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20th Feb 2010 03:57 - 15 years ago
Description : This was a very clever beat by Illthoughtz to allow me to cover his State Of Emergency thanks homie enjoy everyone

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ruff_trak
ruff_trak 23rd Oct 2010 22:18 - 14 years ago
real talk, definately feeling this one and a mad beat from illthoughtz.
Writenow921
Writenow921 18th Jul 2010 23:24 - 14 years ago
Thank you for speaking the truth on this one man. THis is a message that really needs to be heard. Dude, I am more and more impressed with every track i listen to of yours. How long have u been writing?
TheWritersPoet41
TheWritersPoet41 replied Unknown
I have been writing since I was 14 but got back into last year but I have been getting better more and more thanks for the feed back
ForThaAfterLifeProD
ForThaAfterLifeProD 15th Jul 2010 12:19 - 14 years ago
man this is a deep track i felt this in my heart real sht love it this is true poetry great work just like i said before you got to bring you vocals up a little more did you mix and master the track or somebody else did? but any way this is really great work fam
TheWritersPoet41
TheWritersPoet41 replied Unknown
This is one that I did myself but now I let someone do the mixing for me lol thanks for the feedback
minette
minette 19th Apr 2010 10:36 - 15 years ago
seriously cool - would have loved it for the vocal to be more prominent/louder. awesome track though!
JohnBoutilier
JohnBoutilier 25th Feb 2010 04:57 - 15 years ago
Bloody awesome track, love it, what else can I say?

John59
TheWritersPoet41
TheWritersPoet41 replied Unknown
Thanks man I appreciate the feed back I have more to come
Soulfan
Soulfan 22nd Feb 2010 01:06 - 15 years ago
The beat is great, and the tone of your voice following is hot. Love it.
MStokes
MStokes 20th Feb 2010 16:20 - 15 years ago
Serious, right on. With people named Dick and Mit trying to confuse the nation from their FoxTV platform, this is essential.
TheWritersPoet41
TheWritersPoet41 replied Unknown
Thanks man really this is my first time using music and poetry together

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