People - SeriouslyJoking

5th Nov 2014 21:12 - 11 years ago
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Description : Just an old song I made a while ago in a new costume.
Vox by RarCharm, Isaiah Page (Zaylp) and Patricia Edwards (pitched to unrecognizable). And the worlds greatest house piano loop (oh yes it is) by MrFunctastic.
Still having issues mixing this together. Always something drowning or taking all the space.

Comments (12)

If you have time take a listen and give SeriouslyJoking some feedback.

AnalogDisc
AnalogDisc 17th Nov 2014 17:55 - 11 years ago
the first 20 seconds make me fall off from my chair! so cool! I`m really respect you idea and the track is working pretty well, but technically when the "drop" starts, thats around 1:00, the bassline sounds pretty wierd (out from key?) and the kick should be more powerful (in the whole track) use some compression, anyway the idea is 11/10 and I really like it! Cheers! :)
GramoChopin
GramoChopin 8th Nov 2014 01:37 - 11 years ago
Plus for it ending at 4:20. lol Nice to see you with another track, really digging the piano. Synths are nice, could of done a bit more with the beat though. Maybe add a snare. It's only a suggestion but still manages to work well without a snare because the other instruments. Nice tune SJ! peace

Gramo/Neo
joecramer
joecramer 6th Nov 2014 19:13 - 11 years ago
Hi there :)

First i wanna say -respect- just for a rework.
I done realy a lot of tracks and i love the most of them realy much. Some of them realy need a remake but i never realy had the power to do something mostly the same way again.
If i do, or lets better say -try to do- a rework, it ends still in a new version or a new song :)

You rework here sounds cool to me.
Maybe more skillfull peoples then me can hear things that should be done anyway else but for me it sounds good.
The vocals work good together in the way you used them.

I enjoyed the listen and i think thats wherefor you made it :)

stay tuned
joe
Leverett
Leverett 6th Nov 2014 15:48 - 11 years ago
This is really interesting. Something's not clicking right in the mix, the kick don't snap enough and it lacks fatness, but the composing skills are brilliant for sure! Keep working on it!
enj0612
enj0612 6th Nov 2014 15:47 - 11 years ago
Nice!! I like this. Big "ups" to all involved.
soundhound
soundhound 6th Nov 2014 15:35 - 11 years ago
Really Cool Track...
Good Groove and Feel, I like all of this...

Very well done...

Peace...TG.
SeriouslyJoking
SeriouslyJoking replied 6th Nov 2014 - 11 years ago
Hi TG!
Thanks for listening and letting me know what you think.
I hope all is well with you!

Take care/ SJ =)
ValveDriver
ValveDriver 6th Nov 2014 08:33 - 11 years ago
I don't typically listen to this kind of music, so I can't give a full technical review. But, I have kind of followed your progression as a producer since you joined Looperman. This track is a testament to your dedication. While, yes, there are some things about it that could be improved, overall, it's come a long ways since some of your earlier work. Keep it up. I look forward to hearing more in the future.
Take care.
v.
SeriouslyJoking
SeriouslyJoking replied 6th Nov 2014 - 11 years ago
Hi ValVedriVer, that's very sweet of you to write.

There is a thread in the forums about listening to the old songs you made a while back and feeling very embarrased over how they sound - that's exactly it for me, ha ha.
So I guess there has been some kind of improvement in my musical skills over the time.

Thanks for listening and take care.

Cheers!
/ SJ =)
ProgRockDan1
ProgRockDan1 6th Nov 2014 06:33 - 11 years ago
Enjoyed your song. It has a great dance beat.
SeriouslyJoking
SeriouslyJoking replied 6th Nov 2014 - 11 years ago
Thank you for listening!!
promenade2239
promenade2239 6th Nov 2014 06:28 - 11 years ago
hi, I really like this one. There's again some long reverbs, phaser and other effects I recognize from your other productions but here it sounds just ok to me. For sure the track might need have better mixing if you want it sound good in the club but I can't comment on this cause I do not make this type of music. Anyway the song is very nicely put together but still you can experiment to find some more rational choices when managing all elements inside the song. You might consider to remove some of them even and have a shorter track but with more powerful structure - I know it is difficult when working with acappellas.
Nice effort. Alex
SeriouslyJoking
SeriouslyJoking replied 6th Nov 2014 - 11 years ago
Hi Alex, glad to see you here!

