Stop Being Superfluous - Sqrtofneg1

Love the variety. It's such a smooth track. The glockenspiel (I think) flair like at 2:05 is cool to hear. The instruments have excellent tones as well. It's not just good, it's fun to listen to.

Hey! I used this track on a new song. I'm hoping you take the time to listen, very funky beat i loved getting on this. I used someone elses vocals for the introductory part. I come in around 40 seconds or so.
Anyways, I appreciate you sharing this and would like to get your advice and thoughts on the track.
Here:
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/197987
Thanks again
-CAP

90 per cent of people are superfluous :) This was a breath of fresh air unusual composition sophisticated. I liked it LOTS. Good work.

Pretty good;)

If you are being Superfluous can I be Extraneous? I liked it with its nonconformant chord changes. I find the people who have a hard time following this are not drenched in theory and understand yet where and when you can break the rules. you, my friend, get that here.
Cru

Really like the elements to this track. The heavy bassline bangs! I think this beat would benefit greatly by cutting down on all the variations your threw in there, as it makes it feel unfocused and a bit all over. Also, the mixing could use a little work on the higher end specifically. But i love the sound you achieved either way yo.

Ok. So dont take anything as a negative as I am a very critical listener. Plus, I feel as if the goal is to uplift folks. Comments are just people’s personal opinions and preferences.

1. I like the keyboard patch and the warmness of it. But to be honest, I don't even know what key this track is in. It would be really tough for a singer to keep consistent voicings to match this track. Except,... for the 1:23 mark. Nice progression there.

2. It was just tough for me to follow in general because you don't know where a verse or chorus really are (if its meant to be a track for a rapper/singer). The part at the 1:23 mark I spoke of returns later on, but in no specific pattern... again, tough for me to follow.

Overall, there is some good stuff here.

Good job.