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Description : UPDATE: Extended and revised version.
I produced additional sounds, reworked the vocals, cleaned the entire sound and mixed everything again. I would be interested to know whether I improved or worsened it.

Based on a old poem from around 1650 by Laurentius von Schnifis.

Everything played and mixed by myself. Parts of the drums by Joe Funktastic.

As always, I would be very happy about a comment.
- joe -

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  1. Chasmchaser
    Chasmchaser on Sat 12th Feb 2022 - 2 years ago

    Nice flow. Wish I knew German as I think it would be cool to know the words. Great Job.

    joecramer
    Reply by joecramer

    thanks for the friendly comment.
    Good to know that you liked what you hear.
    And you don't need to know German to understand any, cause i have put the translation of the lyrics into the song lyric place right by the track :) cause lot of people here cant understand German but can read English

    stay tuned
    joe

  2. sirefox
    sirefox on Wed 9th Feb 2022 - 2 years ago

    Buen tema amigo mo, tu voz queda como un guante, perfecta para la ocasin. Que tengas un buen da compaero. paz y salud.

    joecramer
    Reply by joecramer

    Gracias por tus amables palabras.
    Es muy agradable saber que a alguien le gusta mi msica.
    Tambin te deseo paz y salud.

    stay tuned
    joe

  3. RitajustRita
    RitajustRita on Wed 9th Feb 2022 - 2 years ago

    I like this track and the vocal!!
    Nice work.

    joecramer
    Reply by joecramer

    Thanks Rita for your listen and comment.
    Good to know that you like both, the music and the vocals.

    stay tuned
    joe

  4. pseudoble
    pseudoble on Fri 12th Nov 2021 - 2 years ago

    Very cool - used to really love Kraftwerk, Tangerine Dream and even Ultravox - this reminds me a little of them but is actually more cool, a litte darker and more 'fresh' sounding
    Great Track and wonderful sound production too : )

    joecramer
    Reply by joecramer

    Hello pseudoble.
    Sorry for my late reaction.
    Nice to know that you like the track.
    And cooler like Kraftwerk, Tangerine Dream and even Ultravox, is said very nicely :)
    Many thanks for your kind words

    stay tuned
    joe

  5. crucethus
    crucethus on Fri 12th Nov 2021 - 2 years ago

    Joe!!! 3rd time is a charm just got done listening to it, and the mix sounds amazing now, great job!

    joecramer
    Reply by joecramer

    So i say the 3rd time
    THANKS :;)

    all the best Cru

    stay tuned
    joe

  6. LJmbbremen
    LJmbbremen on Fri 6th Aug 2021 - 2 years ago

    Moin.
    Was fr ein Text. Deine Stimme gefllt mir. Sie bildet einen sehr guten weichen Kontrast zum heftig krassen Inhalt. Wie ich hier schon gelesen habe, das ist wie Kraftwerk. Sobald ich Zeit habe, hre ich mir mal deine anderen Tracks an.
    Fette Gre aus Bremen in die Hansestadt Hamburg.
    Matthias

    joecramer
    Reply by joecramer

    Moin Moin Matthias. Besten Dank fr deinen Kommentar.
    Grsse gehen raus an Bremen. Ja der Text ist echt abgefahren und dabei schon so alt. Das hat mich echt irgendwie begeistert. Schn zu hren das dir meine Stimme gefllt. Aber was alle immer Mit Kraftwerk haben werde ich wohl nie ganz verstehen :) Ja ich bin mit Kraftwerk gross geworden und ich liebe einige ihrer Lieder sehr aber ich hre fast nie eine wirkliche Verbind zu mir heraus :) Aber das ist egal, denn wenn jemand eine Verbindung zwischen mir und Kraftwerk herstellen kann ist das vllig ok .... und natrlich freue ich mich meistens sogar.

    stay tuned
    joe

  7. dimestop
    dimestop on Fri 6th Aug 2021 - 2 years ago

    Great track Joe reminds me so much of kraftwerk I used to dance too Das model and stil do to tour de France robo street dance, nice job talented guy

    joecramer
    Reply by joecramer

    Hello dimestop.
    Thanks a lot for your friendly words. I really enjoyed them.
    I hope you had some fun and danced also a bit to my song :)

    stay tuned
    joe

  8. randomuser13
    randomuser13 on Sat 24th Oct 2020 - 3 years ago

    oof! Love this man. Very artistic and great synths man!

