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5th May 2014 22:16 - 11 years ago
Description : This track have a mix of instrument as saxophone,drums,bass, electric guitar, pinao, tambora, guiro and claps. Please tell me what is your opinion about the track

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If you have time take a listen and give JohnJeremih some feedback.

IceSage
IceSage 7th Dec 2014 08:04 - 10 years ago
I think that there's something missing from this track, but I don't know what it is...
EricMilligan
EricMilligan 6th May 2014 03:00 - 11 years ago
Hey, John. Version 4 has some definite improvements I think. I auditioned both your new version and the original version 1 and can hear the changes you've made. I think SeriouslyJoking has a good point about the missing bass line and perhaps some pads to fill in, although I wouldn't make them too prominent in the mix. I think it has a definite latin feel to it. If I were working on the track, I'd experiment with adding some latin percussion, although I have a suspicion that I'd eventually decide not to go that way or to use them very sparingly. I'd also try adding some really thick claps on the backbeats. I'm thinking this might give it more of a traditional gospel feel. Might not be what you are wanting, but I like gospel music and I can hear this track shifting more in that direction. Keep it up.
JohnJeremih
JohnJeremih replied 14th May 2014 - 11 years ago
Many Thanks Eric,I want to make a different music than others. Really the voice of the music is in spanish but as all people here speak in english i translate the name, and im from Dominican Republic. i was download a new Vst for the FL Studio for have a real clap, for the next track i will include it.

Thanks again
TuneDef
TuneDef 5th May 2014 22:46 - 11 years ago
The breakdown at 1 minute was on point at 1:30 nice as well, this new age gospel is catchy, if I say so myself!

Tune D
JohnJeremih
JohnJeremih replied 14th May 2014 - 11 years ago
Hey! Tune D, in the point that you say i include a rap.

God Bless You My friend
Thanks for you comment
SeriouslyJoking
SeriouslyJoking 5th May 2014 22:44 - 11 years ago
Well, for what it's worth coming from a newbeginner - here are my thoughts:
It's a good start, very interesting changes in the beat and a cool melody.

I'm missing a bass line to give it a base and some pads and build ups.

Looking forward to hear the progress!
Cheers/ SJ =)
JohnJeremih
JohnJeremih replied 14th May 2014 - 11 years ago
Hi SeriouslyJoking, yes you have the reason, i will work in that for the next track

Many thanks my friend
God Bless you

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