Rest In Peace - Luckyfeatherstudios

14th Oct 2010 06:42 - 15 years ago
Description : heres a link to 5 star trinity's page
https://www.looperman.com/users/detail/431343


this track mean alot to me for many reasons. it was my first cloab, my first rap alone with out my band, its about death with people in my fams. track done with 5 star trinity. i am still hiting a snag with this. i am find hard times in makeing music and mixxing but dammit i am not giveing up

Comments (8)

If you have time take a listen and give Luckyfeatherstudios some feedback.

DJSchmeeJ
DJSchmeeJ 7th Nov 2010 12:09 - 15 years ago
Dude I'm going to be honest cause I like what you do, but kill the auto tune and don't use it ever again! J/K ... (but I hate those freakin things) You got a good voice when you flo, but the singing is ... not so much! You need to get a better mic/pop screen and focus on the straight flo that you have and do some accapellas on here. I bet you'd get a lot of downloads. I'd use them if it was nice and clean and smooth cause your voice sounds that good to me... use what ya got man, and foget about the American Idol auditions!
Luckyfeatherstudios
Luckyfeatherstudios replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
hahaha yea i hear ya man.. i am not much of a singer lol but i hear ya brah.. thanks for the kind words and such. i plan on hitting up your music and i am trying to make a pop filter untill i get paid haha.. but wat you say is truth man thanks bro
donmega
donmega 19th Oct 2010 15:26 - 15 years ago
mrbillionx is a hator,
he only likes rapper like marshell
or east coast hip hop, i like the track just because
i feel
the bigger pic stay kool dough boy
Luckyfeatherstudios
Luckyfeatherstudios replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
hahaha thanks man.. i am remakeing this song, same feel and vibe just trying to to get a cloab with a buddy of mine who is a pretty good rapper.. so a better one with up 12 bars on each verse.. dude you to kind thanks for the awesome reply and for hearing my music
Bioscape
Bioscape 17th Oct 2010 17:18 - 15 years ago
Very cool phrasing with your rap...poetic style. I think the chorus would sound alot better if it where just on point...the timing seemed off a little. Its a little off-key as well, just adjust those things and it'll sound alot better. Peace
Luckyfeatherstudios
Luckyfeatherstudios replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
wow means alot coming from some one with as much soul as you. yea i was takeing this track back to the studio.. just doing a few colabs right now. but yea thanks man.. for the advice.. when i reuplaod it.. ill hit you up so you can hear what you help me make wiff your words of advice man.. : ) thanks brah
BrokenScythe
BrokenScythe 16th Oct 2010 15:29 - 15 years ago
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theHumps
theHumps 16th Oct 2010 11:55 - 15 years ago
I can feel the emotion in the lyrics and can feel that you put a lot into this. You have a decent voice to do vocals. It needs some work but all my tracks do too. So work on it some more and keep learning as you go. It's a long process so don't get discouraged, keep it fun. Don't be afraid to move on to the next idea for a while and give a project a rest, then come back at it later, fresh new mind on it with a new perspective.

Way to go man!

Wayne
Luckyfeatherstudios
Luckyfeatherstudios replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
haha yea each time i hear it find something i think i need to fix. my biggest area. is learning how to rap to a beat. like when to rap and when not to.. then i need to learn how people base there raps. but thanks you. i have quite a long haul in fron of me if want to be as good as your or alot of members on this site, but i pray i will start to get more intune with beats and how to sync my voice with em, but yea man thanks again for the kindess and not lighting me on fire and throwing gasoline on meh haha..
Kmo
Kmo 16th Oct 2010 09:40 - 15 years ago
yo man i really luv the track and the beat kills. if u're really this beatmaker, there 4 i still gat more 2 learn man. the piano is well played and the flow is nice.
Luckyfeatherstudios
Luckyfeatherstudios replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
well sadly i only worte the word and rap'd umm. 5 star trinity is the one that played the music. he has pretty good mixing skills.. haha thanks for the listen man
Mrbillionx
Mrbillionx 16th Oct 2010 05:59 - 15 years ago
you chorus part needs LOTS of work.

As for that robot part - work on that as well.

As far as the rap part goes it don't even sound like rap.

Yeah I would take this back to the drawing board - and get to
work seriously.

maybe make this an instrumental.
Luckyfeatherstudios
Luckyfeatherstudios replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
haha wow harsh, but what your saying most likely right. haha seeing how i dont own the music in the back ground i can't just make it an instrumental. but thanks for giving it a listen. back to the studio then
EasyToEnvy
EasyToEnvy 15th Oct 2010 02:00 - 15 years ago
iight, certaintly a lot better on the verses. I actually likes those verses. Buuttt,,i see why yu dont sing often hahah, no offense. But yea good imprvement.

and btw. yu just made my week by saying i inspired you to do it again. I mean, over money, success, women-everything. The one thing i hope my lyics and music do is inspire, thats why i consider KiD CuDi as one of my biggest influences. I mean, people underrate cudder all the time, but the man just like, has this certain thing about him(nooo homoooo!!!) I can just relate to him.
But thank you, that meant a lot haha
Luckyfeatherstudios
Luckyfeatherstudios replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
haha any time mine. haha yea singin and me dont mix, but if i plug away at it.. it will come to. but tis truth man. thanks for the honest out looks man much respect. and thanks again bro haha

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