Description : Hey guys, this is a little song im working on any feedback would be awesome. I think the piano with the strange strange synth i have going on is pretty cool, but not sure. Think this song would be cool with some vocals so if you think you could add some vocals then message me :D Hope you like and remember its not finished yet.. lol
This electronic track was uploaded by XyIlent. They retain full copyright and you are only entitled to listen and in some instances download. For further details on how you can use tracks see the terms and conditions and the tracks section of the help area.
Comments (3)
If you have time take a listen and give XyIlent some feedback.
Well this is something a little different. I like the woo woo sound and there's some cool synth effects and nice piano. But i agree with spivkurl, where's the bass? The kick drum is also a little bit clicky and could do with a bit more punch but the tune it's self is a good idea and the arrangement is nice. I also liked the noise effects that you used.
Keep working on it.
FR
Hey FR! thanks for the listen and comment, and yeah after spivkurl's comment i sat for a bit and made a cool bass for it, and yeah for the kick drum ill try EQ it or something try to get rid of the clickyness :D thanks for the feedback man!:D
Thought I'd take a listen after your forum post. I am enjoying the song for sure. Can honestly say that my vocals probably wouldn't hit the spot on this song though. Not my usual listening preference lately, but I can totally hear the talent that went into it. I get the feeling that it's a little lacking in low frequencies, at least to my preferences. Funky stuff though, I'm glad that I listened!
Thanks spiv for taking the time to give some feedback :D, im glad you enjoyed!, hope you come back for the finished product once ive put your and other peoples advice to good use :).
You might also like these tracks
If you liked XyIlent - Monarch by XyIlent you might also like these other Electronic tracks.
Description : Feel free to check out the video on YT as well (Alan McLaren Project - Upside Down) of this 6min journey from electronic to rock with some psychedelic moments...
This is my latest, but also one of my earliest tracks.... any feedback is more than welcome, thanks :)
Description : 'The main point of this song is really about the frustrations of living in the overload of today's World of Tech. The consequences are impaired communication and that if you advance too far you end up diminishing what you had to start with, so you are way worse off.' Enjoy a 60s Rhythm with a modern deep Bass, a Sitar, a Piano from EvilPianist, a lost flute from UniverseHuston and some Oscillators :-)
If you like our work, please find us under kayos2 on Bandcamp
Description : A demo of one of my current projects. The chorus vocal sounds like "Aaaaraashe" to me. The song is in C# minor with a nod to C# pythagorean on the chorus. The beat on the verse was inspired by the Peter Gabriel song Intruder.
Description : This is one of my earliest productions that I did at the start of my recording career. I did not have a keyboard at the time I made this song, so I improvised and used my sister's iPad and a 5 dollar GarageBand application instead, and plugged the headset jack into into my PT6 rig and did my best to turn each individual track (which were mono and there were about 25 tracks or so) into a stereo image. Then recorded vocals over it. My computer was so old and slow that I had to mix my music and then BOUNCE it to a new session - four times. My computer (which had 512 MB RAM and an 80 GB hard drive) couldn't handle more than 8 tracks at a time or it'd stop working because the processor couldn't handle it. Took me FOREVER to do. But I got it done. Had a lot of fun doing it too, even if it isn't my "best" work. I'm still happy with it, considering I didn't have many tools to choose from at the time.
Description : Long time lurker first time poster, pretty new to production n stuff, this is my first track in Ableton Live.
was going for a darkwave/synthwave sound, reminiscent of Justice, Carpenter Brut, Perturbator, ect.
Looking for some feed back, constructive criticisms or even just your thoughts if you liked it or not. This is just a rough cut on this current WIP, just the bones of it if you will.. If you have some cool title suggestions, would love to hear those too.
Thanks for listening.
-B
Description : NEON DRIVE is a smooth flowing electronic track with a steady progression. I hope it entertains you and creates a temporary dreamscape for you to get lost in.
Originally started in 2008, cleaned up and completed on October 28, 2014.
Keep working on it.
FR
Love & Light,
Mykael
Thanks for the comment Mykael :D