Diesel J Can't Sleep Ft. Toxic X Voltage - Dieselj

Im new to this site and this is my first comment...I peeped the acapella sample you that used (original)...and what you have done here is spectacular. I dont listen to this style of music in general...BUT!!! this track I played over and over for about 2hrs cleaned my house got twisted and all...the kids are dancing and everything...im into production myself Rap/RnB...so just from that standpoint I can tell that you put alot into this...overall its very crisp and clean and I love your style. Keep it up.

You put together a track this dense & cool AND you play bass? Jeez! Ok… I’ll line out a few reasons why I like this track. The electronic noises throughout are tasty. Thomas Dolby-ish but better… more modern. You have so much going on in this track, yet it all fits. It starts out sparse but engaging. Some folks put in samples & little ideas and 40 seconds into it, it will be too much. Not the case with this track.
I would actually change a small part with the vocal/acapella. I’d put more of an accent on the words “sleep”, “wondering” and “why” by making sure each word fell on a strong down beat. I’d put a pause before and after each word to REALLY put emphasis on them.
Thanks for sharing your music!

The quality is excellent
I can tell you put a lot of effort in
this track. I like how you reversed some portions of the
lyrics, the melody is great, and this is an excellent house track

Great stuff for sure
Fav'd:D

Nice track , is the melodic part remind me some old track.. cant remember the name now .. it start a little empty and is get better in min 1:30,

In generally nice track