Bloom - Owenwho

Hello Owenwho,

aha, you like it...

Not only you, but me too! Until 0:43 it sounds wonderfully harmonious with the piano slightly in front of the background accompaniment (the children's voices also fit beautifully into the background, even if I wouldn't want them throughout, but sporadically a little more audible; but of course that's a balancing act, you can also quickly bring it out of balance).

To my ears, the piano and background then swap positions from about 0:43 to 1:05. Overall, it gets louder and the original background accompaniment now sits in front of the piano, which gives up a bit of the lead as a result. To me, it's not quite as balanced as before.

From approx. 01:05 to approx. 01:19 you then take the piece back a bit overall - in my view correctly, in order to prevent monotony - which fits well in terms of timing.

Afterwards, the piano unfortunately retains its place in the background; as I said, in my opinion the piano should have the "say" overall, which by no means excludes taking the background sound temporarily to the front, but only for a short time.

Overall, I like your track very much, because you have designed it really nice harmonic flow, great!

Kind regards

Seelengold