25th May 2016 01:05 - 8 years ago
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Description : Here is a country song that I wrote and recorded. I played all the instruments and sang (not the best singer but its fun) as well, drums are from ezdrummer. If you like the track feel free to download it and thanks for listening.

Comments (19)

If you have time take a listen and give ImproveWithError some feedback.

midiman007 25th Sep 2022 17:24 - 1 year ago
Kool country track
KyleCarpetner 4th Oct 2016 00:27 - 7 years ago
Liked this one also.. Loved the intro on it.. the whole song was good.. but had a nice hook that keeps your interest....
1955HofnerBass 18th Sep 2016 15:33 - 7 years ago
I think that you have a very good voice, and I'm amazed at your playing. I tried that once in 1990, but computers really weren't working all that well yet, and there wasn't good software like we have today, so I was doing it on multi-track Cassette Tape and over dubbing. by the time I got finished, it sounded like a wind tunnel from going across a dirty head so many times.

This is good enough to be finished and put on the radio. I play bass guitar, 12-string, and many others if you ever wanted to hit the studio, and the road. I've done both for many years, and know how entertainment goes.

Just a thought, if you can produce songs like this, what's holding you back?

Thanks for sharing!
ImproveWithError replied 19th Sep 2016 - 7 years ago
Hey thanks for listening to my track, technology has really come a long way when it comes to being able to record stuff on your own. I have practiced a lot to try to get good recordings, an ever going process that will always need improvement. I appreciate your compliments, I do this stuff for fun, a bit of an outlet really. I've never played live for anyone, I don't really plan do that but I think it would be fun, but I would be a wreck for sure. Anyway, thanks again, maybe would do a collab sometime if time allows.


kdwent 18th Jul 2016 17:05 - 8 years ago
this is awesome. would it be okay if i used this in some of my online videos and I will put you in the credits.
ImproveWithError replied 18th Jul 2016 - 8 years ago
Hey that is fine with me, I wouldn't mind seeing the videos after you finish them if you want to contact me when you upload them.
NFMaster 3rd Jun 2016 01:07 - 8 years ago
Nice track!
You have a traditional Country ton of voice that fits perfectly to the song.
Thx for sharing!

crucethus 2nd Jun 2016 05:10 - 8 years ago
Hey Kyle, vox improved quite a bit on this one. Your moving forward as well on the production side as well. Keep that up and you'll be doing this for a living!
mildperil 1st Jun 2016 18:04 - 8 years ago
Brilliantly written song. Not usually my genre of music, but I totally believed what I was listening to, I can still hear the tune in my head as I write this. Thanks for sharing :)
ImproveWithError replied 11th Jun 2016 - 8 years ago
Hey thanks for checking out my track, I appreciate you taking the time to listen and comment.

Musicante 29th May 2016 21:24 - 8 years ago
Very nice, Kyle. We don't get much country here, so it's a nice change. Hey, not a thing wrong with your voice, my friend. It fits the genre well. Playing is very good as well as the mix. All in all, great job!

ImproveWithError replied 2nd Jun 2016 - 8 years ago
Hey thanks for checking out my track, I am glad you liked it. Thanks for the compliments on my voice as well, I really like country and just want to give the the genre justice :) Anyway, thanks again.

Byleth 29th May 2016 19:34 - 8 years ago
Usually I don't live vocal music but I could say your voice fits pretty well with your work. Nice job

Also I have maybe 2 thing to ask you,

First, could you put the lyric ? For a non English person, like me, who would like to understand the real meaning of your work lyrics is the best friend.

Second, could you make an instrumental version of this track. this would be cool.

Anyway nice track.

