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17th Aug 2016 13:33 - 9 years ago
Description : this is a sequel of sorts to my 1st track on this site, Wolf in sheep clothing. the link for that track is here. https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/163901

it's a story about a bar room conversation between God and the Devil. this was written by myself and a friend years go and i finally got the chance to breathe new life into it with the help of a great producer, DJ Stephskillie.

t's almost 100% mixed and ready for mastering. i'd love your feedback!

thanks for any insight you could give.

Comments (2)

If you have time take a listen and give wordybum some feedback.

eshar
eshar 18th Aug 2016 04:43 - 9 years ago
Wow this blew my mind and actually brought a little tear to my eye....it was a very powerful piece and I don't have any criticisms.

Elaine
wordybum
wordybum replied 28th Jun 2018 - 7 years ago
thanks so much for the listen!
Wobbin
Wobbin 17th Aug 2016 14:37 - 9 years ago
Hey there guys! After having quite some listens to both versions in comparison to give a better opionion i've come to the following :)

The mix DJ Stephskillie made deff is a nice new approach on this track. Chapeau!

However, if i may be so free, personally i do like the original voice of yours better then the slightly changed 'God part voice' used here. Theres an 2nd voice layer on the God part where i doubt if its needed for the full verse. Possibly it may sound better as in 'less is more' idea on some of the end wordings.

For example:
3:08 'Great Cannons'
3:11 'In just 1 week'
3:19 'They say god is greedy, god is cool'
Are perfect for the layer, but some parts in between may sound better without.

I hope i made myself clear atleast haha. As this genre is not my hometown, please dó read my comment as being from a average person instead of musician/producer/DJ/Artist for this genre.

To express myself maybe better, now its an solid 8 for me, with the change it could be a 9 for my ears.

I love the 'Devils voice vs God voice changes which is cool and i would suggest keeping in it.

Awesome production, keep it up!
wordybum
wordybum replied 17th Aug 2016 - 9 years ago
this is AMAZING feedback and exactly what i was looking for. thank you so much for the feedback. i will re-edit this track to reflect your suggestions, as they are awesome.

thanks again!

Bless.

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