Tags : | Classical | 8.87 MB

Description : Hi everybody! Well... I finally made my own song. As I said before: I know nothing about music, so, sorry for mistakes and stuff. I know that this melody is very simple, but it's only the beginning. Maybe I'll be able to make more elaborated songs. Constructive criticisms are always welcome. This melody was made in Magix Music Maker 2013 Premium. I hope you like it! Thanks! SUN & MOON... FIRE & ICE HEART... LIGHT & DARK FUSION...

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  1. JayLope
    JayLope on Sun 10th Apr 2016 - 6 years ago

    beautiful track.

  2. johnnyproducing
    johnnyproducing on Thu 14th Nov 2013 - 8 years ago

    I think that if you try to make a track to complex it looses the interest of people so in that way simple things can still stand out in the crowd, I must say that your track is great and for a first try on making your own music it's certainly not bad. I think if you want to take it to a next level you should just get a hang of how chord progressions work so you can add more complexity in a track. Good to hear one of your tracks again, was a long time since I heard one of them ;) Have fun experimenting with other tracks ;)

    Greetings johnny

  3. AngelFox2580
    AngelFox2580 on Fri 8th Nov 2013 - 8 years ago

    Sometimes its the simplest track that is the best because it can show more felling then the most complex tracks out there. Job well done on this i like this a lot i can feel a lot of emotions from you hard work and it shows as well =D. Also i finished the track i posted up its called storyteller take a listen when you get some free time :)

    SoleilxLune
    Reply by SoleilxLune

    Thanks for your words. Well, as I said on description: this is my first composition, it's not so good as I want, but it's something and it's mine.
    I'll check your song now.
    Thanks for listening and comment! :D

  4. domr30
    domr30 on Wed 9th Oct 2013 - 8 years ago

    TRES BELLE PIECE

    SoleilxLune
    Reply by SoleilxLune

    Merci :)

  5. Burtsbluesboxes
    Burtsbluesboxes on Mon 7th Oct 2013 - 8 years ago

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6gHEIF0rT2w Try this guy :D
    Beautiful track. Love the melodies, very well done!!

    SoleilxLune
    Reply by SoleilxLune

    I'll check it out. Thank you! :D

  6. beerling1970
    beerling1970 on Mon 7th Oct 2013 - 8 years ago

    WOW this is such a beautiful track its very emotional and sad. I nearly cried listening to it. brilliant work :)

    SoleilxLune
    Reply by SoleilxLune

    Thank you very much for listening :)

  7. the47
    the47 on Mon 7th Oct 2013 - 8 years ago

    very nice choice of instruments, not sure if you made those yourself (don't know a thing about that music maker) but it surely sounds good together
    nice and calm

    SoleilxLune
    Reply by SoleilxLune

    Thanks for listening and comment :D

  8. DouglasS
    DouglasS on Mon 7th Oct 2013 - 8 years ago

    Hi,

    I can definitively appreciate simplicity in music, as they are the melodies that we remember.

    First and foremost I believe you have captured a very thoughtful sound, one that is very good. I enjoyed every minute (all three of them) of this song, yes it was simple, but it was also well defined and you kept working around that elegant melody. If this is your first song, I cannot wait to hear what you have in store for us later! Great track thanks for sharing! If I had to make one suggestion, it would be too check out some of the tutorials around the net on tweaking sound, they have helped me to learn to adjust my methods for the better, in particular the strings. as they are difficult for me.

  9. crucethus
    crucethus on Mon 7th Oct 2013 - 8 years ago

    It's about time you explore your own compositions... don't worry about the simplicity in chord structures of this piece, your arrangement is sublime. you have the (natural talent) ear for arranging music. I hope you learn as much as you can. My early compositions were simple chord structures. ( I just put one on looperman) I was fortunate to study in (college) music theory and to be exposed to many forms of music. But I will always remember that obsession I had with making music when I was 16. the same obsession you have, and don't worry about professionals and music theory majors in school, just follow your heart's desire of music when you can and enjoy what you create.
    Steve

  10. Candelaria
    Candelaria on Mon 7th Oct 2013 - 8 years ago

    forgive me if persoanly I am a direct person .
    who exactly as you have written in your profile ,
    has used to be paritcular all the times .
    hence ,i don't censor myself to say it's alittle spooney ?
    very easy and simple notes of piano are not valuable enough
    to can call this cinematic .
    those violins are very dry and such vst using uses for
    kindergardens here in spain!!
    hope you'll be better about compostion and equalizing soon.
    keep working and don't give up .

    SoleilxLune
    Reply by SoleilxLune

    Bueno, no todos son tan afortunados como t por poder estudiar msica y tener un buen equipo para componer.
    Hago lo que puedo con lo poco que tengo. Pero claro, supongo que para una profesional como t, esto es slo una estupidez.

    Pues, bueno... avanzo a mi ritmo. Entre la poesa, el dibujo, la fotografa, el diseo digital y el canto no me doy mucho tiempo tampoco para meterme de lleno a la msica (y ojo que todo lo que hago lo hago sin haber recibido instruccin alguna). Adems, la ingeniera en sistemas computacionales me quita bastante tiempo tambin.

    Si quejarte de lo que otros con mucho esfuerzo pueden hacer es para ti una buena crtica constructiva, entonces yo soy Marie Curie. e_e
    Gracias por escuchar y comentar.

  11. Tumbleweed
    Tumbleweed on Mon 7th Oct 2013 - 8 years ago

    Hi SoleilxLune....you know enough about music to convey some very pleasant Sunday evening listening over my way...it does have a touch of the meloncholy...but the lighter sounds & high strings keep it floating just above becoming sad (if you had added a cello it would have really come across much sadder)...I like it the way it is...not too meloncholy...but certainly thoughtful....You did very well...keep on doing it....Ed

    SoleilxLune
    Reply by SoleilxLune

    Aww! Thank you very much for your words.
    Well, I think that this one is very (extremely simple ._. )
    I've not been able to compose these last weeks.
    University takes all my time.
    Anyway, maybe I'll upload another song of mine soon.
    Thanks for listening and comment :D

  12. StaticProjekt
    StaticProjekt on Sun 6th Oct 2013 - 8 years ago

    Real chill, i like the mixture of sounds, go well together

    SoleilxLune
    Reply by SoleilxLune

    Thank you very much! :D

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