Peace from master Byleth.
ImproveWithError replied 31st May 2016 - 8 years ago
Hey thanks for checking out the track, I am kind of opposite in the fact that I like tracks with vocals, I don't usually pay a lot of attention to the lyrics as much as I enjoy them accompanying the music. Anyway thanks for the listen and comment.
silverman 28th May 2016 22:06 - 8 years ago
Very nice listen.
Very well put together.
Nice and easy on the ear and the mind without being simplistic.
Pro sounding band.
ImproveWithError replied 29th May 2016 - 8 years ago
Thanks for Silverman for listening to the track, its good to hear that you thought the track was good. Thanks for taking the time to listen and comment, I appreciate it.

tekreck 28th May 2016 19:58 - 8 years ago
Hey, i dont like stuff like this.. but this was good.
ImproveWithError replied 29th May 2016 - 8 years ago
Glad to hear you thought the track was good, thanks for listening.
austinmusic 27th May 2016 17:23 - 8 years ago
Not a country fan, but I really enjoyed this track. Easy to get into, great melody!
ImproveWithError replied 28th May 2016 - 8 years ago
Thanks for taking the time to check out the track, I appreciate it.
Tumbleweed 26th May 2016 17:17 - 8 years ago
This is top notch Kyle...a bigger mix this time with the electric gtr...nice job on the recording by the way...We tend to be our own worse critics at times but you really do have the vocal chops Kyle..I don`t know how to explain it but its a voice character thing ...this would fit very nicely in today`s country radio....a big well done to you...fav from this ol boy...Ed
ImproveWithError replied 27th May 2016 - 8 years ago
Thanks Ed, I always respect your view on things so I take your compliment on my vocals to heart, I appreciate it. It's tough to for me to like my own voice I guess, but I do like singing so I guess I just need to except it and just make music because its fun. As always I appreciate you taking the time to listen and comment. Thanks!!!

Mosaic 26th May 2016 06:16 - 8 years ago
Hi Klye

Mate good to be back, had to check out your works, mate have said before you have a vocal that is easy on the ear, could listen to it and not get bored, great work...this sounds like a piece that you would get playing a country radio station, very enjoyable my friend, nothing to fault here, sounding great through headset, fav'd peace mosaic.
ImproveWithError replied 27th May 2016 - 8 years ago
Hey thanks Mosaic, I appreciate your vocal compliment, its nice to hear some people like it. I appreciate the fav, listen, and comment. Thanks again!!!

FatalDecline 25th May 2016 21:47 - 8 years ago
You might be a bit hard on yourself, this is a good track. guitars sound spot on ! Keep up the great work brother!
ImproveWithError replied 27th May 2016 - 8 years ago
Thanks I appeciate your kind words. I wish I could do things a little bit better but I guess I need to be grateful for what I am able to do. Thanks for the listen.

Danke 25th May 2016 21:05 - 8 years ago
What an uplifting, superb track Kyle...the chorus got some grunge feeling and the whole track is full of groovy...fav, dl...:-)

Handshake, Danke
ImproveWithError replied 27th May 2016 - 8 years ago
Thanks Danke, I appreciate you taking the time to listen and comment. I have been trying to write a little more upbeat songs lately.

Lukas13 25th May 2016 16:09 - 8 years ago
Rather a good thing.
ImproveWithError replied 27th May 2016 - 8 years ago
Thanks for listening
theHumps 25th May 2016 13:23 - 8 years ago
I didn't know you were from down here in Dixie, you sound born and bred in the south land. Vocals are sounding pretty good and so is the mix. Electric guitar sound is perfect for this style of music.

Nice job Kyle!

ImproveWithError replied 25th May 2016 - 8 years ago
Hey Wayne,

Thanks for taking a listen, country is my favorite music genre but I don't do it often because its hard to find the right sound. I finally found some guitar tones that I like so hopefully I will be turning some more out in the future. Thanks again.

BradoSanz 25th May 2016 04:36 - 8 years ago
Wide stereo sound that I really love. I've been trying to make a video for you to show you what I do to get bigger vocals but it's not recording my audio!! :( I'm still trying though! Your music is getting better and better everytime, man. Keep at it, you're quickly becoming a serious contender on this site. Even though you don't think you're the best at singing, your voice works perfectly for this track. Fun-lovin', raw and relatable. Great job!

ImproveWithError replied 25th May 2016 - 8 years ago
Hey Brado thanks for the compliments I really appreciate it. I am going to be teaching an audio engineering section in my communications class next school year so I thought I should probably buckle down and start learning some of the technical stuff so that my students can hopefully make some decent recordings. By the way I found this website that allows you to make video recordings with both system audio and microphone audio simultaneously for free. I tried it on my windows machine and worked great, here is the site: hopefully this will work because I am really looking forward to seeing your process. Anyway thanks again for checking out the track.


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