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10th Oct 2020 22:00 - 3 years ago
Description : made this today,i'd appreciate any review

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If you have time take a listen and give FWLiX some feedback.

ACautionaryTale
ACautionaryTale 15th Oct 2020 01:09 - 3 years ago
Hey! This Track is pretty sick Its well put together I think most of the issues I have with it are in the mix itself.
Drums are too loud you could try using saturation instead of pumping the volume or a compressor that will give you more clarity in the top end of the drums without overboosting things in the earlier stages cuz the limiter can clip them really hard.
The vocals could have more clarity to them I feel like there smothered in the mix I would definitly eq out some of the synth were the vocal also sits (or respectivily you could try boosting the 8-10k and 800-1.5k range and that could help too) It doesnt really need a lot too pop out I think like a couple DB each would do the trick.
compositionally i would get rid of the melody at some point during the song I think it would bring a lot more dynamic energy. Maybe as a turn around take it out too emphasise the last words that are getting said in the song or even right before the beat comes in take it out or have it scratch out or reverb out or something too offer change before it comes back around Maybe at the begining have it come in really quitely low pass it maybe? it just goes on for the whole song and I think it would become less boring if some more work was done on the synth cuz the rest of the song is dope the synth just needs more work at certain parts of the composition. Besides that I like the song a lot I listened to it like 10 times.
EricMilligan
EricMilligan 12th Oct 2020 04:29 - 3 years ago
Damn! I just accidentally switched pages and lost my entire comment on your track. So, here goes again. I'm not big on trap, basically because I'm hopeless at making this kind of music. But this sounded pretty good to me! Mix was good and the parts nicely separated. Nice work.

I'm glad that you decided to post the track here on Looperman. You are far more likely to get get constructive feedback from LM members than from listeners on Soundcloud.

I agree with Steve (Crucethus), that the kick is probably the weakest part of the track. ValveDriver's advice on layering kicks is excellent. I am not sure if the kick was purposely made to sound gritty, or if it is clipping. I think it should be toned down in the mix.

I'd be inclined to route each kick track to an aux channel and put a compressor on the aux. Alternatively, you might experiment with putting compressors on each kick track and seeing how different attacks and compression ratios affect the combined sound. I do know that some producers use multiple (different) compressors on certain tracks in the mix, producing subtle differences that I can't hear, but that apparently can make a real difference in the overall mix. Worth a bit of time to just try different things and see what works best.

Eric
crucethus
crucethus 11th Oct 2020 00:31 - 3 years ago
Trap isn´t my forté by I do know a bit about this overdone genre. And this has some good arranging going on. I like the fills U use. Clean mix and good instrument choices. As Valve suggests I am also a fan of the multi layered percussion and kick methods. I would say the kick is probably the weakest point on the song but everything else is quite nice. good luck mate.
Crucethus
ValveDriver
ValveDriver 10th Oct 2020 22:30 - 3 years ago
This isn't my preferred genre, so I can't really comment on how well it's done in that regard. But, just listening to it for what it is, it's done well. The arrangement is good, the composition is good.

The only thing I hear that might need some attention is the levels in the mixing. Specifically, the drums.

I know the drums are supposed to be big and stand out, but that doesn't necessarily mean boosting the volume to the point where it almost clips. Try layering different kicks. Find two different ones. One that has strong low end, bassier punch, and one that has a higher top end that focuses the "snap". Layer them, and adjust the EQ's so that when both of them hit, it covers the entire frequency spectrum, giving it a fuller, harder hit.

Same with the snares.

Then link everything together and put a multiband compressor on them to get them to come out clear, and full.

At least, that's what I do. I'm no professional, but that works for me.

Otherwise, good work and keep it up.

Take care.
V.

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9th Jul 2015 06:41 - 9 years ago
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Description : This song is my first attempt at trap(?) and was made ENTIRELY with Looperman loops in honor of this awesome site and also to demonstrate what you can do with Looperman loops :P. Compiled, edited/processed, mixed and roughly mastered in about 16 hours. I am collaborating with a Looperman rapper right now who will lay some verses on this and I will do the hook. In other words this is not a finished product just yet, but wanted y'alls opinions on it.

