Listen To Goodbye My Folklorystik Day Pop Song By JeanPi At Looperman.com

I like what you've done here. Makes for a very pleasureable listening experience.

John

Hey, could be better. Here is my opinion.
Maybe it would be better to inverse the fonctions of the instruments.
I used some loops of PianoSounds, and 'cause there are well built, I find it would be better to place them on the first level, and not as a background, 'cause there are melodies. I don't want to chock you, but even if your melody represents for me a research really interesting, why not put a suggestion on what you do for the listener.
I try to explain to you that , because your composition is built with various pieces, put them at a place which make poeple curious.
Why do I tell this ?
When I listen to your music, I try to "analyze" (it's automatic) the background music...pianosounds, because its level is too much low.
But the best is to listen to your writing.
In music, all is possible, but to maintain some attention, it could be interesting to modify the different presences of each instrument.
Oh ! keep cool, I Feel this, But an other member can tell exactly the contrary. Don't mind, what is important is to create and finding some pleasure here !

Do you understand this ?

Not bad at at, well put together and tasteful. Nice work.