At 02:00 until the end When your voice up in the superior octave, shivers are guaranteed!!! About the instrumental part, nothing to say, it's perfect: nice beat, nice reverse fx, ...
A collab with an other rapper will be really interesting. I don't know how to say that in english but in french: "en somme, je verrai bien un rapper pour dire le texte parlé et ta voix pour la partie chantée."
Hey Alexander, you definitely have talent man, you obviously have a passion and are serious about immersing yourself within the medium, I think the lyrics are thoughtfully constructed and well delivered, the only issues I hear concern the actual music and production values, which are a little lackluster and repetitive, something that's not so much a criticism but where your at on your musical journey, when the music starts approaching the level your vocal ability you'll be cooking with gas, even so the song is a winner for me on the vocals alone and I sense a strong creative streak within you ...cheers Dave/Planetjazzbass
Thank you! There's a bit for me to digest here so if you dont mind, I'll ask a few questions to get a better understanding of your advice. what do you mean by production values? as in the overall production of the track or the specific pieces that go in to it ie. the beat, the vocals, etc. I ask because I posted the song up as is so that I could find someone to do the engineering on the song so if that is what you're refering to here, then its kinda out of my hands but if you're talking abuot the actual beat, then we can start talking. Ive heard that the Hh on this track and the snare were especially prominent, but are you suggesting i make the drum track a bit more complex or that I add more layers and instruments to the overall track?
I like chance's part in that song, but it will never be like acidrap. :( but thanks man! Always nice to be compared to people you like and looked up too! :)
You're something special, and I wonder if you know it. Quirky? Yes. But super talented. Loved the lyrics. Loved your vocals, because the raw honesty shone thru. This is the path, and may you stay on it because its a rare thing to find your "sound" so clearly that it becomes instantly recognizable over all the other artists out there. I hope you've got a copyright on this. Bravo.
Description : working on a more rock heavy metal crossover. I try to get it working. I got lots of insparation from here on LM, looking for any advice that would help me to get closer. I left the beat in the end open, so you can try it out. guit, synth or vox, etc....
Chords:
I B I D I E I F# I
Description : This is my participation to the experiment of 2Sisters...hope it goes all right..! It has been a great joy to work with such a beautiful musical composition and with this great performance by Manuela. Thank you dear ladies for your kind offer of this material. Hope you will like it.
Description : One of those tracks you put your headphones on and your off too fantasy land for bit.Its all over the music spectrum on this track.*no foul language but does have lyrics that contain adult language
Description : Every instrument is performed and recorder live. Piano, double bass, drums.
Another try from my horror jazz collective.
Instruments Used:
-"LIRA" upright piano (MADE IN USSR 1973)
-"BLAST CULT" upright bass (MADE IN USA 2016)
-TAMA Imperial Star + Pearl OMAR HAKIM snare + Various Ziljian cymbals.
Description : Many of strangeness here ....
A link between two musical worlds quite different but united in this message of harmony.
"Silverpaw" (former Looperman) had in the depths of one of its hard drives, this arrangement that I made the past year: https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/120846
He decided to bring this theme, with a text and this voice ....
Very surreal but I really enjoyed ....
Description : I am quite open to all kind of music out there. This time I had some Church organ pipes lying around. With the help of 2nick8 and IMHO one of his best songs out there I put him into a big room and let the organs speak. Yes, maybe weird, maybe different, maybe 2nick8 will throw some egg against me ... I did it. What do you all think of it? (I changed the Genre to "Weird" in the meantime but "Experimental" would do also.
Description : I started out making this track a Vocal track, then it turned into a Chillout track but, now I'd say DubJazz, PsychoFunk or Weird. You be the Judge.
Description : Hey guys! Well, this is the first time I upload a song with my voice. I have to confess that this is not a style I usually sing. And, as an extra point, this is my first song in english. My native language is spanish, my english is not perfect, so sorry for mistakes (grammar, pronunciation, etc). Well, about lyrics, I explain the story on description of the instrumental version. If you want to read the story or hear the instrumental track, go here [ https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/146653 ]. This song was made on Magix Music Maker 2013 Premium and Adobe Audition 3.0. I hope you like it. Thanks! SUN & MOON... FIRE & ICE HEART... LIGHT & DARK FUSION...
Description : This track is only magmatic chaos hanging on a simple rhythmic skeleton. I had fun shaping and mixing the most disgusting electronic slurry.
Description : I haven't done anything in awhile. I got tired of screwing with this so just did some gain staging & panning & slapped it on here. It definitely sounds like something I would do.
Description : I wanted to do something different, TheFrenz sent me the stems to his excellent track 'Transformer' - And only one of the several versions of the track, using many of the same elements each time.
So I threw my hat in the ring with a version of my own, taking the elements of Transformer and doing some transforming. It only makes the song title that much more awesome. Music can certainly be transformed, taken to its next form...and the music can also be what transforms US. Pretty deep, man.
A collab with an other rapper will be really interesting. I don't know how to say that in english but in french: "en somme, je verrai bien un rapper pour dire le texte parlé et ta voix pour la partie chantée."
thanks for this amazing track
Bleep
You're something special, and I wonder if you know it. Quirky? Yes. But super talented. Loved the lyrics. Loved your vocals, because the raw honesty shone thru. This is the path, and may you stay on it because its a rare thing to find your "sound" so clearly that it becomes instantly recognizable over all the other artists out there. I hope you've got a copyright on this. Bravo.