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Description : The first song that I wrote, please give comments

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  1. mmehdi
    mmehdi on Wed 1st Apr 2015 - 4 years ago

    eyval dashi

  2. armee9898
    armee9898 on Mon 30th Mar 2015 - 4 years ago

    Great Song!

  3. Tripcore
    Tripcore on Mon 30th Mar 2015 - 4 years ago

    I think the genre of this song is dance music (electronic dance music). There's some flaws in there but overall an interesting tune.

  4. ScottB55
    ScottB55 on Sun 29th Mar 2015 - 4 years ago

    Interesting track. Sounds more jazz than rock, though. Has a bit of a Latin vibe to it...Good job!


  5. Evisma
    Evisma on Sat 28th Mar 2015 - 4 years ago

    Wow. Quite weird. I liked it a lot. Not rock, but progressive as hell!

    Definantly heard 0:40 riff before. Santana's "Smooth". If it's not a total lift, it was close.

    "I think you have the riff from "I like it like that" in there." T.V.

    Seems a bit shady to have riffs so close or identical to famous tracks. May want to do some altering.

    Reply by pikozz

    Thank you for your opinion

  6. MisterCH
    MisterCH on Tue 1st Apr 2014 - 5 years ago

    Although not rock, this instrumental is great and mixes a great lot of elements that make it both interesting and hard to define it in a single genre. I never really cared much about these genre definitions, anyway.
    It's your first track and it's really great, keep doing this! Also, about the abrupt ending (although not so abrupt), I don't know if you chose to do that on purpose or if you simply forgot to add a fade out to the track. I prefer the conventional fade out manner of ending, but I don't mind abrupt endings that much.

  7. anksgenuine
    anksgenuine on Fri 14th Mar 2014 - 5 years ago

    i like it... i dnt care wht the people say... its a fusion rock... love it... best of luck... work some on stoping point...

  8. SikStyle1
    SikStyle1 on Thu 13th Mar 2014 - 5 years ago

    Great jobs man I'm from USA

  9. LUNCK
    LUNCK on Thu 13th Mar 2014 - 5 years ago

    guy, you normal?

  10. johnnyproducing
    johnnyproducing on Thu 13th Mar 2014 - 5 years ago

    Interesting composition you came up with, suggest you turn down the volume a bit on the last part since it went all distorted but I liked the track in general ;)

  11. Spivkurl
    Spivkurl on Thu 13th Mar 2014 - 5 years ago

    Hey, nice song! I see some people are saying this isn't rock, and I guess I know what they mean, but at the same time rock shouldn't have so many rules. It puts me in mind of Jethro Tull, who is definitely rock for the most part. Also gives me some hints of "fusion" which is an available genre here on Looperman. Any way I like it a lot! The only thing I noticed is that you seem to have clipping or distortion throughout most of the track, may want to lower some faders or check that your mastering plugins aren't going past 0 dB. Good work!

  12. evanvlachos
    evanvlachos on Sun 9th Mar 2014 - 5 years ago

    yeah! it's jazz-y, making you move around and dance! Not bad at all! But it's not rock, some people are not gonna listen to it just because they're prejudiced about that :)

  13. shayannasheri
    shayannasheri on Thu 6th Mar 2014 - 5 years ago

    yo I'm from iran too lol karaj mehrshahr faze 4 .

  14. Orlando51
    Orlando51 on Thu 6th Mar 2014 - 5 years ago

    This is certainly not rock, but as it is, it's not bad at all..some interesting sounds in there!

    All the best___orlando

    KAMPUTERA on Wed 5th Mar 2014 - 5 years ago

    For the First you did very well. A nice jazz pop show tune. Very easy to listen to and meander along with the music. A pleasure to listen.

  16. RossCessna
    RossCessna on Wed 5th Mar 2014 - 5 years ago

    Hey Thats a great sounding track. I really enjoyed it. I am going to throw some vocals over it.

  17. danke
    danke on Wed 5th Mar 2014 - 5 years ago

    one more thing...I'm not good in genres and styles but there are many elements of cha cha cha in this song, which is the best part of this rock song...:-)

    stay safe, Danke

  18. danke
    danke on Wed 5th Mar 2014 - 5 years ago

    Dear friend, I really don't wanna disturb you but you made a mistake to sign this in rock genre...agree with Lady, you'd better search at this pages like Topvega, Staticnomad, MWRatridge, Tumbleweed, Frenki and so on, what music is called rock...good luck...:-)


  19. ladyinred
    ladyinred on Wed 5th Mar 2014 - 5 years ago

    ! LOL ! sorry is this a new joke that you have called
    it rock !?
    aahhh....why Iran is like that ?
    there's someone whose works is frightfully good there,
    most technical player you've ever known and his skills is transcontinental and not only over Asia that to be fair
    even over europe too !
    but then if we say nothing to that the only one ,all the others sound infantile there !
    i actually don't underestand !

  20. Burtsbluesboxes
    Burtsbluesboxes on Wed 5th Mar 2014 - 5 years ago

    This is really good for a first try :D i Like that creepy organ hahaha Flute is nice :P Well done! Maybe you could slowly fade it out instead of just stopping.

  21. topvega
    topvega on Fri 28th Feb 2014 - 5 years ago

    Not sure I would call this Rock, but it starts off interestingly. I think you have the riff from "I like it like that" in there.


    Reply by pikozz

    Thank you!

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