The technical realization of your song is good. In my opinion, there's nothing that needs to be changed.
But then a few suggestions: For me, your song is neither country nor pop. It's far too slow and practically uneventful for that. It just hums along... In this respect, the title ("It happened" ...but nothing actually happens at all...) doesn't fit the content either.
I often notice this lack of connection between content and title in songs anyway. My impression is always: song finished, now we need a title, we can't think of an adequate one, oh well, we'll take the next best one, the main thing is that it's finished.
Yes, and the first disharmony of a song is already out in the world.
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For me, your song belongs in the "Trance" genre. Naturally, there would have to be another title and then it would basically fit. I still don't really like the form of the current Beats in the song, but of course there is no standard for their execution.
Finally (in the truest sense of the word): the final passage has a length of about 01:11 minutes. Even taking "Trance" into account, this is considerably too long for me. Please consider whether it might make sense to structure the song a little differently, more balanced in terms of time?
Man I truly appreciate your feedback . I will definitely take them into consideration on my next release. I let my songs name themselves . I usually make one in about 30 minutes and I have words for them just having started singing on them yet . Thanks again
Just lately Iv been listening to a few country tracks that I like the sound of & it's not new to me as I have sung country before even though I sing mostly RNB/SOUL/HIP HOP/JAZZ I do a pretty mean country sound lol..but wow! Wow! this is such a delicious beat you truly know what you are doing music-wise, luv everything about this track. Excellent! work indeed. Choice!
P.S. in response to your suggestion of a collab I'll definitely reach out when ready to work with you, your music is TOP NOTCH!...Hearting this on my way out :)
Description : Big thanks to Justze3 who released the four loops to his drake ovo style piece because he didn't plan to finish it, challenge accepted. I would also like to thank LankFrampard for the extra drum loop and av3 for the sample "trapped" which gave a lot of extra feel to the song.
Description : I really liked ABOE Musics (looperman member) cinematic track so i give it a go and after many hours in last few days this is it.
My RMX of his great track. Maybe i tweak it more in future.
Really enjoyed in making it.
It's Trance-ish House i guess LOL.
Enjoy!
Love and peace.
Description : this song is the last i created. I wanted to remix the famous "the chase" from the movie "midnight express, i love the original sound! i don't know if the result is enough good but i'm proud to say that all has been composed by myself: the instrumental parts, the arrangements, melody, recording and mixing. I hope you'll enjoy it! don't hesitate to let a comment after listening :)
Description : Progressive song that I made a few weeks ago. Tried to make an uplifting sommer song. I know it is nothing original but like the flow in it.
Description : Used loops from MHYST trance sequence 8,2 and Goa. Dune 2 Vst. also thanks to Fibonacci 1.1618
ref looperman-l-0203623-0112992-mhyst-trance-sequence-8
looperman-l-0203623-0112999-mhyst-trance-sequence-2
MHYT has a series look him up under trance sequence
Description : A relaxed Trance-Trible-Electro-Wave track. Feel the power of the alien tribe connection. Dance your dream or dream your dance. Just be part of the connection.
This is what you get when i try to make a Free Radical song.
In the end, it does not sound like something I've ever heard from him.
But it was, after all, a try.
Thus, it is not completely different, ´cause i have not sung this time.
And it is electronic music but .....
However, I like the resulting song. Hope you too. Only 1 sample was used here - Anubis-Anubis-Loop all the synth´s are played by me and i added some drumsounds with powerdrums2 played by myself Comments are sure welcome.
Description : A drum and bass, electronic something or other inspired track. The main Melodies taken from short loops I cut from some sessions my bro &e's recordings he had made at my location. I had been meaning to use his sounds for a minute and he said it would be cool. Finally did.
#Drum and Bass
#Dubstep
#Electronic
#Techno
#Upbeat
#Sampler
#Vocals
Description : Another attempt in my continuing efforts to learn how make a trance track. Is intended to have a vocal doing the melody. Would try to find a singer but need to work out lyrics first. For this track I tried to make the melody not too repetitive. I limited it to four bars max of the same melodic phrase.
Description : This is a remix with permission, which goes to a contest. Basically progressive house with trance elements. The download option will be avaiable after the contest closes.
Update: mastering and mixing redone! it should work, well hope so. Update 2: now it must work! no more compression (at leas I think), not really satisfied with the waveform, but maybe it`s okay! Thanks for the help people!
The technical realization of your song is good. In my opinion, there's nothing that needs to be changed.
But then a few suggestions: For me, your song is neither country nor pop. It's far too slow and practically uneventful for that. It just hums along... In this respect, the title ("It happened" ...but nothing actually happens at all...) doesn't fit the content either.
I often notice this lack of connection between content and title in songs anyway. My impression is always: song finished, now we need a title, we can't think of an adequate one, oh well, we'll take the next best one, the main thing is that it's finished.
Yes, and the first disharmony of a song is already out in the world.
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For me, your song belongs in the "Trance" genre. Naturally, there would have to be another title and then it would basically fit. I still don't really like the form of the current Beats in the song, but of course there is no standard for their execution.
Finally (in the truest sense of the word): the final passage has a length of about 01:11 minutes. Even taking "Trance" into account, this is considerably too long for me. Please consider whether it might make sense to structure the song a little differently, more balanced in terms of time?
Kind regards
Seelengold
Just lately Iv been listening to a few country tracks that I like the sound of & it's not new to me as I have sung country before even though I sing mostly RNB/SOUL/HIP HOP/JAZZ I do a pretty mean country sound lol..but wow! Wow! this is such a delicious beat you truly know what you are doing music-wise, luv everything about this track. Excellent! work indeed. Choice!
P.S. in response to your suggestion of a collab I'll definitely reach out when ready to work with you, your music is TOP NOTCH!...Hearting this on my way out :)
Angelus