Justified By Lies - Crypt

absolutely brutal screams... you do the vocals?

This is a good metal track. Meaning, it really is metal. It's heavy, loud and raw. There's enough of riff change that it doesn't get boring, but they're not so drastic that it loses the grove. The drums are good. I like the fact that there is an actual beat and not just blast beats from beginning to end. However, it's basically the same beat all the way through. It needs some variation and some big-##### fills to bring out the badassery of the tune. Mainly towards the end. Some double kick, and those blast beats would do wonders for that part. This beast rolls along so nicely, but never really seems to take off. But even so, that doesn't hinder what you already have.
As far as Manson being an influence and having a "Manson sound", that doesn't matter. Even Mr. Warner had his influences, ya know?
Overall, this is a quality metal track that deserves more love than it has.

Take care.
V.

greatest respects for mentalitY of your lyriX .
& your voice & execution is suitable for heavY metal
& especiallY such psyco style , jusT I wished there was not such obviously sensible marylin mansonian (if we think it's a new word ! ) vibe in this worthy challenge..althughT I underestand that's my problem ...
I also think your friend's Band which is going to do a remiX will show us real strong ponits of this good instrumental & impressive vocal of yours which tottalY mking this track as a groovy package.i'll looking forward to hear that new remiX too . regards.___Behnam

EPIC, DOPE, DOOMED, SICK!!!

Love it...

Danke