Description : this is a track that planetjazzbass put up. an ode to the old school hip hop flows and beats that we used to hear. there's room for one more verse if anyone wants to get on it. any feedback would be awesome as well.
Description : pretty cool track
first of that genre as i am more of a rock type of person
6/10/07 - Thanks guys for making this the top downloaded track on looperman as of today. I appreciate it. I plan to get more tracks up soon so stay tuned!
Description : .
Type: Conscious/Lyrical
Writer/Rapper: Knight Heir
Engineer: Pauly's Productions
Producer: J1K
Stay original and keep improving
Description : hip hop track made wit FL studio's
Description : really tried played dat piano to ma best in this one I luv the simplicit bubt alltough its real deep I luv how the piano leads throug the whole song I hope u all enjoy the track, if I get good reviews I might upload the samples as loops too track BPM is 90 make it downloadble. cheerz ya boy dusthill
Description : .
Type: Hype/Lyrical
Rapper/Engineer: Knight Heir
Producer: Broke Boi
Stay original and keep improving
Description : This song is all about SJW and his talent. I just added my verse.
Description : jep theres news from ya boy dusthill didn't go to work today had a few drinks too much yesterday anyway so I started a new Instrumental more hip-hop boosty bass kicks this time but still bein true bout ma love to the orchester. hope you like gonna upload the loops too I think. Enjoy and gimme some reviews pleaaseee ^^ cheerz da swizzy
Description : Hip Hop track made wit FL Studio's
Description : This is The LasT of 3 SP Edition of The ConsPiracy ...! Made on MixCraT 8 Pro...! Hope you enjoy & Keep on PLAY!!!
Description : Very short track. A quick test run of my new equipment. Finally back in the studio working.
Description : This is a song made by my mate, and Produced by The Real Triggz on Soundcloud. Really cool song! Please leave feedback and share! Check out his Soundcloud page: https://soundcloud.com/user-112820814/bxnner-blem-remix
This is his first studio recording song!
Description : * * ARTIST CONTEST TO WIN $100 * *
*CONTEST EXTENDED UNTIL CHRISTMAS*
I am having a contest to see who can take this track, and finish it off DOPE AS FUCK. I will be focusing on three elements.
1. Lyrical Content
2. Flow
3. Overall sound and voice.
Rules are simple. Record over any part in this track that does not already have vocals, and make it dope.
WINNER WILL RECEIVE $100 CASH AND 1 FREE EXCLUSIVE LEASE TO ONE OF MY BEATS OF YOUR CHOICE.
Description : This Is Just A Snippet Of My Song "When I'm Gone" Which Is A Reality Check For My Brothers And Sisters In The World. The World Is In A Bad State Right Now And We Need To Join Together To Restore Some Peace And Integrity. Vanity & Self Love Is A Start For Each Individual And Joining Together Afterwards Can Heal The Wounds We Put on The World. Like, Comment, Download As You Please.
Description : Boombap is the dream genre.
Description : Beat made by william21084
Hot track, and two wicked flows..great work
Yo again.
Thanks for the reply. Good to see PlanetJazz has come back and will take your vocals and even send you the audio tracks to do your own version.
"i didn't know if the words would sound right over the track because of those very aggressive stabs throughout the verses."
Yeah, that's kind of what I was getting at. They're good stabs but interfere quite a bit with the vocals. So, maybe the timing of the stabs can be redone by PlanetJazz to fall more inbetween the vocal lines. Or maybe they could be removed entirely from teh verses. Just the bass and drums should be fine to accompany the vocals. Then the stabs will be more exciting when they return as a break from the vocal. Just my little idea for PlanetJazz, in case he reads this.
I look forward to seeng what the two of you end up with as I feel there's definite room for improvement.
Good work, all the same.
Hey wordy,great flow man!...I dig the expressiveness of your voice and the articulation,great sense of timing to!...I think the best result track wise will be achieved if you send me your whole vocal track by itself,and I mean the whole track length from 000 till the end,so it will register perfectly as a separate track into the existing arrangement (also Bonez's if he adds a verse) and I'll incorporate them into the mix,preferable dry with no effects (I'll add those) I'll also send you all the separate elements of the tune so you can do your own remix as well...great stuff man,you've got that old school vibe nailed down tight!
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Hi Wordy.
I've already commented on the original version of this track in quite a bit of detail so I won't bother again here.
I think your added vocals are, predictably, good. However, there's a big overall problem: the mix is now just too busy.
So, if the top layer of synths could be partially/mostly removed as you're rapping, things would be a lot cleaner. Your vocals get in the way of the nice jazzy bass guitar runs. Not a criticism of you and I understand that you don't have the separate stems to mix - just the one MP3 file of the whole mix.
Second half you've left without vocals so it would be fine to get rid of the top layer of synths in the first minute (as you're rapping) as that stuff gets heard later anyway.
1:12 when you take a bit of a vocal break the other elements can be heard more comfortably again.
I guess the only options are either PlanetJazz sending you the separate elements to mix or you sending him your vocals to incorporate.
Good luck.
im down!!could shoot you a rough by 2morrow!