Description : This is all me! I wrote my feelings and this came out!! I spent a total of two months correcting this beat!! Such a long time. Anyways this is my first debut track with vocals. Its from my second mixtape soon to be dropped! So look out for it! I curse a lot in this in order to show my hatred for the new hip-hop nowadays (mainstream, not underground), so I just want to warn people before they listen! I wanna thank Looperfam for giving me the strength and courage to do this. I want to thank two of my very special friends (Yesh and Philosofist) for inspiring to me to rap and make this track!
Thank you guys! And HAPPY TURKEY DAY!!!
Peace out!!

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  1. K1Clean
    K1Clean on Thu 21st Jul 2011 - 9 years ago

    Took me back "old school" is spot on. Appreciate how you didnt try to alienate your voice with reverb/effects. Thats what makes alot of people sound the same, in my book.
    I like the message. I agree with you, but feel theres room for everything. I feel music is what your heart feels at any moment, not your overall feel. So somedays im thinkin about money, so I spit money. My 2 cents anywho.
    Nice track, solid production. Likin that beat. Keep it movin

    Reply by SkribleJ

    thsts real talk homie. And thnx for checking me out.

  2. dragosh
    dragosh on Wed 20th Jul 2011 - 9 years ago

    cool really old school...reminds me of the old days....nice lyrics...great tune

    Reply by SkribleJ

    Thanx dragosh, glad u liked it.

  3. Samoi08
    Samoi08 on Thu 12th May 2011 - 9 years ago

    yo this is the s*** rite here, keep doing ur thing man, the world is yours


    Reply by SkribleJ

    Thanx man appreciate the support!

  4. DJSchmeeJ
    DJSchmeeJ on Tue 25th Jan 2011 - 10 years ago

    Hey Skrib great job fam! I love the old school vibe man.

    Reply by SkribleJ

    thnx a lot NuckinFUtz much appreciated!!

  5. Alcraine
    Alcraine on Fri 21st Jan 2011 - 10 years ago

    This is that Old school fire haha this inspired me to drop some vocals on some of my tracks The chorus is Beast

    Reply by SkribleJ

    Really?? I'm glad it helped you!

  6. JohnBoutilier
    JohnBoutilier on Wed 29th Dec 2010 - 10 years ago

    This is great. Great lyrics and vocals, great backing track and production. You have talent, my friend.


    All The Best Fopr The New Year


    Reply by SkribleJ

    Thnx John I appreciate ur review!! And Happy New Year to u as well!!

  7. StrikingDaggers
    StrikingDaggers on Wed 8th Dec 2010 - 10 years ago

    Awesome track SkribleJ. I pretty much agree with everthing that Nepaul said. The beat is sick man. The production overall sounds pretty good man. Nice work man.

    Reply by SkribleJ

    Honestly Shat, I love that you reviewed this. I wanted to get some veteran opinion on this and you provided it. I apprecite a lot homie. Thnx!

  8. BlumeChoon
    BlumeChoon on Thu 2nd Dec 2010 - 10 years ago

    Yup keep that old skool live... Good job on this.. Dope beat and a nice over all flow. I especially was digging the chorus. I've been recording my stepson lately on some of my tracks so I know the difficulty of mixing in the vocals at the right level and time. You got it bro... This place and da looperfam have given me mad inspiration so I feel you there... Keep it up man... sounds good...


    Reply by SkribleJ

    Yep Looperman is an outstanding community full of rich music and creative people. I literally yelled at the mic when i was doing the chorus! XD. But anyway, I want to thank you for droppin by and checkin this out! I really wanted to send out a message!

  9. PatternsofPerfection
    PatternsofPerfection on Sat 27th Nov 2010 - 10 years ago

    Nice one man, a little difficult to hear your vocals at times, but the message carries it through. Great flow man, keep it up. -Peace


    Reply by SkribleJ

    ahh yea, had a little trouble mixxing the vocals. but thnx for the compliment. Apprecite it. And that was my mission; to carry out a specific message. Anyways thnx for the review!

  10. Alen9R
    Alen9R on Thu 25th Nov 2010 - 10 years ago

    Damn SkribleJ .. OLD SKOOL 4LIFE!
    Great work man,you need to do this more often (vocals)!

    Keep up!

    Reply by SkribleJ

    Thnx so much for the review!! And thank u so much for the encouragement! I'll try and make more!!

  11. ChaseManhattan
    ChaseManhattan on Thu 25th Nov 2010 - 10 years ago

    likin this track sick

    Reply by SkribleJ

    thnx for the review chase!! Glad u like it!

  12. TheInfamousPat
    TheInfamousPat on Thu 25th Nov 2010 - 10 years ago

    Good track. Oldschool sh*t.

    Reply by SkribleJ

    word up thnx for the review bro!

  13. nepaul
    nepaul on Thu 25th Nov 2010 - 10 years ago

    SkribleJ doing it all on this one! Congratulations. Feels good don't it? Beats real nice and mosdef old school. Keep rapping and work on the motion of the flow and the vocal mix. Keeping hip hop alive, respect! -np-

    Reply by SkribleJ

    yep it was all me! My flow's a little off, but guess it'll be better with time. thnx for review Nepaul, great to hear from a veteran!

  14. MrMisery
    MrMisery on Thu 25th Nov 2010 - 10 years ago

    you should have added vocals a long time ago man!!! put me to shame ive been doing vocals on tracks since 2006 (admit metal/idustrial vocals mostly rather than rap which was this year) & you got it locked real tight track cool stuff man :-)

    Reply by SkribleJ

    nah chill, it was the first time i actually put some heart into the vocals. Ur prolly better, just work it u kno what i mean!? Anyways thnx for the review man!!

  15. Becca
    Becca on Thu 25th Nov 2010 - 10 years ago

    oooh weee , i like this. Luv that oldschool vibe. Great work on this, great vocals, just top notch production yo

    Reply by SkribleJ

    glad u like becca! thnx for the review!

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