Poles On Squares - NemesisV1

I had heard this a few days back and just heard it again so I could comment. I like the panning of the resonant style hats, very cool. Nice use of gating effects. I like the hoover style little effect you had in there before it transitions into a 8-bit style synths, those were really cool also. nice bends. Quite the cool track, though I think it most as electro than trance; regardless, keep up the good work.

LOL i was, have been in the hospital for a while but im back and better than ever...i must finish with this christmas callab that we are working on..i have done all my parts but i have the vocalist Rachelle german coming over the studio and im recording and looping her vocals and then i will be done with this. probally by the end of next week cause she will be out of town untill the beginning of the week.
you must forgive me but i dont remember if we picked out a specific track to do...if i did do you remember what it was called?cause if i picked one i am sure i D/L it into my collab productionz folder..which has alot in it already... add my myspace page bro for this is where i use and recieve e-mail at
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talk to you soon man and great job on the adjustments to the song!

YO MAN I LOVE WHAT YOU BREAK INTO! this is hot man keep doing what your doing...i think maybe you could double up on the kick cause i think it would really put more pund into this already hot track

Not much I can add, I agree with Flintlock on the bass line, in addition to his advice, I would also give the bass line more depth, more presence...not enough to thump your eardrums into the next universe, but enough to show you mean business.
Anyhow I liked your track, well done.

Hay Man, thats some great sounds, i like the movement of your main sound, the bass line is good, complexed, the tracks good the way it is, kind of a winding down track. Now you say you have hit a wall, if i was going to remix that track i would probly, simplefly the bass line and give the bassline a sence of speed (the off beat bass) and up the tempo around 140, the breakdown is nice, like the break beat. sorry for the spelling im not the best, well that my throughts. its a good track:)