    joecramer
    Reply by joecramer

    Hey randomuser13, you have a real great taste. Thanks a lot for all the listen to my music. It looks like i could give you some good moments and thats great for me. Under this link you will found maybe a few other tracks from me that you will like. https://www.reverbnation.com/1096781/album/135599

    stay tuned
    joe

  9. CINCOCENT
    CINCOCENT on Thu 27th Aug 2020 - 3 years ago

    Enjoyable catchy stuff. Grezt vocals you have there

    joecramer
    Reply by joecramer

    Hello CinCoCent. Thanks a lot for the listing and for your friendly words. It is all made by me, composing, playing, singing, mixing, etc. so i have the vocals always here :)
    stay tuned
    joe

  10. CaraDeSol
    CaraDeSol on Wed 26th Aug 2020 - 3 years ago

    Forgive me, I did not know you had posted the lyrics in English. Sounds stellar, keep up the great work :)

    joecramer
    Reply by joecramer

    :) now, after you downloaded the track and found the translation, i hope the track gets better and better every time you listen to it.
    All the best and stay tuned
    joe

  11. CaraDeSol
    CaraDeSol on Wed 26th Aug 2020 - 3 years ago

    Glad to see you on the map Joe, any little time I get to listen to your track I enjoy it. I admire your creativity and originality, something I'd like to see more on here. I don't know what you're singing but I really dig your vocals. At times it reminds me of Kraftwerk (may Florian Schneider rest in peace). Great job mate, thanks for sharing. Oh, I almost forgot, I had to press download to keep, I will be listening to this more often so thank you for allowing us to download your music. Faved :)

    SunFace

    joecramer
    Reply by joecramer

    Hello SunFace. Nice to hear that you can enjoy my creativity. I am a big fan of Kraftwerk and sure it can be that they are anywhere in this track with some inspiration but in fact i can't hear it :) And i have to say thank you for telling me that you will listen to this little track more often just for listening and not only for writing a comment. that's really great!!! And sure also a thank you for the fav.
    stay tuned
    joe

  12. DijamMusic
    DijamMusic on Mon 24th Aug 2020 - 3 years ago

    Joe, I didn't mean it like that.
    What I meant you did not look at any of my tracks lately.

    joecramer
    Reply by joecramer

    Jamid, unfortunately that's perfectly true. But has nothing to do with you or your music. As I already wrote, my time windows are really tight at the moment. And not only I suffer from this, but of course many others too. I hardly ever see people outside of work and when I am tired like nothing good or the others are because I have had night shift for months and cannot get out of this number because of Corona ... Everyone tells me "Hey, what's going on Joe, it looks like you don't exist anymore ". .......
    But you can be sure that, if chance allows, I am always happy to listen to new music from you or Cru or Danke etc. But unfortunately this is only the case very sporadically. But I hope that will change again soon. So please don't be angry with me my friend.
    all the best and stay tuned
    joe

  13. terryjmhitsong
    terryjmhitsong on Mon 24th Aug 2020 - 3 years ago

    REALLY GREAT TRACK HERE.....I WAS HOPING FOR A HEAVY ROCK CHRS....THEIRS SOMETHIN ABOUT YOUR VOCAL THAT MAKES IT CATCHY....ITS A FEW THINGS....GREAT JOB...NO COMPLAINTS HERE WITH YOUR MIX.....

    joecramer
    Reply by joecramer

    Hello Terry. Good to know that you liked the track even though you expected something completely different. It is always a pleasure to read a friendly comment. Thank you for taking the time to listen to this song and for finding the time to write something.
    stay tuned
    joe

  14. DijamMusic
    DijamMusic on Sun 23rd Aug 2020 - 3 years ago

    Joe, I do listen to your track even though you don't.

    joecramer
    Reply by joecramer

    Hey Jamid. I really didn't believed that you didn't listen to the track. And i pressed to fast on "post" cause i would change some words in the answer but ...... So i want to say thanks for the at least 3. listen. I think we both do it the same way. Listen and then write something. I never wrote any without listen. But i have really almost no time last times and so i really did not listen to much somgs at all. ..... Right now i working almost 2 month on a new track and in my mind it is almost finished but i have to do all the vocal work now and have no really time at all for that. But i bet you will like it when i am present it to the looper family.
    so stay tuned Jamid
    joe

  15. DijamMusic
    DijamMusic on Sun 23rd Aug 2020 - 3 years ago

    Hello Joe,

    It is a Brillaint track now.

    Not that wasn't before.

