Listen To Drift Indie Song By BONEZONMARZ | Looperman

In Africa, we say the best soups come in small portions. Great tune - but its too short. Manuela is right, my friend.

What an impressive synth bass! It makes a fantastic first impression and sounds absolutely great. This style of music pairs perfectly with your voice. I agree with the other comments, you should definitely extend the song. It is a really good effort.
Best wishes, Anthony

Beautiful song! You're left wanting more after the break that starts at 1:40. If it leaves me wanting more... it's because it's good.

B.O.M.! Dream Pop is a genre Im not too familiar with. The structure of your song is chill. What stands out is the increased level of confidence you have with your vocals. That speaks volumes in itself. The synth bass and melodies pair perfectly. Nice production no doubt. Your trajectory is spot on!

Mark

Hi, this is truly a beautiful song so soulful and composed with such attention to detail. Your voice is a perfect fit, and the rhythm invites you to dream and feel along. But I have to admit: it's too short. In my opinion, the vocal part could be a bit longer. You've already hinted at a structure between the verse and chorus, so why not add another verse and a final chorus?
As it is now, the song is beautiful and definitely worth listening to, but it still has a bit of a demo feel to it. If I were a producer, I'd say: Great composition, great singer there's real potential here. Do you see what I mean? You have strong qualities, a good ear for music, wonderful ideas, and a beautiful voice. You can do so much more with it than you've shown so far in this impressive piece.

Warm regards, Manuela