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25th Jun 2016 01:07 - 8 years ago
Description : Your Soon To Be Favorite Love Song. Produced, Written, And Recorded By T'Darius Gibson. Timauri Witherspoon Also Featured On This Song As A Writer, And Singer. Please Give Feedback On The Song, And What Could Be Done To Improve It. Comment, Favorite, Download, And Share

Comments (26)

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SteelCityRed
SteelCityRed 7th Jan 2023 17:08 - 1 year ago
Great Song Great Vocals
theills312
theills312 18th Jan 2018 07:46 - 6 years ago
that was fire bro.. i got like a lil boat vibe at the beginning.. FIRE!!
HarryHockjne
HarryHockjne 5th Dec 2016 19:16 - 7 years ago
Wow! Keep this up! I love this so much! It's a great, inspiration and sort of emotional mix and I LOVE IT! :)
You should definitely try submitting to some big labels because I think you could go somewhere bigger with things like this!
I'll be checking a lot more on your channel :)
BillionaireExclusive
BillionaireExclusive replied 5th Dec 2016 - 7 years ago
Thanks man I appreciate it. Stay tuned I'll be posting more throughout the week. Glad you like My productions
JoeskeyMRSTAYHOOD
JoeskeyMRSTAYHOOD 3rd Oct 2016 05:10 - 7 years ago
NOW THIS IS REAL MUSIC
BillionaireExclusive
BillionaireExclusive replied 3rd Oct 2016 - 7 years ago
Thanks I appreciate it
NateJMusic
NateJMusic 10th Sep 2016 15:50 - 7 years ago
Keep up the good work bro!
BillionaireExclusive
BillionaireExclusive replied 10th Sep 2016 - 7 years ago
Thanks I appreciate it. Check out my new track when you get a chance & leave some feedback.
Rezurrekted
Rezurrekted 30th Aug 2016 03:12 - 7 years ago
Hey overall good job bro, but in the other hand most of the criticism here is on point n most of these people know what they talking about and I myself hear alot of what they saying about your mix. But learn as much as you can bro keep it up and in time you'll learn everything you'll need to learn to succeed. It took me a while bro I'm still learning but you'll get it brotha.

*Rezurrekted
BillionaireExclusive
BillionaireExclusive replied 5th Sep 2016 - 7 years ago
Thanks I appreciate it.
TuneDef
TuneDef 20th Aug 2016 17:11 - 7 years ago
Commercially ready except for final Mix and Master, which comes before release...really good work and clean duo...congrats on the writing!
BillionaireExclusive
BillionaireExclusive replied 20th Aug 2016 - 7 years ago
Thanks I appreciate it.
YertBimberg
YertBimberg 10th Aug 2016 09:23 - 7 years ago
Lots of interesting suggestions/critiques from producers and engineers far above my skills (likely). But at the end of the day it's about how a recording transfers emotion from the artist to the listener. If I'm in my kitchen singing your chorus at my espresso machine your mission is accomplished :-) Enjoying my triple shot now.
BillionaireExclusive
BillionaireExclusive replied 20th Aug 2016 - 7 years ago
Thanks for that appreciation. I hope you enjoyed your triple shot:)
mackit
mackit 27th Jul 2016 04:08 - 7 years ago
t. I'm an older musical vet. I haven't heard one comment on MASTERING. You have a very natural commercial voice. Simplicity is the key to this song. I Feel where you comming from on this trackts of men and women can relate to this. In my opion this track minus the auto tune throughout the whole track, is Solid for mastering. I would pan the feamale backround vocals a bit wide but not rediculous. Your overall levels are great for mastering. They give the mastering engineer lots of room to work. You have the gift. I Would love to master this track to give you a reference point on when the mix is ready for mastering and to let you hear what you have realy created dymamicly.Let me know somtin mane via email. OLD SCHOOL GOT YOU. PEACE. THE MACK MAN OUT.
BillionaireExclusive
BillionaireExclusive replied 27th Jul 2016 - 7 years ago
Alright Thanks I Appreciate That. I'll Email You Tomorrow Morning.
rleftena6
rleftena6 20th Jul 2016 19:32 - 8 years ago
The simple chord progressions compliment your lead vocal, why not have done the 3rd or possibly the fifth harmony on auto tune and then mix it down above the other below your lead.In mixing vocals you will need to normalize tracks, and use a graphic EQ, use the female tracks sparingly, less is more, accents on Chorus, also try a step up in the chord and answer your lead and chorus with a melody that ties the 3 together just to break up and add transition.in response to your review on "TRAPEZE"I like color and levels with one lead instrument, the piano is the layer of color and the synth the lead, maybe I should have added a drop off of the lead if you are using it for vocal and rap.1st time I'm putting up a music track I have hundreds trying to stimulate comments, Thank you for yours the key is D at 120 bpm.
BillionaireExclusive
BillionaireExclusive replied 21st Jul 2016 - 8 years ago
Thanks For The Detailed Feedback. I'm Still Learning Mixing, & Sound Engineering But As More Tracks Are Posted They'll Sound Much Better.
KnightHeir
KnightHeir 14th Jul 2016 03:48 - 8 years ago
Hey man great song. It shows an understanding of the art of music and how to use it to convey a message artistically. I love the duet interplay as well. Good work. One critique I could think of is vocal presence. I also dealt with it at one point and have worked on it since. Obviously this song calls for a more soft voice, but you can still improve the richness and quality of your vocal. Ways that I've improved in this area are things like face stretching and vocal warm-ups before recording. Also, the expression that you have while recording helps also. Like smiling while recording reflect a more rich vocal as it invokes additional emotion that cones through to the listener even if its on a subconscious level. Overall great track. Keep it up. The small details will improve your artistry, it certainly has for me.
BillionaireExclusive
BillionaireExclusive replied 17th Jul 2016 - 8 years ago
Thank You Very Much For The Critiques. I'll Be Sure To Inplement Those Tips Into Future Songs Like This One.
ZazaMontana
ZazaMontana 8th Jul 2016 17:02 - 8 years ago
like it dude!
BillionaireExclusive
BillionaireExclusive replied 8th Jul 2016 - 8 years ago
Thanks
Danke
Danke 8th Jul 2016 14:54 - 8 years ago
brilliant production but your voice doesn't need that rude autotune...:-)
it's full of heart and feeling so don't get on the bus trendy...:-)
handshake, Danke
BillionaireExclusive
BillionaireExclusive replied 8th Jul 2016 - 8 years ago
Thank You So much Man
TayaliJeffrey
TayaliJeffrey 8th Jul 2016 06:42 - 8 years ago
wow nice composition well constructed chill vibes keep pushing liked the work
BillionaireExclusive
BillionaireExclusive replied 8th Jul 2016 - 8 years ago
Thank You
joecramer
joecramer 4th Jul 2016 16:12 - 8 years ago
Nice one.
But for sure you should remove the Auto tune. Ok, i am not a friend of Auto tune at all but in this case it destroys your vocal work really a lot. I bet that all would Sound much better without it :) .....
The Music is very well made and sounds good in my ears. And like others already said, use some more emotions in this Kind of genre. I know that it isn't that easy to do but you should try it :).
Over all this is a nice rnb track and like said bevor, without the Auto tune it would be much much better.