    Well done

    Maj

    joecramer
    Reply by joecramer

    :) Hey Jamid,

    so when it was stellar before, then it is now inter stellar :) and that's sounds really good to me. Thanks for the second time you invested into listen to this track and write a comment.

    stay tuned

    joe

  16. PatriciaEdwards
    PatriciaEdwards on Sun 24th May 2020 - 3 years ago

    Hey there Joe. :-)
    This sounds good.
    Your voice is soothing.
    The muzic is very calm as well and works good with your vocal.
    I don't know what it sounded like before,
    but it sounds good now!

    joecramer
    Reply by joecramer

    Thanks for your friendly comment Patricia.
    Good to know that you think it sounds good.
    And you can be sure before it sounded not that good :)

    stay tuned
    joe

  17. DijamMusic
    DijamMusic on Mon 18th May 2020 - 3 years ago

    Hello Joe,
    It is a stellar of track now.
    Not that wasn't before.
    Well done
    Maj

    joecramer
    Reply by joecramer

    Hey Jamid,
    so when it was stellar before, then it is now inter stellar :) and that's sounds really good to me. Thanks for the second time you invested into listen to this track and write a comment.

    stay tuned
    joe

  18. silverman
    silverman on Mon 18th May 2020 - 3 years ago

    I haven't been around for ages but here you are Joe and you never fail to please!
    I've all but dried up for the last year but your old poem idea has me inspired me!

    joecramer
    Reply by joecramer

    Well that's excellent. I am only here sporadically, at least recently and that you have just come back, that is very good.
    And i am happy to see you on the loop again.
    Cool to know that i could inspire you. I'm excited to see what happens.
    So, a warm welcome back and thanks for your comment and Fav Mr. Silverman.

    stay tuned
    joe

    P.S .: The whole thing is almost a series. You should listen to the previous song. The text there is based on a much older work of mankind. The -Te deum- from the 4th century ....... but I used the already translated versions from 1529 and 1774 to create a new work
    https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/210321
    and this song fits perfectly with these two, but the poem used is a work of mine that goes back to a poem by Christion Morgenstern
    https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/208596

  19. crucethus
    crucethus on Mon 18th May 2020 - 3 years ago

    All of these suggestions about adding reverb are totally wrong. If you are going to add anything to the mix. Add some Valhallah Uber Mod asymmetric pong, but a really light mix with a wide variance. Adding Reverb would just muddle the vocals in the end run and add nothing but chaos. Just IMHOP my friend. ;)
    Cru

    joecramer
    Reply by joecramer

    I have to take a look at or should i say into the Valhallah. The name sounds good :)
    Otherwise, I also think that it is good as it is.
    I am always pleased that there are people here who make the effort to listen to a new version of a song for the second time and then take the time to write something. Thank you very much for that and for your opinion Cru.

    stay tuned
    joe

  20. KnightHeir
    KnightHeir on Mon 18th May 2020 - 3 years ago

    Nice overall sound. Good work joecramer!

    joecramer
    Reply by joecramer

    Thanks a lot for the listen and your comment.

    stay tuned
    joe

  21. BeatMaker4real
    BeatMaker4real on Sat 16th May 2020 - 3 years ago

    Nice work bro, sounds good.

    joecramer
    Reply by joecramer

    Thanks a lot. Good to know that you like the sound of this track.

    stay tuned
    joe

  22. Stereonomicon
    Stereonomicon on Sat 16th May 2020 - 3 years ago

    Good morning friend, your song has certainly had a positive evolution, resulting richer in listening in terms of sound. I agree with theHumps in the idea of adding a bit of reverberation to a voice of a large environment, such as an underground cave or a tunnel, this to give more suggestion to the acting. Best wishes

    joecramer
    Reply by joecramer

    Thanks for your words.
    I will see what i can do with this reverb :) i will test your suggestions.

    stay tuned
    joe

  23. theHumps
    theHumps on Sat 16th May 2020 - 3 years ago

    I really like the feel of the song, reminds me of late 80's new wave bands. I think the vocals could use a little bit more reverb to have them sit in the mix a little better, they stand out rather than sit in the mix. Just my opinion. Other than that I think you have something really good here!

    Wayne

    joecramer
    Reply by joecramer

    Thanks a lot for your words Wayne.
    I tested some more reverb on the vocals before uploading but in a way i didn't liked it that much. So i reduced it more and more and this is what comes close to what i liked :)
    Maybe it is because my focus was/is more on the poem then on the track itself ..... I should look for someone from outside to do a mix, maybe others are not that deep into my interpretation of things.

    stay tuned
    joe

  24. crucethus
    crucethus on Sat 16th May 2020 - 3 years ago

    Cool Mate, The music got a bit more in your face. Very techno with hints of acid and nicely mixed, as always a work of art with a modern twist by you brings joy to my day. I like this one better.
    Cru

    joecramer
    Reply by joecramer

    Hey Cru, nice to read your lines. Good to know that you like this one a bit more, cause that means i didn't failed complete.

    Nice that you listened to it a second time. So thanks for that and your comment.

    stay tuned
    joe

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