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16th May 2020 02:33 - 5 years ago
Description : UPDATE: Extended and revised version.
I produced additional sounds, reworked the vocals, cleaned the entire sound and mixed everything again. I would be interested to know whether I improved or worsened it.

Based on a old poem from around 1650 by Laurentius von Schnifis.

Everything played and mixed by myself. Parts of the drums by Joe Funktastic.

As always, I would be very happy about a comment.
- joe -

Comments (23)

If you have time take a listen and give joecramer some feedback.

Chasmchaser
Chasmchaser 12th Feb 2022 02:59 - 3 years ago
Nice flow. Wish I knew German as I think it would be cool to know the words. Great Job.
joecramer
joecramer replied 13th Feb 2022 - 3 years ago
thanks for the friendly comment.
Good to know that you liked what you hear.
And you don't need to know German to understand any, cause i have put the translation of the lyrics into the song lyric place right by the track :) cause lot of people here cant understand German but can read English

stay tuned
joe
sirefox
sirefox 9th Feb 2022 20:11 - 3 years ago
Buen tema amigo mío, tu voz queda como un guante, perfecta para la ocasión. Que tengas un buen día compañero. paz y salud.
joecramer
joecramer replied 10th Feb 2022 - 3 years ago
Gracias por tus amables palabras.
Es muy agradable saber que a alguien le gusta mi música.
También te deseo paz y salud.

stay tuned
joe
RitajustRita
RitajustRita 9th Feb 2022 01:16 - 3 years ago
I like this track and the vocal!!
Nice work.
joecramer
joecramer replied 10th Feb 2022 - 3 years ago
Thanks Rita for your listen and comment.
Good to know that you like both, the music and the vocals.

stay tuned
joe
pseudoble
pseudoble 12th Nov 2021 13:15 - 3 years ago
Very cool - used to really love Kraftwerk, Tangerine Dream and even Ultravox - this reminds me a little of them but is actually more cool, a litte darker and more 'fresh' sounding
Great Track and wonderful sound production too : )
joecramer
joecramer replied 10th Feb 2022 - 3 years ago
Hello pseudoble.
Sorry for my late reaction.
Nice to know that you like the track.
And cooler like Kraftwerk, Tangerine Dream and even Ultravox, is said very nicely :)
Many thanks for your kind words

stay tuned
joe
crucethus
crucethus 12th Nov 2021 03:32 - 3 years ago
Joe!!! 3rd time is a charm just got done listening to it, and the mix sounds amazing now, great job!
joecramer
joecramer replied 10th Feb 2022 - 3 years ago
So i say the 3rd time
THANKS :;)

all the best Cru

stay tuned
joe
dimestop
dimestop 6th Aug 2021 22:12 - 3 years ago
Great track Joe reminds me so much of kraftwerk I used to dance too Das model and stil do to tour de France robo street dance, nice job talented guy
joecramer
joecramer replied 12th Aug 2021 - 3 years ago
Hello dimestop.
Thanks a lot for your friendly words. I really enjoyed them.
I hope you had some fun and danced also a bit to my song :)

stay tuned
joe
randomuser13
randomuser13 24th Oct 2020 04:10 - 4 years ago
oof! Love this man. Very artistic and great synths man!
joecramer
joecramer replied 24th Oct 2020 - 4 years ago
Hey randomuser13, you have a real great taste. Thanks a lot for all the listen to my music. It looks like i could give you some good moments and thats great for me. Under this link you will found maybe a few other tracks from me that you will like. https://www.reverbnation.com/1096781/album/135599

stay tuned
joe
CINCOCENT
CINCOCENT 27th Aug 2020 06:45 - 4 years ago
Enjoyable catchy stuff. Grezt vocals you have there
joecramer
joecramer replied 28th Aug 2020 - 4 years ago
Hello CinCoCent. Thanks a lot for the listing and for your friendly words. It is all made by me, composing, playing, singing, mixing, etc. so i have the vocals always here :)
stay tuned
joe
CaraDeSol
CaraDeSol 26th Aug 2020 17:51 - 4 years ago
Forgive me, I did not know you had posted the lyrics in English. Sounds stellar, keep up the great work :)
joecramer
joecramer replied 27th Aug 2020 - 4 years ago
:) now, after you downloaded the track and found the translation, i hope the track gets better and better every time you listen to it.
All the best and stay tuned
joe
CaraDeSol
CaraDeSol 26th Aug 2020 17:49 - 4 years ago
Glad to see you on the map Joe, any little time I get to listen to your track I enjoy it. I admire your creativity and originality, something I'd like to see more on here. I don't know what you're singing but I really dig your vocals. At times it reminds me of Kraftwerk (may Florian Schneider rest in peace). Great job mate, thanks for sharing. Oh, I almost forgot, I had to press download to keep, I will be listening to this more often so thank you for allowing us to download your music. Faved :)