I was attempting to create a high-energy trap(?) beat with a blend of wubbiness. Let me know what you think.
SPECIAL THANKS to MODUSMusic (https://www.looperman.com/loops/detail/84213/future-only-pluck-by-pbxd-free-140bpm-dubstep-synth-loop), Spivkurl (https://www.looperman.com/loops/detail/83359/somber-deep-fm-electronic-lead-e-minor-140-bpm-by-spivkurl-free-140bpm-electronic-synth-loop), danke (https://www.looperman.com/loops/detail/77738/trancelead-02-by-danke-free-140bpm-trance-synth-loop), Eli426 - (https://www.looperman.com/loops/detail/85478/zomboy-virtual-riot-dubstep-loop-by-eli426-free-140bpm-dubstep-bass-synth-loop), 7venth12 (https://www.looperman.com/loops/detail/84112/dt-808-drum-i-by-7venth12-free-140bpm-trap-drum-loop)(https://www.looperman.com/loops/detail/83973/808-trap-beat-by-7venth12-free-140bpm-trap-drum-loop),smokyleopard (https://www.looperman.com/loops/detail/79383/bang-without-drums-135-bpm-by-smokyleopard-free-135bpm-trap-vocal-loop), UltraCryptik (https://www.looperman.com/loops/detail/82211/contemplex-like-drop-no-sc-by-ultracryptik-free-140bpm-dubstep-wobble-bass-loop)(https://www.looperman.com/loops/detail/82212/contemplex-like-drop-w-sidechain-by-ultracryptik-free-140bpm-dubstep-wobble-bass-loop) and Megapaul (https://www.looperman.com/loops/detail/78179/nasenmesser-140bpm-e-by-megapaul-free-140bpm-ambient-electric-guitar-loop) and xXSniperXx (https://www.looperman.com/loops/detail/79782/trap-pack-no1-hey-chants-by-xxsniperxx-free-140bpm-trap-vocal-loop). There was one more guy who had the rise loop that I used but I couldn't find him anywhere when I went back to search for him. Anyhoo, thanks to him too :P

I will update this when the vocals get laid on the track and I remix/remaster it. Cheers!
1st Oct 2014 10:50 - 9 years ago
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Description : MY IMPACTS DIDNT WORK >:C
anyway: hey guys c:
Some new Stuff from me.
I didn't know wich genre I should pick, because I tried to do this Dubstep Part but it still sounds pretty trappy, so I chose Trap.

Feedback would be absolutely cool and if you want any of these Sounds, I'll load them up. (Just tell me in the comments).

Uhm, yeah, enjoy c:
-Timmy
2nd Oct 2019 20:42 - 4 years ago
Description : hello here is the mix and mastering that I did for an artist who despite the quality of my work she refuse to validate this project so I ask for your opinion on the quality of my mix and my mastering
I'm open to any suggestion.
here is her version
21st Sep 2019 01:45 - 4 years ago
Description : .
Type: Lyrical/Demo
Rapper/Engineer: Knight Heir
Producer: Roman RSK

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4th May 2014 00:49 - 10 years ago
Description : Its chilly in australia right now, so i thought why not upload a preview of a chill trap
30th Apr 2020 09:15 - 4 years ago
Description : (Prod. Xeos Beats x Who's wyler) - 135BPM
If you use this track for whatever reason, it just fair to give credit to the producer (Prod. by Xeos Beats x Who's wyler) or share your work and leave a feedback.

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13th Jul 2021 23:00 - 3 years ago
Description : New Single Out Now! :D
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Hope You Enjoy!

Been a while, recently been producing for other artists but I'm back on my single grind.
20th Nov 2021 00:40 - 2 years ago
Description : Well its a trap beat at least...Guitar, synth, vocals and words by me (except for the title bit from a poem of same name by Stevie Smith).
27th Jun 2017 23:04 - 7 years ago
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Description : Step 1) Make a really repetitive beat (No Distortion).

Step 2) Make sure there's a long segment at the end of the beat of JUST THE BEAT because the actual song will only be like a min and 40 secs.

Step 3) For the "distortion", don't actually distort the beat. Most people think you distort the 808 to get the the XXXTENTACION sound, but that's wrong. Make sure the beat is PROPERLY mixed/mastered and THEN boost the bass frequencies until you reach your desired amount of distortion.
1st Oct 2019 04:52 - 4 years ago
Description : Dark trap beat, only for non profit purposes, share your work if used! Thank you!
11th Jan 2017 06:23 - 7 years ago
Description : Hey all,

Just finished this and was wondering if anyone has time to give any feedback. I'm open to criticism so let me know honestly. Cheers!
5th Apr 2020 17:06 - 4 years ago
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28th Jul 2014 04:01 - 10 years ago
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Description : I put my little touch on a trap beat by kristijann. I am playing a chilled piano and choppy piano background. I also am playing around with a violin. Whatcha think so far?
7th Sep 2013 19:45 - 10 years ago
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Description : It's unfinished beat. A lot of mastering shall be putted in this. Full version soon and free!
23rd Feb 2020 13:13 - 4 years ago
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Description : tell me what you think, hop on it if you want