Unrequited Love -Original Song- Soleil Lune - SoraSolitudine

6th Oct 2013 05:11 - 13 years ago
Tags :
Classical
8.87 MB
Description : Hi everybody! Well... I finally made my own song. As I said before: I know nothing about music, so, sorry for mistakes and stuff. I know that this melody is very simple, but it's only the beginning. Maybe I'll be able to make more elaborated songs. Constructive criticisms are always welcome. This melody was made in Magix Music Maker 2013 Premium. I hope you like it! Thanks! SUN & MOON... FIRE & ICE HEART... LIGHT & DARK FUSION...

Comments (12)

If you have time take a listen and give SoraSolitudine some feedback.

JayLope
JayLope 10th Apr 2016 09:07 - 10 years ago
beautiful track.
johnnyproducing
johnnyproducing 14th Nov 2013 22:20 - 12 years ago
I think that if you try to make a track to complex it looses the interest of people so in that way simple things can still stand out in the crowd, I must say that your track is great and for a first try on making your own music it's certainly not bad. I think if you want to take it to a next level you should just get a hang of how chord progressions work so you can add more complexity in a track. Good to hear one of your tracks again, was a long time since I heard one of them ;) Have fun experimenting with other tracks ;)

Greetings johnny
AngelFox2580
AngelFox2580 8th Nov 2013 05:12 - 12 years ago
Sometimes its the simplest track that is the best because it can show more felling then the most complex tracks out there. Job well done on this i like this a lot i can feel a lot of emotions from you hard work and it shows as well =D. Also i finished the track i posted up its called storyteller take a listen when you get some free time :)
SoraSolitudine
SoraSolitudine replied 9th Dec 2013 - 12 years ago
Thanks for your words. Well, as I said on description: this is my first composition, it's not so good as I want, but it's something and it's mine.
I'll check your song now.
Thanks for listening and comment! :D
domr30
domr30 9th Oct 2013 06:57 - 13 years ago
TRES BELLE PIECE
SoraSolitudine
SoraSolitudine replied 9th Dec 2013 - 12 years ago
Merci :)
Burtsbluesboxes
Burtsbluesboxes 7th Oct 2013 18:49 - 13 years ago
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6gHEIF0rT2w Try this guy :D
Beautiful track. Love the melodies, very well done!!
SoraSolitudine
SoraSolitudine replied 9th Dec 2013 - 12 years ago
I'll check it out. Thank you! :D
beerling1970
beerling1970 7th Oct 2013 16:05 - 13 years ago
WOW this is such a beautiful track its very emotional and sad. I nearly cried listening to it. brilliant work :)
SoraSolitudine
SoraSolitudine replied 9th Dec 2013 - 12 years ago
Thank you very much for listening :)
the47
the47 7th Oct 2013 11:35 - 13 years ago
very nice choice of instruments, not sure if you made those yourself (don't know a thing about that music maker) but it surely sounds good together
nice and calm
SoraSolitudine
SoraSolitudine replied 9th Dec 2013 - 12 years ago
Thanks for listening and comment :D
DouglasS
DouglasS 7th Oct 2013 06:57 - 13 years ago
Hi,

I can definitively appreciate simplicity in music, as they are the melodies that we remember.

First and foremost I believe you have captured a very thoughtful sound, one that is very good. I enjoyed every minute (all three of them) of this song, yes it was simple, but it was also well defined and you kept working around that elegant melody. If this is your first song, I cannot wait to hear what you have in store for us later! Great track thanks for sharing! If I had to make one suggestion, it would be too check out some of the tutorials around the net on tweaking sound, they have helped me to learn to adjust my methods for the better, in particular the strings. as they are difficult for me.
crucethus
crucethus 7th Oct 2013 06:17 - 13 years ago
It's about time you explore your own compositions... don't worry about the simplicity in chord structures of this piece, your arrangement is sublime. you have the (natural talent) ear for arranging music. I hope you learn as much as you can. My early compositions were simple chord structures. ( I just put one on looperman) I was fortunate to study in (college) music theory and to be exposed to many forms of music. But I will always remember that obsession I had with making music when I was 16. the same obsession you have, and don't worry about professionals and music theory majors in school, just follow your heart's desire of music when you can and enjoy what you create.
Steve
Candelaria
Candelaria 7th Oct 2013 03:58 - 13 years ago
forgive me if persoanly I am a direct person .
who exactly as you have written in your profile ,
has used to be paritcular all the times .
hence ,i don't censor myself to say it's alittle spooney ?
very easy and simple notes of piano are not valuable enough
to can call this cinematic .
those violins are very dry and such vst using uses for
kindergardens here in spain!!
hope you'll be better about compostion and equalizing soon.
keep working and don't give up .
SoraSolitudine
SoraSolitudine replied 7th Oct 2013 - 13 years ago
Bueno, no todos son tan afortunados como tú por poder estudiar música y tener un buen equipo para componer.
Hago lo que puedo con lo poco que tengo. Pero claro, supongo que para una profesional como tú, esto es sólo una estupidez.

Pues, bueno... avanzo a mi ritmo. Entre la poesía, el dibujo, la fotografía, el diseño digital y el canto no me doy mucho tiempo tampoco para meterme de lleno a la música (y ojo que todo lo que hago lo hago sin haber recibido instrucción alguna). Además, la ingeniería en sistemas computacionales me quita bastante tiempo también.

Si quejarte de lo que otros con mucho esfuerzo pueden hacer es para ti una buena crítica constructiva, entonces yo soy Marie Curie. e_e
Gracias por escuchar y comentar.
Tumbleweed
Tumbleweed 7th Oct 2013 02:33 - 13 years ago
Hi SoleilxLune....you know enough about music to convey some very pleasant Sunday evening listening over my way...it does have a touch of the meloncholy...but the lighter sounds & high strings keep it floating just above becoming sad (if you had added a cello it would have really come across much sadder)...I like it the way it is...not too meloncholy...but certainly thoughtful....You did very well...keep on doing it....Ed
SoraSolitudine
SoraSolitudine replied 9th Dec 2013 - 12 years ago
Aww! Thank you very much for your words.
Well, I think that this one is very (extremely simple ._. )
I've not been able to compose these last weeks.
University takes all my time.
Anyway, maybe I'll upload another song of mine soon.
Thanks for listening and comment :D
StaticProjekt
StaticProjekt 6th Oct 2013 23:56 - 13 years ago
Real chill, i like the mixture of sounds, go well together
SoraSolitudine
SoraSolitudine replied 7th Oct 2013 - 13 years ago
Thank you very much! :D

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