I Will Follow Jesus V4 Almost Ready - JohnJeremih

I think that there's something missing from this track, but I don't know what it is...

Hey, John. Version 4 has some definite improvements I think. I auditioned both your new version and the original version 1 and can hear the changes you've made. I think SeriouslyJoking has a good point about the missing bass line and perhaps some pads to fill in, although I wouldn't make them too prominent in the mix. I think it has a definite latin feel to it. If I were working on the track, I'd experiment with adding some latin percussion, although I have a suspicion that I'd eventually decide not to go that way or to use them very sparingly. I'd also try adding some really thick claps on the backbeats. I'm thinking this might give it more of a traditional gospel feel. Might not be what you are wanting, but I like gospel music and I can hear this track shifting more in that direction. Keep it up.

The breakdown at 1 minute was on point at 1:30 nice as well, this new age gospel is catchy, if I say so myself!

Tune D

Well, for what it's worth coming from a newbeginner - here are my thoughts:
It's a good start, very interesting changes in the beat and a cool melody.

I'm missing a bass line to give it a base and some pads and build ups.

Looking forward to hear the progress!
Cheers/ SJ =)