it's a story about a bar room conversation between God and the Devil. this was written by myself and a friend years go and i finally got the chance to breathe new life into it with the help of a great producer, DJ Stephskillie.
t's almost 100% mixed and ready for mastering. i'd love your feedback!
thanks for any insight you could give.
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Hey there guys! After having quite some listens to both versions in comparison to give a better opionion i've come to the following :)
The mix DJ Stephskillie made deff is a nice new approach on this track. Chapeau!
However, if i may be so free, personally i do like the original voice of yours better then the slightly changed 'God part voice' used here. Theres an 2nd voice layer on the God part where i doubt if its needed for the full verse. Possibly it may sound better as in 'less is more' idea on some of the end wordings.
For example:
3:08 'Great Cannons'
3:11 'In just 1 week'
3:19 'They say god is greedy, god is cool'
Are perfect for the layer, but some parts in between may sound better without.
I hope i made myself clear atleast haha. As this genre is not my hometown, please dó read my comment as being from a average person instead of musician/producer/DJ/Artist for this genre.
To express myself maybe better, now its an solid 8 for me, with the change it could be a 9 for my ears.
I love the 'Devils voice vs God voice changes which is cool and i would suggest keeping in it.
this is AMAZING feedback and exactly what i was looking for. thank you so much for the feedback. i will re-edit this track to reflect your suggestions, as they are awesome.
thanks again!
Bless.
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The mix DJ Stephskillie made deff is a nice new approach on this track. Chapeau!
However, if i may be so free, personally i do like the original voice of yours better then the slightly changed 'God part voice' used here. Theres an 2nd voice layer on the God part where i doubt if its needed for the full verse. Possibly it may sound better as in 'less is more' idea on some of the end wordings.
For example:
3:08 'Great Cannons'
3:11 'In just 1 week'
3:19 'They say god is greedy, god is cool'
Are perfect for the layer, but some parts in between may sound better without.
I hope i made myself clear atleast haha. As this genre is not my hometown, please dó read my comment as being from a average person instead of musician/producer/DJ/Artist for this genre.
To express myself maybe better, now its an solid 8 for me, with the change it could be a 9 for my ears.
I love the 'Devils voice vs God voice changes which is cool and i would suggest keeping in it.
Awesome production, keep it up!
thanks again!
Bless.