In Too Deep - ImproveWithError

Nice - has a Ry Cooder vibe with the slide guitar. Very good pacing - like the way it flows without forcing the tempo. well done.
-clindsay

Wow! I just came across this! I really dig the loosiness of the track. Feels raw, real. That bass provides a lot of punch and drives the heaviness into the song. Great work, always lovin' your stuff :) Btw, your mixing is improving!

Brado

real good, reminds me on a tarantino movie soundtrack :-)
Ben

In my opinion this is the best stuff. Raw, live human performances, imperfections only add to the beauty of it. My brother has been doing alot like this,(bluesdaddy80) just jamming on his acoustic and singing away. Very cool :D

Dont think like this man
who doesnt hate his voice?
its normal, cuz everyone think their voice are so bad
and they hate their voice
and I truely say
I liked your vocie
and I think your voice is beautiful
Kindest regards
J_*

Greetings
the song is great and...
are you the singer of this song?
Kind regards
J_*

I`m diggin this one big time Kyle...it has a nice loose live feel...and I think that comes from just playing & singing the way you do....actually the production is pretty well done...(I`m listening on my studio headphones ..ATM-M50s)...nice job on the lyrics...I like the deep bass (I go for it often) so don`t tame it too much..You have a style I always enjoy.....well done...hope all is well down your way....Ed

Hi, its great to hear some slide guitar on here.
I only listened to your song with my laptop speakers so no critique from me.
I feel like playing some slide myself now.
Cheers
DB

Sound pretty good, tho vocals are flat in some areas. Production wis every good as well

hello again

I had a chance to listen on better system and I really liked the overall message and your vision.

However, my observation and complain is that there is no realistic separation between instruments (regarding to the arrangement and the actual placing the layers/players within a composition). This happened to me many times when making everything myself so do not worry.
For example: there are uncontrolled frequencies coming from the bass guitar clashing with other layers - especially with middle frequency range of the electric 'rhythm guitar' section. So as a result it sounds as if there were at least 2 different chord progressions played simultaneously but in fact those are only 4 simple chords basically.

Just my opinion. Not sure if the problem is in actual playing or mixing. Maybe both or somewhere in between.

Apart of all that the vocals are cool and I truly appreciate the work you did with songwriting as well as the fact that you performed and mixed everything alone. Didgeridoo teaser was nice as well as stereo illusion on it and I really liked all slide guitar additions throughout.

Greetings, Alex

Nice one! The resonating bass is a really killer one! :)
Btw, thanks for the quality loops you uploaded until now too!

regards, traz

hello

this is very fine and very bluesy. I am listening on poor laptop speakers now so there is not much to say in details.
I really liked what you did with EZ patterns - the slow tempo off beat sort of drumming works nicely. Interesting that you have both acoustic and electric guitars within the same composition - it is quite unusual but it really seem to work. I am going to download your song and will take a listen again later on headphones.

Congratulations on songwriting and production.
Alex

Great recording and production ! The overall feel reminds me alot on REM's song "Drive! ! Excellent!

Compliments______Orlando

Hi

Such a lazy feel this - it works very well. Love your vocals and the additonal harmonies. Nice slide acoustic too. Great track. Love it.

Richie

Super slow western acoustic rock with those stunning choruses...first 35 seconds I thought it would be a Bon Jovi cover but fortunatelly not...:-)

Great track Kyle, hats off and handshake, Danke