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25th Mar 2013 12:13 - 12 years ago
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Description : Here's a song i've been dwelling on. Because it's a bit cheesy.... I used the acapella by 3v3sound to start with. Then slowly put together a happy/ upbeat/ feel good track. No mastering. Please comment. But more importantly criticize, please do. My only ever goal is to improve my work. So be as harsh as you like to prove your point. I can handle it =).
"your bass is weak," is much more valuable to me than "nice job man".

but! "your bass is weak, Try this..." is helpful too =)

Loops used:

"With Love" (acapella)
https://www.looperman.com/acapellas/detail/3717

"Sexy Strings" (strings?)
https://www.looperman.com/loops/detail/29163

"Happy" (piano)
https://www.looperman.com/loops/detail/37772

"Seed 0810 - Sax Percussion 10" (sax percussion)
https://www.looperman.com/loops/detail/9251

Comments (3)

If you have time take a listen and give RampatheSwift some feedback.

Dubstacular
Dubstacular 26th Mar 2013 23:04 - 12 years ago
Who can say if it's weird because it's made from samples? That's not for me to judge. I think the arrangement is important, and if you are comfortable building from samples, then why not do it? The key of the song isn't that mysterious, by the way. It's easy to tell that something is off when the vocals play during the piano. It just sounds like the two weren't made to be together. Why not try a different piano or different vocals? Also, thanks for your comments about my music. I appreciate that too.
RampatheSwift
RampatheSwift replied 30th Mar 2013 - 12 years ago
You misunderstand me. I meant that this song was made starting with nothing but the acapella, and progressed from that. I had a go at searching for another acapella that suits, but no luck. I shall take this as a hit and miss, but I understand what you mean.. I am so oblivious to the clashing of keys in this song..
Your comments are an eye opener.. I really need to study up on my music theory =\ and knowledge of keys. Thanks for listening. I appreciate your advice and i'll keep an eye out for your next upload.
Mykael
Mykael 26th Mar 2013 21:04 - 12 years ago
Hmmmmmmm....I felt like I was listening to a Mashup rather than a proper song....at times it sounds pop, then cinematic, then possibly a hint of R&B. You might want to rethink where you are trying to go with the tune, and maybe you will be able to strip away the parts that are not in synch with your intention. So, basically I suppose what I'm saying is I don't hear any cohesion. Also, the vocals are not in the same key as the instrumental.

Good luck and keep it going!

Love & Light,

Mykael
RampatheSwift
RampatheSwift replied 30th Mar 2013 - 12 years ago
I see what you mean. It's not a very good structure for a proper song is it.. To be entirely honest, I did not have any true intentions for this track... I was just experimenting i guess.. And I can see why it sounds like a mashup (it is a mashup). If i take away the current vocal the track sounds retarded. If i leave it in the different keys clash. Cohesion, I'll remember this. As for keys, I most definitely need to do some homework and ear training.

I shall not stop at this though. May I ask some of the things you consider, in terms of structure, when writing a song?

I appreciate your honest opinions.

Peace,

Paora
Dubstacular
Dubstacular 26th Mar 2013 00:23 - 12 years ago
I like the music a lot, but the vocals don't go well with it. There are two different musical keys going on, and they clash. You might want to consider different vocals to match the song. Good luck
RampatheSwift
RampatheSwift replied 26th Mar 2013 - 12 years ago
Thanks, I appreciate your opinion. I don't know a lot about keys, but mayb i should get familiar with them. you're good. i just listened to a handful of your tunes. I like the arrangement & progressiveness of them a lot, not to mention the mix is flawless... Is it weird that i made this track from that sample tho?

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