Framed - 13MoreMemories

10th Nov 2010 22:10 - 15 years ago
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Description : A beat I just put together in a couple days, still has some things that don't seem that right within it so if you notice something please tell me. Also I will probably will be writing a verse to this but if any rappers or singers want on this give me a shout. Thank you and enjoy

Comments (3)

If you have time take a listen and give 13MoreMemories some feedback.

JohnBoutilier
JohnBoutilier 11th Apr 2011 02:07 - 15 years ago
I think the other two reviewers covered all the technical aspects so I'll address the visceral. I enjoyed it.

All The Best

John
ChrissG
ChrissG 10th Nov 2010 23:13 - 15 years ago
ok listening and reviewing here.. nice intro.. hats sound cool.. try some non tonal fx that might beef out the intro abit.. maybe some strings to compliment this would go nicely throughout.. like the guitar.. its just missing something in the mid to low freq area imo.. some complimentary sounds wouldnt go amiss.. it sounds quite singular, and needs beefiing out in the mid to low range.. nothing a few synths and strings cant take care of.. just a thought man.. hope this helps
13MoreMemories
13MoreMemories replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thanks for the advice, I will get working on it again as soon as possible and upload it.
deltaaah
deltaaah 10th Nov 2010 22:43 - 15 years ago
taking a serious listen to this one. hats sound cool. Is that kick panning left and right fast on every 2nd hit? I thought that was clipping for a second. I think the percussion should have a few more parts. Your parts are clearly defined, I just dont think they stand out very much because they are hitting with the percussion a lot. I'd suggest breaking the guitar instrument down and have it hit off beat so as to create a dynamic. I like your part at 4:16 the most because you pull a lot of the instruments out. Definitely want to redo the clap part. Id say just have it hit on the 2 and then have it roll at the end of the measure. Break each instrumental down. Its got a good feeling but needs a little more. Re upload and Ill check it out again!

checkmeout!
( d |eltaaah
13MoreMemories
13MoreMemories replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thanks for the feedback, I will try out what you said then reupload the track

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