Hickey - AxelStPatience

8th Oct 2016 02:01 - 9 years ago
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Description : First song I've written in quite some time. Let me know what you think, how you think my songwriting could improve, and/or if you'd like to collaborate.

Comments (3)

If you have time take a listen and give AxelStPatience some feedback.

topvega
topvega 11th Oct 2016 01:14 - 9 years ago
Vocals=Good.
Instrumental=Not so good.
You need some instruments that are recorded well and compliment your good voice. Even if you used the same Instrumental and let the notes ring for awhile instead of cutting off it would be a tremendous plus.

Keep at it.

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wikkid
wikkid 9th Oct 2016 01:13 - 9 years ago
I hope you've recorded your vocals and keyboard on separate tracks, because your vocals are killer!

Just a suggestion. I'd love to hear how a Looperman producer would take your vocals and use them for a house/deep house track. You may want to upload a few acapellas or upload acapellas of some of the songs you have here.

Check out what some producers have done with Farisha's acapellas.

Songwriting isn't easy, but the sooner you start, the better you become over time, so be patient. I commend you for putting your work on here, but the strength of this track imho are your vocals. I agree with Wobbin, your voice is beautiful. It's the tone that's arresting and its quite distinct. These days what you've got is a big plus.

Now its time to pair your gift with the right backing music so that you can really shine.
Wobbin
Wobbin 8th Oct 2016 22:00 - 9 years ago
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