3MC - Laid Back Instrumental - Rockerjojo7616

this is nice :D
i liked

Класс! Профессионально!

Did you get my message about sending me some ideas vocally on what I was referring to on the first comment?

Drawn in right away. I think you should cut out the drum "metronome" at the beginning and just launch in right at 4 seconds. I really like how this has some different sections for a vocalist, because the drumline starts to get a bit repetitive until 48 seconds. The transition from the regular drumline to the new one at 48 seconds and also the one at 2:12 threw me off a bit- like it didn't quite fall on time...maybe this is an acquired taste. Between 1:51 and 1:52 it delays just a bit and some parts following. Love the guitar at 2:27- wanna hear more of that throughout, with more variation.

Since this is still in progress, I encourage you to play around more with the guitar side of things.

This track is awesome, I was totally making up lyrics to it as I listened and felt some Nirvana in there. Get wild with it, break away from the pattern of the drums a bit more and let your inner rocker out!! This track is well on its way!! Could easily hear a finished product with some lyrics on the rock radio station.

In my opinion, vocally, the transitions at 48 seconds and 2:12 could use some whispered lyrics. Some of the chorus spots could use some ambient yelling or screams.