Tags : | Rock | 4.93 MB

Description : So I had a guitar lick for years that I never did anything with. I was going to try to write a country song with it, instead it turned into kind of retro rock track. I am pretty happy with the end result, I think it turned out better than my initial idea. I sang and played all of the instruments on the track. The drums are from Ez Drummer, which is awesome in my opinion. Thanks for listening, if you like the track please feel free to download.


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  1. BlancFroid
    BlancFroid on Fri 6th Oct 2017 - 1 year ago

    Just straight-up happenin'!

  2. topvega
    topvega on Thu 5th Oct 2017 - 1 year ago

    Sounds great. Has a Dandy Warhol vibe at the beginning for me. Then the vocals kick in and it sounds more Country Rock. Vocals were solid. I would like a more prominent bassline but that is just nitpicking.
    Overall great track. Nice job.


  3. traz75
    traz75 on Mon 14th Nov 2016 - 2 years ago


    No miss. Hit. :)
    Nice job, i love your guitarplay.
    Regards, traz

  4. Tumbleweed
    Tumbleweed on Fri 19th Feb 2016 - 3 years ago

    Oh yeah...that guitar lick does stick in the head...classic kind of rock lick I recall well from days gone by...I really like this one Kyle..Your vocal is, as always, top notch and I definitely like that country-rock accompaniment you`ve got going...I`m just using some old Sony MDV600 cans & they are terrible on the low end (great for checking highs) so the bass sounds fine...if you need to unmuddy it a bit just try scooping our between 200-400 and bump it a tiny bit at 80...great track Kyle...rea;;y did enjoy it....Ed.

  5. PeteTebar
    PeteTebar on Tue 16th Feb 2016 - 3 years ago

    I can critique about the mix-

    I meant can't critique about the mix. Sorry XD

  6. PeteTebar
    PeteTebar on Tue 16th Feb 2016 - 3 years ago

    Good rockin tune Kyle, I am digging this. It's radio friendly for sure, and catchy too. I can critique about the mix, I'm not all too sure about my mixing effort so I can't say if it's right or wrong. You are truly talented to play all the instruments on here, along with your vocals. I also had a guitar lick I've been wanting to put into music and could never find the ways or means to record it before. This was before I bought my first DAW. I should be recording it soon and sharing it on here.

    Overall, a very good song and production. Well done :)


    Reply by ImproveWithError

    Hey Pete, thanks for taking the time to listen and comment, I appreciate it. I look forward to hearing what you upload.


  7. Evisma
    Evisma on Tue 16th Feb 2016 - 3 years ago


    Voice always reminds me of Dylan. Second vocal in the break is pretty cool.

    I'm not a fan of the lower stuff on the left. Would sound a bit better centered a bit more.

    Not a lot to really say in terms of criticism! More of an intro and outro, but I liked it and the drums had a good sound, though I'd add a bit more hat in the verses.

    I do dig it!


    Reply by ImproveWithError

    Hey Evan thanks for checking out the track and commenting.

  8. BradoSanz
    BradoSanz on Mon 15th Feb 2016 - 3 years ago

    Noting, Static's point at :15 Are there toms playing along side the bass? Might be the cause for muddle.

    DANG DUDE. Your stuff has spiked sharply in quality. No joke. You're getting closer and closer to radio quality. Such a massive (and pleasant) difference from your older work! Towards the later part of the song, it feels a bit unbalanced in volumes on the left and right sides, at least to my ears. Overall, A+ for your improvement! Keep it up. You're seriously improving by leaps and bounds!


    Reply by ImproveWithError

    Hey Brado,

    Thanks for the compliments, I think I enjoy the mixing and mastering stage of the recording process the most now that I am trying to get better at it. I noticed that muddle as well, I mixed this song completely on my Sony MDR 7506's, I haven't has chance to listen on my monitors yet, I keep them in the studio that I put in at my school. I am having trouble finding the right eq move on those headphones since they are not overly bass heavy. Thanks again, I appreciate it immensely.

  9. StaticNomad
    StaticNomad on Sun 14th Feb 2016 - 3 years ago

    Rocky greetings.

    I probably told you that I have most of the EZ kits. I think I recognise this one. Is it the one just called Rock? I tend to forget their names when I'm working with them.

    Anyway, your opening lead guitar has some pretty decent bends in it. A bit country for sure.

    0:15 there seems a bit of a problem with the bass. It seems too subby and interferes with the rest of the track. Have you just got bass guitar there? Definitely something muddy about the low end.

    Song is really quite catchy and fun. Drums are effective and well suited to the genre. Decent fills and switches from hat to ride.

    Mix seems pretty good. Powerful but not painfully loud.

    My main production criticism is regarding the low end. Oh, and the ending, which is very inconclusive and also cuts off abruptly.

    Otherwise, congrats on some good work.

    Reply by ImproveWithError

    I noticed that muddle as well, I mixed this song completely on my Sony MDR 7506's, I haven't had a chance to listen on my monitors yet, I keep them in the studio that I put in at my school. I am having trouble finding the right eq move on those headphones since they are not overly bass heavy. I need to go back and re-fade that ending as well, it was not as smooth as I wanted, I adjusted some sections of the track and it must have messed with that fade not being turned down all the way.

  10. lechina
    lechina on Sun 14th Feb 2016 - 3 years ago

    very nice track.The vocals are splendidly done and agrees with the instruments.Anyway good song i liked it.keep up the good work

    Reply by ImproveWithError

    Thanks for listening to the track and taking the time to comment, I appreciate it.


  11. MGproduct
    MGproduct on Sun 14th Feb 2016 - 3 years ago

    Excellent ... but what is the cause you elect this name ? :)

    Reply by ImproveWithError

    Hey thanks for stopping by to listen and comment. This is a song I wrote for my wife, the little miss was just a catchy sounding phrase that worked for the melody and flow of the song.


  12. djpixxy
    djpixxy on Sat 13th Feb 2016 - 3 years ago

    this type of track takes me to the 70's, It was picture perfect for that time, but music perfect.

    Reply by ImproveWithError

    Hey thanks for stopping by and listening, I appreciate the comment as well. This was a fun track to make, it exceeded my expectations.


  13. danke
    danke on Sat 13th Feb 2016 - 3 years ago

    Great, uplifting, easy listening track Kyle!

    It'll be perfect for my car cd...:-)

    Handshake, Danke

    Reply by ImproveWithError

    Hey Danke,

    Thanks for the listen and the download, I am glad you are going to listen to it on the go. :)

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