BE MY FRIEND - CitizenMofo

Yo.

Cool, spacious, trippy intro but I think it should be twice as long before guitar and vocals enter. 5 seconds is not enough.

Yes, maybe your main snare choice (0:22) isn't quite right for this type of song. It's something different, which I appreciate. Perhaps try some others but still use that one for a change.

Yes, cool, dirty bluesy guitar. No complaints about that. 1:24 good high note.

Are you using a pop shield for her vocals? I can spot some plosives here and there.

1:43-2:27 maybe guitar gets too loud and drowns out the groove. Good, dark guitar there but I feel the beat should still be driving it powerfully.

2:51 nice little bleeps in the background. Lots of nice, little ambient touches going on behind Sunny War.

I think the drums need work. Think a bit more rock rather than hip hop/trap/electro. I'm not saying switch to a full, regular rock kit.

Otherwise it's a good piece of dark, psychedelic, guitar groove music.

What can I say ? ... well... this is great !

Really enjoyed this one !

Peace

Ahhh...another brilliance...tension, feeling, groovy...good song...cool song...if I were you I would make some heavier snare sound for this dangerous number...well?

10/10

Handshake, Danke