Description : Wanted to put some words down and attempt something.
Credit to donel with his "To hell with them fellas" for the backbone to write on.
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/169638
Still in the learning stage. Let me know what you think

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  1. donel
    donel on Tue 30th Aug 2016 - 4 years ago

    And please send me just the vocals as an mp3 I have an Idea for the chorus

    Email

  2. donel
    donel on Tue 30th Aug 2016 - 4 years ago

    Amazing!! Soul, blues feeling! Love it! I have more stuff that I want you to try! Give me your email so I can sen more songs to you!

    mamm690
    Reply by mamm690

    Thank you! I would love that! Will be sending vocals your way

  3. danke
    danke on Tue 30th Aug 2016 - 4 years ago

    I think this is very well done...the repetitive guitar is very atmospheric...I don't hear the bass, perhaps my bad old PC on my working place...:-)
    What I thought from the first listen, that some kinda soft organ solo at the end could be cool...with very easy play...you know what I mean...
    All in all, congrats and handshake, Danke

    (voice is pro...)

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Momma had tried to tell me
about this pretty thing called “love”
what she mentioned in the story
white flower and a dove
Well…..

That black crow started singing
when this Ol’ fellow caught my eye
and all of momma’s teachings,
I remembered would surly die

“Love Love Love ,
I will love you ’til the end of time.
Buy you a pretty ring,
and I'm going to make you mine”

Lovely words be like a song tune
that the mocking bird can only sing
Just like the boy
who cried love
that’ll never have a good thing

Now if momma had only told me
about the dark little cycle of sin
is you keep on wanting more
and you keep on giving in

“Love Love Love ,
I will love you ’til the end of time.
Buy you a pretty ring, and I'm going to make you mine”

Lovely words be like a song tune
that the mocking bird can only sing
Just like the boy
who cried love
that’ll never wear a ring

Just like the boy who cried love
will never wear my ring

 


 

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