Good work for sure.

stay tuned
joe
BillionaireExclusive
BillionaireExclusive replied 4th Jul 2016 - 8 years ago
Thanks And I'll Make Sure To Do That In Future Songs
Philemonster1
Philemonster1 3rd Jul 2016 12:25 - 8 years ago
flow game really nice...hit me up
BillionaireExclusive
BillionaireExclusive replied 3rd Jul 2016 - 8 years ago
Thanks & Will Do.

- Billion
Planetjazzbass
Planetjazzbass 2nd Jul 2016 00:38 - 8 years ago
Hey Greg, great track man!..I really like the vocals they sit perfectly within the framework of the arrangement are well modulated and clear, anytime a song presents well vocally it gets a big tick from me, if I was to change anything and it's very very minor, it would be to set some automated panning on the high hat when it comes in, at the moment it sits in the top left hand quadrant of the mix and draws a listeners attention, moving it around from right to left will help negate any silly little superfluous critiques from pedantic reviewers like myself! ;)...great vocals, great track man..cheers Dave :)
BillionaireExclusive
BillionaireExclusive replied 2nd Jul 2016 - 8 years ago
Thank You So Much I AppreciatThat. Btw My Name Is T'Darius Not Greg Lol

- Billion
TeeGee1965
TeeGee1965 1st Jul 2016 15:03 - 8 years ago
Hey man, nice work you did. There are a few issues, but the others have already said everything there is to critique. The only thing is the Autotune - stay away from it, that's my opinion. You got a nice voice, let it out!
BillionaireExclusive
BillionaireExclusive replied 1st Jul 2016 - 8 years ago
Thank You And Will Do.
Dennel
Dennel 30th Jun 2016 21:49 - 8 years ago
Ok you were asking for honest assessment and feedback. Let me start out by saying that you have the basics of what can be a truly wonderful R&B song, but you're still missing some elements that can make this a great song. I would have probably produced this track a little differently; since this is a "Love Song", my emphasis would surely have been on having a very solid and well defined vocal performance. Not to say what you did was bad, but could have been much better.

I assume that you were the lead male vocalist on the track? You have a nice laid back "Keith Sweat" sounding vocal style (which is not a bad thing at all), you need to take better advantage of stretching you vocal range so that your singing doesn't sound so one dimensional. In other words sing to make the listener believe what you're sing is real. I like the delay used on your vocal, but obviously the Autotune was a big no, no. It distracts from your vocal performance, I kinda get what you were trying to do with it, but in the end it doesn't work.

On a love tune you should be able to carry the song with your vocal prowess not gimmicks; I also like the "Hook" of the song but it seems the female vocalist part was a little low in the mix. What I would have done was strengthen the hook by adding a secondary backing vocals singing the synth melody (since it's a pretty melody and runs perfect with what is being sung in relation to the hook).

