I From IRAN - Pikozz

27th Feb 2014 09:56 - 12 years ago
Description : The first song that I wrote, please give comments

Comments (21)

If you have time take a listen and give pikozz some feedback.

mmehdi
mmehdi 1st Apr 2015 16:07 - 11 years ago
eyval dashi
armee9898
armee9898 30th Mar 2015 21:22 - 11 years ago
Great Song!
Tripcore
Tripcore 30th Mar 2015 17:24 - 11 years ago
I think the genre of this song is dance music (electronic dance music). There's some flaws in there but overall an interesting tune.
ScottB55
ScottB55 29th Mar 2015 00:45 - 11 years ago
Interesting track. Sounds more jazz than rock, though. Has a bit of a Latin vibe to it...Good job!

Cheers,
Scott
Evisma
Evisma 28th Mar 2015 14:44 - 11 years ago
Wow. Quite weird. I liked it a lot. Not rock, but progressive as hell!

Definantly heard 0:40 riff before. Santana's "Smooth". If it's not a total lift, it was close.

"I think you have the riff from "I like it like that" in there." T.V.

Seems a bit shady to have riffs so close or identical to famous tracks. May want to do some altering.
pikozz
pikozz replied 28th Mar 2015 - 11 years ago
Thank you for your opinion
MisterCH
MisterCH 1st Apr 2014 23:22 - 12 years ago
Although not rock, this instrumental is great and mixes a great lot of elements that make it both interesting and hard to define it in a single genre. I never really cared much about these genre definitions, anyway.
It's your first track and it's really great, keep doing this! Also, about the abrupt ending (although not so abrupt), I don't know if you chose to do that on purpose or if you simply forgot to add a fade out to the track. I prefer the conventional fade out manner of ending, but I don't mind abrupt endings that much.
anksgenuine
anksgenuine 14th Mar 2014 16:27 - 12 years ago
i like it... i dnt care wht the people say... its a fusion rock... love it... best of luck... work some on stoping point...
SikStyle1
SikStyle1 13th Mar 2014 22:18 - 12 years ago
Great jobs man I'm from USA
LUNCK
LUNCK 13th Mar 2014 21:43 - 12 years ago
guy, you normal?
johnnyproducing
johnnyproducing 13th Mar 2014 17:21 - 12 years ago
Interesting composition you came up with, suggest you turn down the volume a bit on the last part since it went all distorted but I liked the track in general ;)
Spivkurl
Spivkurl 13th Mar 2014 15:14 - 12 years ago
Hey, nice song! I see some people are saying this isn't rock, and I guess I know what they mean, but at the same time rock shouldn't have so many rules. It puts me in mind of Jethro Tull, who is definitely rock for the most part. Also gives me some hints of "fusion" which is an available genre here on Looperman. Any way I like it a lot! The only thing I noticed is that you seem to have clipping or distortion throughout most of the track, may want to lower some faders or check that your mastering plugins aren't going past 0 dB. Good work!
evanvlachos
evanvlachos 9th Mar 2014 16:46 - 12 years ago
yeah! it's jazz-y, making you move around and dance! Not bad at all! But it's not rock, some people are not gonna listen to it just because they're prejudiced about that :)
shayannasheri
shayannasheri 6th Mar 2014 08:39 - 12 years ago
yo I'm from iran too lol karaj mehrshahr faze 4 .
Orlando51
Orlando51 6th Mar 2014 01:00 - 12 years ago
This is certainly not rock, but as it is, it's not bad at all..some interesting sounds in there!

All the best___orlando
KAMPUTERA
KAMPUTERA 5th Mar 2014 22:42 - 12 years ago
For the First you did very well. A nice jazz pop show tune. Very easy to listen to and meander along with the music. A pleasure to listen.
RossCessna
RossCessna 5th Mar 2014 21:18 - 12 years ago
Hey Thats a great sounding track. I really enjoyed it. I am going to throw some vocals over it.
Danke
Danke 5th Mar 2014 21:15 - 12 years ago
one more thing...I'm not good in genres and styles but there are many elements of cha cha cha in this song, which is the best part of this rock song...:-)

stay safe, Danke
Danke
Danke 5th Mar 2014 21:04 - 12 years ago
Dear friend, I really don't wanna disturb you but you made a mistake to sign this in rock genre...agree with Lady, you'd better search at this pages like Topvega, Staticnomad, MWRatridge, Tumbleweed, Frenki and so on, what music is called rock...good luck...:-)

Danke
ElenaSatine
ElenaSatine 5th Mar 2014 20:47 - 12 years ago
! LOL ! sorry is this a new joke that you have called
it rock !?
aahhh....why Iran is like that ?
there's someone whose works is frightfully good there,
most technical player you've ever known and his skills is transcontinental and not only over Asia that to be fair
even over europe too !
but then if we say nothing to that the only one ,all the others sound infantile there !
i actually don't underestand !
Burtsbluesboxes
Burtsbluesboxes 5th Mar 2014 20:19 - 12 years ago
This is really good for a first try :D i Like that creepy organ hahaha Flute is nice :P Well done! Maybe you could slowly fade it out instead of just stopping.
topvega
topvega 28th Feb 2014 00:47 - 12 years ago
Not sure I would call this Rock, but it starts off interestingly. I think you have the riff from "I like it like that" in there.

tv
pikozz
pikozz replied 1st Mar 2014 - 12 years ago
Thank you!

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