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Description : More of a VIP. cleaned it up and made it extra squeaky

"21 savage & future - X"

Synthesized in Serum

Please give me some critical feedback, i want it to be perfect

Credits: tmtmusic - Chill Guitar Loop. I threw it into newtone and figured out the midi then added my own synths and expanded on the melody. The loop is only used in the very beginning

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  1. kingmadi
    kingmadi on Tue 19th Feb 2019 - 5 years ago

    Very creative! I'd definitely say add more melody though just so the squeaks don't get too piercing. Harder bass on the drops too.

    hobertni
    Reply by hobertni

    thanks for the feedback. TBH i don't really know what your talking about when you say "add more melody"

    The sub bumps pretty hard when i play this in my car. i tried a bunch of different ways of trying to turn the sub up but when its any louder than it is, it starts to distort pretty badly (assuming this is what you mean by harder bass). So the sub is pretty much as loud as digitally possible. Bass has a weird way of sounding better when it's 'quieter'. Obviously the noises i chose for this song have a lot of high pitched harmonic tones so if you aren't listening on an actual speaker thats all you'll be able to hear during the drop

    Side note, the squeaks are my shit, especially these ones, and they are the best part of the melody in my opinion. (Honestly one of the cleanest high pitched bass noises ive ever heard, idk. prove me wrong). I understand to some they might be ear piercing but to others they're face melting and to me they're dank.

    fuck this comment was too long my b lol. I hope i don't come off as defensive either thats not my tone, i appreciate the feedback i just don't really know what you mean by it

  2. DrowsyCarnivore
    DrowsyCarnivore on Sun 17th Feb 2019 - 5 years ago

    Head Banging!

  3. fibonacci1185
    fibonacci1185 on Sun 17th Feb 2019 - 5 years ago

    Very creative..

  4. 1234bang
    1234bang on Thu 13th Dec 2018 - 5 years ago

    this is a very dope song man

  5. MajesticA
    MajesticA on Sun 2nd Dec 2018 - 5 years ago

    this song is amazing i think that the drop could have had a harder drum beat to suit it or something to go with it. mabye that is just how i feel

    hobertni
    Reply by hobertni

    I feel you. I think it depends on what kind of speaker you're listening on. In my car speaker the drums slap pretty fuckin hard

    thanks for the feedback tho

  6. RBphantomX
    RBphantomX on Sat 1st Dec 2018 - 5 years ago

    niceeee

  7. SouljahSlim3000
    SouljahSlim3000 on Sat 1st Dec 2018 - 5 years ago

    Yoooo! this joint is str8t fire!!! Oh snap!

  8. bkoziet
    bkoziet on Fri 30th Nov 2018 - 5 years ago

    nice one!

  9. Interitus
    Interitus on Wed 28th Nov 2018 - 5 years ago

    I feel like more melodic elements to the drop would make it even better.

    hobertni
    Reply by hobertni

    I agree with this. Definitely could've added some extra percs and small noises/fills to give it more of an atmosphere. Towards the end of making this I got a little lazy and didn't do any of that. My library is pretty small anyways so I might want to think about expanding it

    I appreciate the feedback

  10. WilliamCarpenter
    WilliamCarpenter on Wed 28th Nov 2018 - 5 years ago

    Caught my ear . Thanks

    hobertni
    Reply by hobertni

    glad u like

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