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26th May 2016 07:49 - 9 years ago
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Description : This song brings me nostalgia. It reminds me of my youth, what I loved, what I hated, and what was important. I feel as if I'm reciting words at my own funeral with this track. As the title says, this song is A Fleeting Memoir Of My Youth. Much love guys! Hopefully you enjoy as much as I did creating this. (:

P.S: I suppose you could call this track something of a rough sketch? Lol. Gotta work on it a lot more, but for the time being, I'd appreciate any advice to make it better! Thanks again :D

Comments (5)

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LASTDAYSVISIONARIES
LASTDAYSVISIONARIES 22nd Apr 2017 01:52 - 8 years ago
MARCHING ...
Dennel
Dennel 28th May 2016 23:06 - 9 years ago
This is a interesting track, it does the listener the feel of "reviewing" their past in thought. Love the warm organ to set the mood and for a sec the guitar low in the mix kinda reminded me of the band and tune (Big Country).
And the closing of the track with the "big drums" was very nice touch. My only critique of the track would be the long intro, which was something like 1:19? Don't know if you're planing on putting "vocals" to the song at some point. Other than that, a unique and very well put together track.

All The Best

D
BradoSanz
BradoSanz 28th May 2016 04:17 - 9 years ago
Wow, built this bad boy in an hour? It's quite a fun track, has a ton of potential but does seem a bit empty as it stands currently! You could go to town with this one though! I do seriously like those drums in the next segment, they sound very big. Is there any bass in this track? I think that could really beef it up a lot and make it feel like a massive track. Maybe throw in some crispy synth pads in the back to help it feel wide. Just some suggestions! Great track to start off with though, the guitars do their job in keeping the track interesting.

Brado
Danke
Danke 26th May 2016 10:49 - 9 years ago
Hi N!

Good pop/rock song...to tell you the truth rock means completely another thing for me...maybe get the drums on the faster way, I mean not in bpm but in the groovy...hope you understand me...
Guitars are o.k. they tell the story...:-)

All in all, good track but it could be much better...

Handshake, Danke
PapaNelson
PapaNelson replied 26th May 2016 - 9 years ago
You're absolutely right (: thanks for taking a listen by the way! Much appreciated :D And I literally created this track in about an hour and a half. Probably should have taken more time with it lol. And also, as usual, I get the friggin genre wrong again. I never know what genre it is after I finish. Thank you! And I'll update it in a bit! Again, thank you for the comment, and I'll try and fix this asap (: Much love man!
Mosaic
Mosaic 26th May 2016 08:10 - 9 years ago
Hello again N

Saw this one, so thought would give a listen, liking the feelings coming through in the intro, maybe could have intro little louder vol wise, sounded real low, not sure if that's what you wanted, mean as in the feeling's you want to the track to start out then build up to when guitar comes in, really liking this piece, thought provoking and haunting at the same time, credit to you mate (sorry if not male)
PapaNelson
PapaNelson replied 26th May 2016 - 9 years ago
Hey mosaic! First of all, really appreciate the listen (: It means the world to me (: To be honest, with this track I didn't really have a firm set or idea to begin with. It's more of a track that I had fun creating seeing how it hits pretty close to home lol. In terms of the volume thing, you're definitely right! I'll get to that first thing in the morning (: And in terms of the feel of the song, it's weird. As I was creating this song I pictured this story, and the track became more of a soundtrack to this story I was creating in my mind lol. I can see how it seems sudden and completely changed the vibe, but in a sense I guess I wanted it to do that. I wanted to reflect on the somber times, the happy times, the sad times, etc. All these thoughts rushing around your head in your final moments. I know I did a shitty job of explaining it lol, but all in all, it was a track that was made purely for personal listening lol. I didn't really think about how it would affect others :D Anyways, thanks for the help! Constructive criticism is the best way for any artist to grow (: Much love man! And I apologize if I completely rambled on in this reply lol

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