Annoying Letter - Dripig

Really interesting and powerful track!
Good job. Keep em coming!
Cheers!

nihuya se on tebe stenu teksta nakatal
nu koroche
po-moemu vibivaetsya iz obshey kartini tolko vocal
nu i bass nemnogo ne v ton

a tak zaebis

I am by NO means a professional, but I've learned a few things over the last 27 years, and I don't mind passing some of that along. I sent you a message directly through Looperman, so check your emails for that.

It's an alright track. I don't know if I would call it a "masterpiece" though. Increased volume isn't what you needed. What you needed is a more clear mix. As it sits now, the wavetable is a brick, but it's still muddy and hard to hear anything distinctly. Everything sits on top of each other and fights for space.
Increasing the bass just caused the other frequencies to duck. Not in the clear sidechain pump sort of way, but because it's dominating and won't let anything breathe properly.
I don't know if you're using loops, or if you have control over every element to this track. (Kick, snare, synths, pads, etc.), but either way, they should all be routed to their own mixer track, EQ'd, balanced in levels. stereo separated, and compressed (the right way).
If you don't know how to do any of that, and would like some guidance, I can help, and if others know you want to learn, I'm sure they would chime in too.
Knocking tracks out in 3 hours doesn't mean you're a pro. Quality wins over quantity every time. Fortunately for you, being a member of this site could benefit you greatly, if you choose that route.
Let me know if you're interested. If you're not, that's fine too.
Take care.
V.

V Cool and v cinematic