Description : AS ALWAYS IM LOOKING FOR ANY AND ALL FEEDBACK PLEASE.
Closest to a complete grime track I've managed to put together. Grime is what I want to produce.
Feel that the claps and snares need better mixing, hit me uo if you can help.
I'm happy to send the project file (FL Studio 10) to anyone who could take this further, just let me know and I'll get it to you ASAP.

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  1. NoSalary
    NoSalary on Mon 18th Jun 2018 - 1 year ago

    wow! i like the melody

  2. sorce83
    sorce83 on Sun 8th Mar 2015 - 4 years ago

    hey dude sounding sweet as a nut!!
    could u send me the file and we can collab and I can see what I can do to it?
    thanks

  3. Diskonnect
    Diskonnect on Fri 28th Feb 2014 - 5 years ago

    What you have sounds pretty good so far. Maybe try varying the patterns up a bit to make it a bit longer. Some synth or pad stabs would prob sound good over this, and a breakdown to chill things out for a bit and then drop the bass again. Keep it up man, good job! :)

  4. Spivkurl
    Spivkurl on Thu 27th Feb 2014 - 5 years ago

    Hey it's pretty cool for sure! I like the instruments you used, and it's got pretty good loudness. I think the main thing you should work is the stereo field. Many of the parts that are panned seem really one sided, I'm not sure if they are panned completely to one side or not. One thing I like to do to make things a little more stereo, is to send the panned part to a "send" and pan it a little bit in the opposite direction. You can add FX to this send, and when I do that I usually try to make the send FX wet, and turn down the fader on the send to adjust the FX mix. I hope that makes sense. This way you can adjust the volume and panning of two seperate channels for one instrument to suit your tastes. Anyway, I really like the track! Keep at it!

    cheeseymofodude
    Reply by cheeseymofodude

    Very very useful feedback! Something that had never occurred to me or that Iv spotted done on any youtubes! THANKS!

  5. mrwolf14
    mrwolf14 on Thu 27th Feb 2014 - 5 years ago

    I don't know at all what Grime is but you made me curious, so I have just listened to "Dizzee Rascal" (I luv u)

    Actually I think your track is better than his: you have good sounds, clean and powerful. Maybe you could make thing more interesting by creating a bit more "counterparts" between the deep bass and the synth line: they go really hand-in-hand for most of the track.

    But of course the "determining factor" is the vocal lines that you can put on your beat.
    So, all you need now is to record a nice vocal track.

    Wish you all the best.
    Ciao, Domenico

    cheeseymofodude
    Reply by cheeseymofodude

    Iv been writing lyrics and practising rapping/mc'ing far longer than I've been trying to create beats, as soon as I get my hands on a mic you'll be hearing from me!
    To hear that someone feels anything I've done is better than dizzee means alot, but I wouldn't judge grime on dizzee alone. JME is a far bigger influence for me.
    If your still curious... JME, Skepta, scorcher, Lethal bizzle.... or stuff produced by Teddy, Preditah, Rude Kid

  6. Baggadub
    Baggadub on Thu 27th Feb 2014 - 5 years ago

    Hi..thanx for sharing this track.

    cheeseymofodude
    Reply by cheeseymofodude

    Thanks for listening! Id love to hear what you think, particularly how you think it could be improved!

  7. OdotZED
    OdotZED on Tue 25th Feb 2014 - 5 years ago

    got a old school vibe wiv the cow bell in the drums,and the claps make it flow nice too,maybe the melody needs more variation and some bass layered wiv it..but nice man keep it up

    cheeseymofodude
    Reply by cheeseymofodude

    bless up!

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