it to the curb. Hope it sounds better..

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  1. JohnBoutilier
    JohnBoutilier on Sun 13th Mar 2011 - 13 years ago

    this is great. Love the way the backing tracking fits with the content of the lyrics.

    Faved

    John

  2. CONEYISLANDRECORDS
    CONEYISLANDRECORDS on Tue 25th Jan 2011 - 13 years ago

    Pretty nice man. Im listening in headphones right now and notice the vocals are mainly in the left channel. I would center the vox and widen the stereo image to give it that full professional feeling. This song instantly stuck in my head. Wish it wouldnt have ended so abruptly,...was feeling it build up and was expecting it to really rock out.

    If you want I wouldnt mind getting the vox in there proper like for ya if you wanna send me the files. My e mail is if you are interested.

  3. JoeskeyMRSTAYHOOD
    JoeskeyMRSTAYHOOD on Wed 19th Jan 2011 - 13 years ago

    I Dont Listen 2 Rock Dat much But I Luv Da Song & Da Beat Is Just So Raw Keep It Up

    Sign Joeskey(MR STAYHOOD)

  4. TheWritersPoet41
    TheWritersPoet41 on Wed 12th Jan 2011 - 13 years ago

    Guys is a nice rock/country twist feelin this hard keep it up

  5. SoundHaven
    SoundHaven on Mon 20th Dec 2010 - 13 years ago

    This is a great tune...great vibe, I wouldnt change a thing, just maybe a little work on the panning.

  6. alividlife
    alividlife on Sat 18th Dec 2010 - 13 years ago

    Send me the midi and I will play the guitar...

    I would look at the stereo panning of the vocals, focus them... Try a mid/side converter and get them very center, but then! Try an place them over the top.

    JEssuzzz that's an awesome accapella.

    Feeeuck. lol

    BUt yea, the drums need to be way more forefront man, in my humble opnion. I would put them way forward in the mix, and then base everything else upon that.

    Just my opinion.

    MAN? Can I be honest with you?
    I really really like your production style, and this one is like... kinda shocking.. I LOVE IT, don't get me wrong.. I am like.. PROUD of you for doing this, but why does this sound soo off

    *BTW, I am listening with headphones.

    That being said... I want you to know this is amazing.
    This is great.

    ON them vocals, MONO
    Bring drums forefront and the focus, guitar is ok, but I would happily do this lol

    Bass is great.

    There's too much focus.. I like my stuff very mono and then do panning after the fact!!!
    BUT please know I do everything by headphones.

    Feeeeuck once again, because these lyrics....?

    IS she hitting someone?

    Let me treat some stuff?
    Hah..

    I love it man.
    Either way.
    This is music.

  7. ChrisMac456
    ChrisMac456 on Fri 3rd Dec 2010 - 13 years ago

    Man this sick Chriss, sick collab man, Vox, guitar, everything fits very nicely. Great Production my man.

    Peace,
    Chris Mac

    ChrissG
    Reply by ChrissG

    yo bro thanks for the review.

  8. Nosleeves
    Nosleeves on Mon 29th Nov 2010 - 13 years ago

    hey i like this man,it has that 90's rock feel to it,the vocals are okay(im not a vocal guy)but they seem to fix well with the track.

    just add a little more warmth to track and loudness to the guitar in a grunge type way LOL

    ChrissG
    Reply by ChrissG

    thanks for the review dude.. the vocals themselves were recorded on a mobile i think so its really hard to make em up to top notch standard, but i will get on the guitar.. thanks again matey

  9. Beyond
    Beyond on Mon 29th Nov 2010 - 13 years ago

    woo, whats this? .....Wooooo0000000ooooo GEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZ buddy this is nuts wow good job keep bangin out!

    ChrissG
    Reply by ChrissG

    wooooooooo lol thanks for the review dude.. really appreciate it man.. peace

  10. ImproveWithError
    ImproveWithError on Mon 29th Nov 2010 - 13 years ago

    Man dude this track is killer, the vocals are a little boxy sounding but other than that it is great. Good job with this one, going to fav it.

    ChrissG
    Reply by ChrissG

    hey man thanks for the review.. I think i gotta find some medium on the vocals.. i had too much chorus on them before and took it all off, i may need to tweak em again.. so thanks for the crit man glad you liked

  11. Vicen
    Vicen on Mon 29th Nov 2010 - 13 years ago

    Just want to say that the song is great. It's a tremendous pace with good vocals. I really liked.

    ChrissG
    Reply by ChrissG

    hey man thanks for the review on this one really apprciate the comments

  12. theHumps
    theHumps on Sat 27th Nov 2010 - 13 years ago

    Nothing can take the place of a well played guitar through an amp, it's a hard sound to reproduce electronically, imo. I liked the track, overall was cool and the vox was well done.

    You may want to try some effects like a simple delay, tremelo or reverb to make it have a sense of movement, it sounded a bit flat, some kind of modulation would be nice. You could also try doubling the track, pan them left and right and do a slightly different effect on each one. So many options really, it's an open track right now, anything is possible now!

    Organ might sound good on this. A little hihat in syncopation with the drum might work. Look forward to the finished song.

    Wayne

    ChrissG
    Reply by ChrissG

    thank you for the constructive i took what you said into consideration, and have adapted the song accordingly, will post it up later.. thanks again dude

  13. Manzet
    Manzet on Sat 27th Nov 2010 - 13 years ago

    Vocals Are Poppin Yo... U Have A Real Ear Catcher On Your Hands...

    Manzet

    ChrissG
    Reply by ChrissG

    thanks for the review dude

  14. CrashTheSystem
    CrashTheSystem on Sat 27th Nov 2010 - 13 years ago

    Not sure how to help you with the guitar sound, i struggle with it myself. However, this song is completely epic, and i loved every second of it. Fav'd and downloaded for sure man, great job once again and keep up the good work. -Gabe

    Peace Love Jesus!

    ChrissG
    Reply by ChrissG

    thanks for the fav n dl man glad you liked it

  15. AllenV
    AllenV on Sat 27th Nov 2010 - 13 years ago

    I love this song..I don't know anything about guitar programs but this is very good...A real guitar would rock this completely,it is a great tune with great vocals.

    Allen

    ChrissG
    Reply by ChrissG

    true that man id love to get a real guitar on this one.. hope to find some one soon, thanks for the review

  16. jfw
    jfw on Sat 27th Nov 2010 - 13 years ago

    Nice Collab guys! On the guitar sound - if you did this in Reason you could try adding a Sream 4 Distortion to it.

    Jamie.

    ChrissG
    Reply by ChrissG

    hey thanks for the review have revised this and added some subtle distortion thanks again bro

  17. DJSchmeeJ
    DJSchmeeJ on Sat 27th Nov 2010 - 13 years ago

    Is this 7/8. I like it! The guitar sounds a little Mr Roboto in spots, but the base of the track is excellent! I'd love to hear a real guitar (nothing compares to the real thing when it comes to a rock guitar) and better drums... but thats just because it would polish this superb track up to what it deserves!

    ChrissG
    Reply by ChrissG

    hey thanks for the review.. ive adapted the drums and tryied to tweak the guitars the best i could gonna post it back up later.. tell me whant you think peace

  18. yeshintae
    yeshintae on Fri 26th Nov 2010 - 13 years ago

    If Only me comp worked i would be on this collabo like
    well... me on a plate of dog meat! Some stringz would be nice C,
    bit you know imma stringz whore... lol

    Sounding mint so far keep it up brotha!

    Much Respect from LA

    ChrissG
    Reply by ChrissG

    thanks for the review dude hope to see you back on yahoo soon

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