I was just checking your tracks list and noticed that you'r making songs in a furious speed! There is a new track every other day from you since you joined the loop. Talk about a super musical mind and devotion there!!
Amazing.

Yes, I'm hoping to have the patience to go back to this track and do some of the Changes adressed here and try to sort out the mixing issues. It could probably benefit from having it shortened also.

Thanks for listening and taking your time to comment!
/ SJ =)
TheSavage
TheSavage 6th Nov 2014 03:47 - 11 years ago
A solid house track for sure. I actually liked the fact that the mix wasn't over the top it made it very enjoyable for the entire duration and didn't have the typical "side chain" pumping effect so common in tracks like this.
SeriouslyJoking
SeriouslyJoking replied 6th Nov 2014 - 11 years ago
Hi and thanks for listening!

I guess it's a good thing sometimes to be an amatour - it leeves some more room for unusual solutions...

Cheers!
/ SJ =)
Orlando51
Orlando51 6th Nov 2014 00:15 - 11 years ago
Tjena SJ,

I'm not sure if I've listened to the original, but this one is definitely well done...as always.:)

Compliments____Orlando
SeriouslyJoking
SeriouslyJoking replied 6th Nov 2014 - 11 years ago
Hej Orlando!

I made the original a while back, a year or so and have been trying to remake a better mix ever since but it's a difficult track to put together for some reason.

Thanks for listening and take care!
/ SJ =)
StaticNomad
StaticNomad 5th Nov 2014 22:33 - 11 years ago
Hi. I think this is good, even though I'm generally not keen on a lot of house.

It is indeed a cool piano loop (pure hi NRG dance music) and I can see why you think it's the greatest in the world. But don't forget that there may be better ones to be found on other planets.

Some fairly catchy vocals here. I'm going to guess the Patricia Edwards one starts on 1:11 though that could also easily be a synth.

3:03 could be her too. Nice delay on that vocal. Classic dance there too.

Lots of stops and breakdowns in this one.

One small suggestion is for you to beef up the hats in the track. They seem a bit far back in the mix and I think you could make certain sections groove a lot harder with some more prominent and powerful hats. Also maybe use open (or at least more open) hats as yours are very closed and small. Hope that makes sense.

Otherwise, it's well produced and one that people will enjoy in clubs.
SeriouslyJoking
SeriouslyJoking replied 5th Nov 2014 - 11 years ago
Hi Static!
Ok, I'll rephrase it: It's one of the best house piano loops in the universe.

About the three voxes - I didn't repitch Patricias voice that much higher than usual (but I know she really doesn't like to have her voice pitched at all so I'm playing with fire here). But I relly needed a high pitched womans vocal and those are hard to find.

The one 1:11 is a synth! It's a loop by MrFunctastic.

RarCharm has the chorus line and Isaiah Page has the slightly nasal little vox(and is sounding very good even though).

I'm still not happy with the arrangement in this song, especially the intro is still not good. And now I've been listening to this song for too long today. My ears are telling me to stop and never come back.

About the hats - yes I hear what you mean. I also Think the whole drum line is a bit dull and undynamic, maybe it's the closed, distant hats.
Have to EQ some more also to make more space. I still don't know why the tracks sound so different(usually better) in the DAW and loose a lot while rendering? Maybe it's the CPU.

And then there is the mastering...

Thanks for listening and for the advice!
I don't think people will ever get to hear it in clubs though. =D
Or maybe they will, one can only hope ^^

Cheers!
/ SJ =)

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