The technical realization of your song is good. In my opinion, there's nothing that needs to be changed.
But then a few suggestions: For me, your song is neither country nor pop. It's far too slow and practically uneventful for that. It just hums along... In this respect, the title ("It happened" ...but nothing actually happens at all...) doesn't fit the content either.
I often notice this lack of connection between content and title in songs anyway. My impression is always: song finished, now we need a title, we can't think of an adequate one, oh well, we'll take the next best one, the main thing is that it's finished.
Yes, and the first disharmony of a song is already out in the world.
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For me, your song belongs in the "Trance" genre. Naturally, there would have to be another title and then it would basically fit. I still don't really like the form of the current Beats in the song, but of course there is no standard for their execution.
Finally (in the truest sense of the word): the final passage has a length of about 01:11 minutes. Even taking "Trance" into account, this is considerably too long for me. Please consider whether it might make sense to structure the song a little differently, more balanced in terms of time?
Man I truly appreciate your feedback . I will definitely take them into consideration on my next release. I let my songs name themselves . I usually make one in about 30 minutes and I have words for them just having started singing on them yet . Thanks again
Just lately Iv been listening to a few country tracks that I like the sound of & it's not new to me as I have sung country before even though I sing mostly RNB/SOUL/HIP HOP/JAZZ I do a pretty mean country sound lol..but wow! Wow! this is such a delicious beat you truly know what you are doing music-wise, luv everything about this track. Excellent! work indeed. Choice!
P.S. in response to your suggestion of a collab I'll definitely reach out when ready to work with you, your music is TOP NOTCH!...Hearting this on my way out :)
Description : Big thanks to Justze3 who released the four loops to his drake ovo style piece because he didn't plan to finish it, challenge accepted. I would also like to thank LankFrampard for the extra drum loop and av3 for the sample "trapped" which gave a lot of extra feel to the song.
Description : Used loops from MHYST trance sequence 8,2 and Goa. Dune 2 Vst. also thanks to Fibonacci 1.1618
ref looperman-l-0203623-0112992-mhyst-trance-sequence-8
looperman-l-0203623-0112999-mhyst-trance-sequence-2
MHYT has a series look him up under trance sequence
Description : A relaxed Trance-Trible-Electro-Wave track. Feel the power of the alien tribe connection. Dance your dream or dream your dance. Just be part of the connection.
This is what you get when i try to make a Free Radical song.
In the end, it does not sound like something I've ever heard from him.
But it was, after all, a try.
Thus, it is not completely different, ´cause i have not sung this time.
And it is electronic music but .....
However, I like the resulting song. Hope you too. Only 1 sample was used here - Anubis-Anubis-Loop all the synth´s are played by me and i added some drumsounds with powerdrums2 played by myself Comments are sure welcome.
Description : A drum and bass, electronic something or other inspired track. The main Melodies taken from short loops I cut from some sessions my bro &e's recordings he had made at my location. I had been meaning to use his sounds for a minute and he said it would be cool. Finally did.
#Drum and Bass
#Dubstep
#Electronic
#Techno
#Upbeat
#Sampler
#Vocals
Description : I made this track the day after I was trapped in the lower dimension and could not wake up. The only way I escaped was to send unconditional love to a huge group of dark beings going to attack me.
Description : Another attempt in my continuing efforts to learn how make a trance track. Is intended to have a vocal doing the melody. Would try to find a singer but need to work out lyrics first. For this track I tried to make the melody not too repetitive. I limited it to four bars max of the same melodic phrase.
Description : First trance piece for a little while, Strong beat and bass lines, nice synths and pads, with a few FX thrown in for good measure...Hope ya all enjoy.Please comment/review...Everything sounds where I wanted it...so enjoy this trance, glad to put one up of my fav genre...Peace Love Respect...mosaic...
Description : It is time to max up your volume and make this party a real one with Infinium.This tune is made to be looped infinite timefor some epic hours in a party. this is why there are no proper intro or outro in this one.Also this tune is progressive maybe for some "rave". Anyway please enjoy the last track I made for this years (2014).Sorry i would describe more this track but I have a party right now !! :D
Description : Would you be at all surprised if I told you this was a Trance edit of And Then She Left Me Again? Didn't do a whole lot to it. Just changed the bpm to 138, swapped out the drums and slightly changed the drop. That's all I've had time to do since I uploaded the house/techno version. Originally this was going to be DnB edit but I got tired of trying to find the perfect kick and percs
Description : The original Sound is now more than 30yrs old and it is time to celebrate the beginnings of Trance. The beats should fit into my "Symphony of Dynamics and peace". Hope it makes you People still moving today :-)
The technical realization of your song is good. In my opinion, there's nothing that needs to be changed.
But then a few suggestions: For me, your song is neither country nor pop. It's far too slow and practically uneventful for that. It just hums along... In this respect, the title ("It happened" ...but nothing actually happens at all...) doesn't fit the content either.
I often notice this lack of connection between content and title in songs anyway. My impression is always: song finished, now we need a title, we can't think of an adequate one, oh well, we'll take the next best one, the main thing is that it's finished.
Yes, and the first disharmony of a song is already out in the world.
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For me, your song belongs in the "Trance" genre. Naturally, there would have to be another title and then it would basically fit. I still don't really like the form of the current Beats in the song, but of course there is no standard for their execution.
Finally (in the truest sense of the word): the final passage has a length of about 01:11 minutes. Even taking "Trance" into account, this is considerably too long for me. Please consider whether it might make sense to structure the song a little differently, more balanced in terms of time?
Kind regards
Seelengold
Just lately Iv been listening to a few country tracks that I like the sound of & it's not new to me as I have sung country before even though I sing mostly RNB/SOUL/HIP HOP/JAZZ I do a pretty mean country sound lol..but wow! Wow! this is such a delicious beat you truly know what you are doing music-wise, luv everything about this track. Excellent! work indeed. Choice!
P.S. in response to your suggestion of a collab I'll definitely reach out when ready to work with you, your music is TOP NOTCH!...Hearting this on my way out :)
Angelus