Open Says Me - Wordybum

this is real shiit , dig it ! i ll send you some beats man , id like to collab , feel free to send some acapellas verses...:)

Man I love this..the beat is hot, the flow is hot, the lyrics are poetic, that's total package bro. Fav this for sure.

nice rhymes bro

Word up, WordyBro, says me.

So sorry for not yet sending you any demos to rap over. I keep putting it off but do still have some initial ideas that I keep meaning to send. I'm also putting off sending someone all my stems so he can do a remix of a track dedicated to him. That's a lot more work than just sending you a couple of MP3s.

Anyway: foreboding intro. Piano and some added buzzing pads. Then the drums are pretty tight and powerful. 0:35 how are you doing that drum fill? Other good and varied drum fills keep popping up.

People can groove to this and your assured and mature vocals lead us through the slightly dark, haunting journey like a good master of ceremony. Interesting lyrics, as always.

My only real complaint is a lack of an obvious change. That would really make it take off and give us a bit of a break from the incessant nature of the track. And then you can have fun returning to that main groove and idea.
Mix sounds pretty good though I guess you know the end is chopped off too abruptly.

Good Wordywork...

P.S. New sort of chillout hip hop track from me:

Rhomboid

https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/168647

dope dope!

Cool track!

Very intense and tensioned...I'm not good in rap so just wanna say thanx for being part in this number!

Respect, Danke

I have to quote MrSkinny: awesome!
Your vocals flow very nicely, liked the short "doubling" parts (again, I have to quote MrSkinny).
The drum-beat is powerful at the right point: liked.
Very "dreamy" piano part which sits very well in the mix. My only suggestion: try to use the piano only for the parts where you are not singing (or at least use it only for some of the parts). While I generally like the idea of a "sad melody" going on in the background the whole time, I think in this case it is not strictly needed: your flow alone can for sure bring enough energy and interest to this song (please, consider that this is my-very-humble-opinion).
Overall: great track!
Ciao, Domenico

Awesome! I love the smooth steady and fluent groove of your vocals. Nice doubling them up as well. Also loving the lyrics. Keyboard and beat bed sways sweetly behind the vocal. Nice work!