Persephone - AxelStPatience

This is a really heartfelt song you have written. It is delicate and emotional. Very nice lyrics and they are well delivered. The piano is always great to hear, even if only with just the vocals. Listened on my headphones, mix is ok, could use a little eq work, monsterage had a good idea by watching the sibilance, maybe add some de-esser to the vocals. Do you use a pop filter in front of your mic when you sing? If not I recommend buying or even making one.

I like it, it is a really nice ballad!

Wayne

sounds amazing i would also recommend killing the s's or cutting a little on high frequencies... you can also hear your lips, but for this song i think they go perfect cause it feels personal and emotional... anyways its amazing and loved the piano btw! :)

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Austin , first I wanted to write U should sing closer to microphone ..& also to suggest U always pay attention to your music wave diagram and never let diagram to be steady & montonous & fine drawn ...
but....
no...
I think I was wrong to say them ...
cause U sung such by all your heart , such impressive & frank , that all my words became silent & prefered reticence just to can listen & focus on your simple but heartfelt song ...
thnx for download premission & letting me enjoy this later too more & more ...
and just according to your desciption I'm trying to be usefull as a listener if I want to suggest U to add a sax , or even a cello to this ...
but anyway I should confess that I was surprised by U & your tallents ...
all the best...___Behnam