SunFace
joecramer
joecramer replied 27th Aug 2020 - 4 years ago
Hello SunFace. Nice to hear that you can enjoy my creativity. I am a big fan of Kraftwerk and sure it can be that they are anywhere in this track with some inspiration but in fact i can't hear it :) And i have to say thank you for telling me that you will listen to this little track more often just for listening and not only for writing a comment. that's really great!!! And sure also a thank you for the fav.
stay tuned
joe
DijamMusic
DijamMusic 24th Aug 2020 05:53 - 4 years ago
Joe, I didn't mean it like that.
What I meant you did not look at any of my tracks lately.
joecramer
joecramer replied 25th Aug 2020 - 4 years ago
Jamid, unfortunately that's perfectly true. But has nothing to do with you or your music. As I already wrote, my time windows are really tight at the moment. And not only I suffer from this, but of course many others too. I hardly ever see people outside of work and when I am tired like nothing good or the others are because I have had night shift for months and cannot get out of this number because of Corona ... Everyone tells me "Hey, what's going on Joe, it looks like you don't exist anymore ". .......
But you can be sure that, if chance allows, I am always happy to listen to new music from you or Cru or Danke etc. But unfortunately this is only the case very sporadically. But I hope that will change again soon. So please don't be angry with me my friend.
all the best and stay tuned
joe
terryjmhitsong
terryjmhitsong 24th Aug 2020 03:51 - 4 years ago
REALLY GREAT TRACK HERE.....I WAS HOPING FOR A HEAVY ROCK CHRS....THEIRS SOMETHIN ABOUT YOUR VOCAL THAT MAKES IT CATCHY....ITS A FEW THINGS....GREAT JOB...NO COMPLAINTS HERE WITH YOUR MIX.....
joecramer
joecramer replied 27th Aug 2020 - 4 years ago
Hello Terry. Good to know that you liked the track even though you expected something completely different. It is always a pleasure to read a friendly comment. Thank you for taking the time to listen to this song and for finding the time to write something.
stay tuned
joe
DijamMusic
DijamMusic 23rd Aug 2020 18:19 - 4 years ago
Joe, I do listen to your track even though you don't.
joecramer
joecramer replied 24th Aug 2020 - 4 years ago
Hey Jamid. I really didn't believed that you didn't listen to the track. And i pressed to fast on "post" cause i would change some words in the answer but ...... So i want to say thanks for the at least 3. listen. I think we both do it the same way. Listen and then write something. I never wrote any without listen. But i have really almost no time last times and so i really did not listen to much somgs at all. ..... Right now i working almost 2 month on a new track and in my mind it is almost finished but i have to do all the vocal work now and have no really time at all for that. But i bet you will like it when i am present it to the looper family.
so stay tuned Jamid
joe
DijamMusic
DijamMusic 23rd Aug 2020 05:17 - 4 years ago
Hello Joe,

It is a Brillaint track now.

Not that wasn't before.

Well done

Maj
joecramer
joecramer replied 23rd Aug 2020 - 4 years ago
:) Hey Jamid,

so when it was stellar before, then it is now inter stellar :) and that's sounds really good to me. Thanks for the second time you invested into listen to this track and write a comment.

stay tuned

joe
FullCapicityMuzic
FullCapicityMuzic 24th May 2020 21:38 - 4 years ago
Hey there Joe. :-)
This sounds good.
Your voice is soothing.
The muzic is very calm as well and works good with your vocal.
I don't know what it sounded like before,
but it sounds good now!
joecramer
joecramer replied 27th May 2020 - 4 years ago
Thanks for your friendly comment Patricia.
Good to know that you think it sounds good.
And you can be sure before it sounded not that good :)

stay tuned
joe
DijamMusic
DijamMusic 18th May 2020 23:02 - 5 years ago
Hello Joe,
It is a stellar of track now.
Not that wasn't before.
Well done
Maj
joecramer
joecramer replied 19th May 2020 - 5 years ago
Hey Jamid,
so when it was stellar before, then it is now inter stellar :) and that's sounds really good to me. Thanks for the second time you invested into listen to this track and write a comment.

