Listen To Wish Pop Song By Davytryhard | Looperman

7th Sep 2010 17:40 - 15 years ago
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Description : This is a power pop song I made over the past two weeks. The lyrics are in Chinese. The vocals were contributed by my fiance. The project was made in fl studio. The mix down needs work if anyone would like to lend a talented ear let me know. Thanks

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If you have time take a listen and give Davytryhard some feedback.

bmw2000uk
bmw2000uk 9th Sep 2010 11:43 - 15 years ago
Mate, great track, i am Chinese also, but i speak Cantonese.

The vocals need to be more clear i feel, as it would really lift the track with a female voice. Wow, i must ask you to collab with me on my tracks, i need a mandarin vocalist.

Great piece..

Love it

Peace...
AndreRamone
AndreRamone 9th Sep 2010 07:53 - 15 years ago
I like where you are going with this. You are obviously very talented. The music is great especially the bass line but I could barely hear the vocals, they were very muffled and sounded like they were deep in the mix. I know this is just a start so keep up the good work. God bless.
JWilson
JWilson 7th Sep 2010 23:42 - 15 years ago
I agree with XSITION. Great sounding song though. Also I'm not sure what piano your using, but I think a more authentic sounding vst or soundfont would make the song more dynamic.
Reyer
Reyer 7th Sep 2010 23:36 - 15 years ago
Great intro. The music is great! Bring those vocals to the front more, as after a good mix down. Great composition!
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError 7th Sep 2010 21:29 - 15 years ago
Nice track, lots cool sounds in this, nice flow through the song, good vocals as well.

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