See Saw Reverse - NinrI

Also I would love to sample it. If that is OK with you? Let me know. I will credit you.

I am really digging this track it reminds me times inmy life that i have fallen short. I love the simplicity of it and the hard in your face aspect of it. But yeah the bass synth is too strong. But I guess it is a raw audio so i shouldnt complain,

Some of the sounds remind me a little of Valvedriver's stuff, though without the drums.

Quite a dark and menacing vibe you have here.

0:32 I don't like that bassy synth. It's too loud, raw (ie basic synth sound) and buzzy and doesn't seem to fit. And it fades out abruptly/awkwardly at various points. Sounds more at home in a dubstep track. Other synths around it have much more beauty and vibe to them.

I'd completely change that synth sound though the notes and timing are probably fine.

2:40 it's good when the bass joins that lead melody and then the ethereal pad fades in. And then that problem synth is back, dominating everything else.

SO, I'd change one big, main problem and then I think you'd have a really effective, atmospheric, mysterious piece that would be suitable for all sorts of sound design work.

I probably wouldn't listen to it as a standalone piece but some people certainly would. I prefer to have drums and more movement and melody and stuff.

But the vibe you have going here is good.

This comes across as very simple, but it's effective. I like it.
I think maybe it would fit better in the Ambient genre, though.

Take care.
V.