stay tuned
joe
silverman
silverman 18th May 2020 15:18 - 5 years ago
I haven't been around for ages but here you are Joe and you never fail to please!
I've all but dried up for the last year but your old poem idea has me inspired me!
joecramer
joecramer replied 18th May 2020 - 5 years ago
Well that's excellent. I am only here sporadically, at least recently and that you have just come back, that is very good.
And i am happy to see you on the loop again.
Cool to know that i could inspire you. I'm excited to see what happens.
So, a warm welcome back and thanks for your comment and Fav Mr. Silverman.

stay tuned
joe

P.S .: The whole thing is almost a series. You should listen to the previous song. The text there is based on a much older work of mankind. The -Te deum- from the 4th century ....... but I used the already translated versions from 1529 and 1774 to create a new work
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/210321
and this song fits perfectly with these two, but the poem used is a work of mine that goes back to a poem by Christion Morgenstern
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/208596
crucethus
crucethus 18th May 2020 05:53 - 5 years ago
All of these suggestions about adding reverb are totally wrong. If you are going to add anything to the mix. Add some Valhallah Uber Mod asymmetric pong, but a really light mix with a wide variance. Adding Reverb would just muddle the vocals in the end run and add nothing but chaos. Just IMHOP my friend. ;)
Cru
joecramer
joecramer replied 18th May 2020 - 5 years ago
I have to take a look at or should i say into the Valhallah. The name sounds good :)
Otherwise, I also think that it is good as it is.
I am always pleased that there are people here who make the effort to listen to a new version of a song for the second time and then take the time to write something. Thank you very much for that and for your opinion Cru.

stay tuned
joe
KnightHeir
KnightHeir 18th May 2020 02:44 - 5 years ago
Nice overall sound. Good work joecramer!
joecramer
joecramer replied 18th May 2020 - 5 years ago
Thanks a lot for the listen and your comment.

stay tuned
joe
BeatMaker4real
BeatMaker4real 16th May 2020 19:22 - 5 years ago
Nice work bro, sounds good.
joecramer
joecramer replied 17th May 2020 - 5 years ago
Thanks a lot. Good to know that you like the sound of this track.

stay tuned
joe
Stereonomicon
Stereonomicon 16th May 2020 12:11 - 5 years ago
Good morning friend, your song has certainly had a positive evolution, resulting richer in listening in terms of sound. I agree with theHumps in the idea of ​​adding a bit of reverberation to a voice of a large environment, such as an underground cave or a tunnel, this to give more suggestion to the acting. Best wishes
joecramer
joecramer replied 16th May 2020 - 5 years ago
Thanks for your words.
I will see what i can do with this reverb :) i will test your suggestions.

stay tuned
joe
theHumps
theHumps 16th May 2020 09:06 - 5 years ago
I really like the feel of the song, reminds me of late 80's new wave bands. I think the vocals could use a little bit more reverb to have them sit in the mix a little better, they stand out rather than sit in the mix. Just my opinion. Other than that I think you have something really good here!

Wayne
joecramer
joecramer replied 16th May 2020 - 5 years ago
Thanks a lot for your words Wayne.
I tested some more reverb on the vocals before uploading but in a way i didn't liked it that much. So i reduced it more and more and this is what comes close to what i liked :)
Maybe it is because my focus was/is more on the poem then on the track itself ..... I should look for someone from outside to do a mix, maybe others are not that deep into my interpretation of things.

stay tuned
joe
crucethus
crucethus 16th May 2020 03:33 - 5 years ago
Cool Mate, The music got a bit more in your face. Very techno with hints of acid and nicely mixed, as always a work of art with a modern twist by you brings joy to my day. I like this one better.
Cru
joecramer
joecramer replied 16th May 2020 - 5 years ago
Hey Cru, nice to read your lines. Good to know that you like this one a bit more, cause that means i didn't failed complete.

Nice that you listened to it a second time. So thanks for that and your comment.

stay tuned
joe

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