Your basic music tracks are nice and you do have a nice concept, but I would beef it up a little. For me I like a "big lush" sound, so I would have added more strings for atmosphere and had more vocal interplay between you and the female vocalist. Sing the first verse, the hook, the second verse, the hook, improvise, repeat the first verse, the hook to the end of the song.

What I would suggest you do is listen to Keith Sweat's "Make It Last forever". As I stated before, although Keith has a laid back vocal style he does stretch his vocals and sings with emotion to make you feel what he is trying to convey. And since that is a duet with a female vocalist, they make you feel that song. Which is essentially what you have to do. If you do not sing the song with "conviction and emotion" your listening audience will not take you seriously.

Now please do not take my "critique" of your track as a put down, because that is not what I am doing. I am only giving my honest assessment of the song and what could make it better. You have the basics of what could be a great song, R&B music is a emotion driven music, so add some emotion. Other than what I have suggested, it is a good track. Keep up the good work,

D
BillionaireExclusive
BillionaireExclusive replied 30th Jun 2016 - 8 years ago
Hey Thank You So Much For The Very Detailed Critiquing. I Actually Was Planning On Making The Song Thicker((Yes I'm The Male Vocals)) But Never Found The Time Since I Actually Recorded T-Law's Verse Last Minute After Trial & Error With Other Artists. And The Beat Construction Will Be Modified Soon For An Official Version. But I Really Appreciate Your Comment. I'll Be sure To Implement Everything You Said In Future Songs.
Bindanox
Bindanox 30th Jun 2016 21:01 - 8 years ago
Very good production.Both vocals sit really well in the track.
You obviously can sing,i would like to hear your real voice even tho the auto-tune sounds cool.
Keep at it
ps:great name btw

Nelson
BillionaireExclusive
BillionaireExclusive replied 30th Jun 2016 - 8 years ago
Thanks And I'll Be Sure To Post Some Of My Natural Voice
mudhoen
mudhoen 30th Jun 2016 19:02 - 8 years ago
Pretty good track but as other people said already: cut the autotune or just use it a little. I think the vocals can be very nice without it.If you mix the vocals to sound a bit fuller and less autotune you got me hooked.
BillionaireExclusive
BillionaireExclusive replied 30th Jun 2016 - 8 years ago
Thanks for the feedback. I'll be a little more natural in upcoming productions.
onlyhits
onlyhits 30th Jun 2016 17:40 - 8 years ago
Great lyrics man! Auto tune seemed a bit heavy in some places but other than that it was great.
BillionaireExclusive
BillionaireExclusive replied 30th Jun 2016 - 8 years ago
Thanks For The Feedback. I Had Actually Just Learned How To Use Autotune When I Started This Song, So That's Why It Seemed Off Here And There But Thank You.
GregVincey
GregVincey 30th Jun 2016 14:19 - 8 years ago
Aye bruh, greetings, welcome to looperman! I did say I was going to critique. This is not to come off as hate or mean. The kick, clap, and hit hats is rubbish. The drum pattern didn't really work with the track. Good lyrical writing, the vocals isn't that bad, but not satisfying either. I believe with a little more practice you two can make something beautiful together.
BillionaireExclusive
BillionaireExclusive replied 30th Jun 2016 - 8 years ago
Thanks
mildperil
mildperil 30th Jun 2016 08:53 - 8 years ago
I really liked this. Although I have to say that the auto tune seems a bit too heavy on the male vocals, but the female vocals were really quite beautiful and entrancing.

It sounds really well produced and well thought out as well, and quite looking forward to any future releases.

Thanks for sharing :)
BillionaireExclusive
BillionaireExclusive replied 30th Jun 2016 - 8 years ago
Thank you so much man. There will be another release within another week for you to look forward. I'm still in the learning phase of using autotune, but truthfully my voice sounds almost the same without it lol. But thanks again
GoldenOokami
GoldenOokami 30th Jun 2016 04:00 - 8 years ago
Hello there! I really like the direction this track went! The lyrics was very sweet and the vocals were very nicely executed. The male's vocals could be a bit more fine-tuned, but perhaps that was the Auto-Tune. The female's voice was very gentle and absolutely had control though. The instrumentals was also on point as far as he levels and use of patterns. Cheers man!

~GO
BillionaireExclusive
BillionaireExclusive replied 30th Jun 2016 - 8 years ago
Thank you very much for that. Right now I only have basic autotune to work with. but you'll be hearing some of my own voice soon. Which really doesn't sound much different. But thank you and check back soon for more tracks. I'll also be posting instrumentals.
SupaFreakshow
SupaFreakshow 30th Jun 2016 03:41 - 8 years ago
Hey man, you can be proud of this. Great job. Since you asked for constructive feedback, I feel that some of the low mids in the main vocal could use some cutting at times to make more room for the bass line..but that's just me and it could be these cheapo cans I am listening on.

mike
BillionaireExclusive
BillionaireExclusive replied 30th Jun 2016 - 8 years ago
Thanks man. The bass line actually follow the chord progressions so it really just blends in with the whole beat. I spent a bulk of time trying to work on my voice, and T-Law's verse was actually last minute recorded. So your speakers are fine the song just came together like this because of time restraints. But thank you and look forward to more from Billion soon.

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