Hannah Is A HoHoHo Drunk For Christmas - AidenArrows

Nice songs. I agree with the comment from ImpendingDoom about the lyrics.
Regarding the music part... I think the drums could be a bit more "definite" (I am not sure if you want to make them more "punchy" or more "subtle" but currently they are a bit too in-between, IMHO).
And I am not 100% sure about the ending solo, maybe you could try to use some of the good loops you can find 'round here ;-)
But again, nice song.
Domenico

nice guitar at the start. pretty complex sounding, opening vocals, (song name) gives a nice point of what the song's about and the message becomes more clear obviously when he says "I got drunk on Christmas eve" Although not a TOO rare subject of a song or story, still a good/kind of depressing/funny in a dark humor kind of way. So Then the drums kick in and the song gains a bit more power. The part about leaving his girlfriend is a good addition to the song's composition and the part about Santa passing his house was also going back to that good/kind of depressing/funny in a dark humor kind of way feel to it. Then the second verse, "the ##### was good could have asked for more could of got more on a $10 #####". Also keeping the funny in a dark depressing way/JUST depressing. And boom! back into the chorus, stronger than ever and still really good like before. The lyrics for the bridge "we'll do it all again on new years eve" was great, and then then the powerful electric guitar followed by the lyrics "You're a hoe hoe hoe!" was pretty good as well. And then... there's the sad ending. "I got dumped on Christmas eve".

Well man, it was a great song. Hope to hear more from you if all your work is like this or maybe even better. Hope you didn't actually get dumped on Christmas eve though... THAT... would just #####.

anyway, great song, good job, hope to hear more!
-Jon J